I liked the premise, but it felt like it was written by AI, it was far too ingratiating and self-congratulatory with a lot of repetition towards the end. Like one of those 'don't judge a book by its cover' children's fable, would make for a good nursery rhyme.
@IRBitterSoBАй бұрын
Everybody could hear them speak. If they wore a hat and a bell and a floating name tag saying "Hi, I'm a Dreelack," I'm pretty sure they would have developed relationships with other species. Also, even if all of the matter in their entire body somehow naturally allowed all light in the visible spectrum to pass through it, a large living organism would at least radiate some heat. 20th century Earth has thermal cameras, so I'm sure a multi-species interstellar society would as well. Sorry, I usually have no problem with suspension of disbelief.
@jamesogden7756Ай бұрын
Stop letting ChatGPT read reddit HFY to learn how to write. My God man! Do NOT make me go all Critical Drinker on you.
@user-io6pj8bz8hАй бұрын
Why wouldn't the other races just make ocular implants?
@user-io6pj8bz8hАй бұрын
Marxist garbage. Move on
@StefanSalowskyАй бұрын
So the Dreelack could not interact with the other species because they were in another spectrum of light? Why not simply wear clothes?
@keithyork8226Ай бұрын
What dreadful rubbish! This is the kind of thing we used to write at school when we were about twelve!
@Rebelrocker69Ай бұрын
Anyone else notice that the A.I. voice sounds like Peter Graves? Anyone? Anyone? Bueler? Bueler? Anyone? Lol
@eriksolomon8533Ай бұрын
Fun but ... if everyone already knows about the secret invisible race, how are they secret?
@L337lllV-nj4bsАй бұрын
they are secret because you cant see what they are doing directly. if you need a tool you can only see them in that spot that you have the technology to see them. (this is all circumstantial at best)
@francistaylor1822Ай бұрын
also so you could just get them to wear something. Stupid premise. Also as another poster said '...Stop letting ChatGPT read reddit HFY to learn how to write...''
@L337lllV-nj4bsАй бұрын
@@francistaylor1822 i like the idea but i cant imagine how difficult it would be to get them all to agree to wear a jacket or something just look at the covid mask thing.
@larrythompson8630Ай бұрын
But how could crowd realize there were delacks? It would look like crazy humans.
@jimcottee9187Ай бұрын
The film Director said - "We Humans" - while talking to the disguised aliens. Did she know they were aliens .. and if so, why was she giving our secrets away.?
@user-sj9go1um9tАй бұрын
This is just dumb
@FatherJohnny-oh4dhАй бұрын
Yes, definitely training videos.
@royschultz1377Ай бұрын
if I hear 'diversity and resilience' one more time I'm going to worship the great god Ralph at the porcelain altar.
@bessie1854Ай бұрын
Quintessentially boring.
@driftwolfАй бұрын
It's either stolen from /r/HFY or, more likely, was written by an AI to be used on a bot channel like this one. Just use BlockTube to block the channel. It's what I'll be doing.
@johnnycampbell3422Ай бұрын
AI and its " indomitable diverse unity" message.
@davidhenderson3400Ай бұрын
Indomitable I hate that word
@johnnycampbell3422Ай бұрын
@davidhenderson3400 diverse and unity in the same sentence is what kills me. "The message".
@Vaquero4382Ай бұрын
So the ambassador is from a race of hippie, Peta, wokescolds. Yawn.
@stevesteve8098Ай бұрын
Thank god they did nto go to see 2016 Ghost busters...
@boqndimitrov8693Ай бұрын
ugh!.. ZZZZZZZZZZZ??!again?
@boqndimitrov8693Ай бұрын
the same thing over and over again. well, at least no one attacked earth this time! 😴
@ilikeknives1000Ай бұрын
WRITE US A BETTER ONE
@boqndimitrov8693Ай бұрын
@@ilikeknives1000 anyone could do it.
@jaimeosbourn3616Ай бұрын
@@boqndimitrov8693 Then do so.
@stainmasterzinc9418Ай бұрын
One of these days there HAS to be a story about Soy Bois in their flannel pajamas, drinking hot chocolate and hiding in Safe Places....Meeting an Alien who is ALSO soft, cuddly, but never had a "Safe Place."
@JohnJBrowne11209Ай бұрын
What they call Hell we call home.
@ilikeknives1000Ай бұрын
AND WHERE WE CALL HOME WE CREATE CALM AND WHERE OTHER THREATEN THAT HOME WE CREATE HELL
@timobrien2813Ай бұрын
Zorvax strikes again! Again Zorvax is thwarted! UKUK
@Vaquero43822 ай бұрын
Why the Andromeda Galaxy? Why is the scientist always Martinez or Marquez and never von Schtup, Friedman, Mugabe...
@StephenMaite2 ай бұрын
we are love n peace machines not war machines infect we are Godes
@minsapint80072 ай бұрын
Clever concept for the story. One of my favourites.
@sirtofbaggins42702 ай бұрын
Earth, the eternal crucible.
@bovicecantwin5152 ай бұрын
She got you a click but nut a listen...why am I even commenting...you got me bud
@Aladinscave2 ай бұрын
The gravity of this discovery is immense 🇬🇧
@iSuRRendeReDuK2 ай бұрын
Yawnfest, I`d pass if I was you.
@user-cl4lg8hs4s2 ай бұрын
Bears, lions, and sharks agree. Humans taste good with ketchup. Damn those pesky firearms..
@AresHeroSC2 ай бұрын
What book or series is this from?
@nickandrew46502 ай бұрын
TIL: In the future they forgot how to use punctuation, and there's something called Manga Ropes
@fixfireleo2 ай бұрын
What a fantasy. In truth, if aliens came here, they would encounter people identifying as a lampshade and incapable of arguing their way out of a wet paper bag. They would find an entire Generation so entitled that they will never accomplish anything more than possibly creating a viral video. They would leave in PROFOUND disappointment that, after millions of years of evolution, Humans could DEVOLVE in just a matter of decades.
@lordwinton2 ай бұрын
Who likes crap 💩 like this
@neelroy29182 ай бұрын
Unfortunately this is not a story. This is a scene from a school sitcom played in scifi setting.
@5ak00232 ай бұрын
What show
@thomaspaulfrazier49592 ай бұрын
I love the story content‼️ Consistency in spelling, grammar is the glaring problem that if corrected will bring subscriptions in the hundreds, perhaps thousands‼️ A simple review of the homonyms and synonyms and proof reading will that you tales to the galaxy you write of‼️☮️‼️
@thomaspaulfrazier49592 ай бұрын
I love the story content‼️ Consistency in spelling, grammar is the glaring problem that if corrected will bring subscriptions in the hundreds, perhaps thousands‼️ A simple review of the homonyms and synonyms and proof reading will that you tales to the galaxy you write of‼️☮️‼️
@user-ck7zc6cz5p2 ай бұрын
🐦🔥🐦🔥🐦🔥
@immanutt44422 ай бұрын
FIRST ...
@captainobvious92333 ай бұрын
After you put the prompts in for the stories, add these prompts as well: -Focus on the events and character interactions without summarizing or emphasizing any underlying themes or messages. -Avoid using the words 'Testament' and 'Resilience' (AIs tend to overuses these words) -Emphasize Atmosphere and Setting. And if you want a horror themed story, also add: -Maintain a Dark Tone. -Focus on Horror Elements.
@captainobvious92333 ай бұрын
Good Story, I'd love if you re-did it into a longer story. This is like literally the only 'Alien's Tortured Human Child HFY' story that FINALLY had the victim be a girl. In the several dozen others, they always have the victim be a young boy -sometimes as young as 6 years old - which was not only annoying and repetitive, but started to get a bit disturbing. So yeah, It's a shame when we finally have one feature a girl and it's only 3 minutes long. :( ALSO, you need to adjust the reason behind Sarah's torment. If she is a child, it doesn't make sense that she would be there at the Council to speak out against anything. Maybe one of her parents spoke out and they tortured Sarah for it in retribution instead? And finally, provide an age for Sarah. SO PLEASE, either make a longer more in depth version or do another one with a different plot for the girl's torture. AND FINALLY, since you actually finally used a girl instead of a boy like everyone else does, you earned a subscription.
@TheAxxon3 ай бұрын
Now that was a bit of a shitty story...
@terryhayward79053 ай бұрын
OK, so that is the intro to a story, now where is the story ??????