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@ramjetrth
@ramjetrth 5 сағат бұрын
This would be better without the music in the background.
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity Сағат бұрын
Thank you for your feedback! I'll definitely keep that in mind for future videos. Your suggestions mean a lot-stay tuned for more!
@WingnutJSL
@WingnutJSL 20 сағат бұрын
This story is ok.
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity Сағат бұрын
Thank you for watching and sharing your thoughts! I'll keep working to make the stories even better. Your feedback is appreciated! 😊
@goshring
@goshring Күн бұрын
This was weak and badly structured. Back to SciFi Realm. Their stories are funny and not lamely written. The one thing I cant stand is when a story suddenly reboots a scene but slightly different. Proof read, or proof listen, or whatever.
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity Сағат бұрын
Thank you for taking the time to share your detailed feedback. I really appreciate your honesty and will definitely take your points into consideration to improve the quality of my content. Your support means a lot, and I’ll work harder to bring you better-structured stories in the future!😊
@geofthompson3844
@geofthompson3844 Күн бұрын
How many times are you going to repeat the same thing? This is dreadful.
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity Сағат бұрын
Thank you for your honest feedback! I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. I'll work on reducing repetition and improving the content in future videos. Your input helps me grow-thanks for watching!😊
@GaisaSanktejo
@GaisaSanktejo Күн бұрын
Not too fond of the story style. The AI and voice generator weren't as good as some I have come across... This could have been a good story, the excessive roundabout repetitiveness and time filling just annoyed me. I would say "who would be stupid enough to take a deadly super-predator out of it's natural habitat"? but that would be a dumb question, since humanity's done their fair share of dumb shit, and it seems the aliens in this.. couch.. "story" are no better, and after all that crap, they blame the predator and wanna kill it because it follows its nature? yeah. dumb. If I were in Alex's shoes, I'd tell the idiots' to send it home and don't invade it's territory!
@SaboiniassecretNet
@SaboiniassecretNet Күн бұрын
Cool 😎
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity 19 сағат бұрын
Glad you liked it 😎. Stay tuned for more awesome content! 🚀
@michaellinnet6095
@michaellinnet6095 2 күн бұрын
This was so full of repetitive BS that it hurts.
@flannelshirtdad
@flannelshirtdad 2 күн бұрын
Too much reiterating to stretch the story. Difficult to keep listening.
@jimjaskiewicz8869
@jimjaskiewicz8869 2 күн бұрын
It's not they It's him
@skyward711
@skyward711 2 күн бұрын
Pleas don't start using stupid sounding music in the background it's like being on the phone in a quew
@steveriley6458
@steveriley6458 2 күн бұрын
halfway through and this is one of the worst AI written stories I've heard lately. Bad, y'all.
@GimmieTheGaff
@GimmieTheGaff Күн бұрын
Bless your heads up, I moved on.
@alexblankenship7831
@alexblankenship7831 2 күн бұрын
I want a story where there is paranormal activity, i want to know what can happen through the eyes of someone, also it would be funny because immagine an alien actually coming to earth and finding out we have spirits that haunt houses, those spirits are usually evil being demonic in origin
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity 2 күн бұрын
Wow! This idea is absolutely next level! 👀 A story where aliens and paranormal spirits collide, and with a funny twist? Mind-blowing concept! 😂 It would be hilarious to see the alien’s reaction when they find out humans have a culture of 'haunted houses' and demonic spirits. This could definitely make for an epic story! 🙌 Your comment is super inspiring-might try something interesting based on this. Thanks for sharing such a brilliant thought! 😊
@katelong
@katelong 2 күн бұрын
Cliffhanger... :(
@semmel_PB
@semmel_PB 3 күн бұрын
Total BS story...collapsing a black hole into a stable wormhole....
@LC-lw4vy
@LC-lw4vy 3 күн бұрын
Ok the story needs a lot of work.
@gustavoarzaga1679
@gustavoarzaga1679 3 күн бұрын
If i was Carter i would of call earth for reinforcements of military and scientists and when the human ship arrives tranfer to the scientists ship continue researching and have the military ships guard them from the counsels interference
@michalwintz7083
@michalwintz7083 3 күн бұрын
A great story thank you. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity 3 күн бұрын
Thanks for listening
@Sattrax
@Sattrax 3 күн бұрын
Look out! Behind you!
@LivingSimply1913
@LivingSimply1913 3 күн бұрын
He, she, it.....or are they all possessed? Human bodies are single occupancy. Lose the 'they/their' for everything.
@jamesroyce1845
@jamesroyce1845 3 күн бұрын
I don't mind that this is written by AI that has no concept of continuity in story telling but its use of incorrect pronouns is bloody annoying.
@jamesroyce1845
@jamesroyce1845 3 күн бұрын
Nah, I couldn't stand to sit through the plural pronoun rubbish repeated over and over again. Sorry guys, sort it out or leave it out completely.
@3amcookup
@3amcookup 4 күн бұрын
Is there a part 4?
@sam11182
@sam11182 4 күн бұрын
Directly is a very good indicator that they are not looking behind them
@michaelpettersson4919
@michaelpettersson4919 4 күн бұрын
There are some spooky videos of cats staring intensely at NOTHING. It is just like they can see something we can not. Except some "gifted" humans claim to be able to see things. A story could have a backstory similar to this where the few psychic humans become in high demand. But in lack of human psychics aliens start to pick up cats as a alternative detective systems. As a secondary bonus the cats work as mousers (alien mice) and as companions. It is worth the new ghost detectors habit of topple equipment of tables, taking naps on computer input devices and increased need of cleaning due to cat hair.
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity 4 күн бұрын
Wow, that's such an interesting idea! 😄 The concept of cats being alternative ghost detectors and companions for aliens is both spooky and creative. I can totally picture those 'psychic detective' cats causing chaos by toppling equipment and napping on keyboards! 🐾 Thanks for sharing such a unique story idea-definitely something worth exploring further!
@michaelpettersson4919
@michaelpettersson4919 4 күн бұрын
@SciFiHumanity Be my guest. 👻 Came to think of it. Star Trek DS9 had the Jem Hadar with personal stealth fields to make them invisible. So if "ghosts" are unwanted enemies that can make themselves invisible but seen by cats would work as well.
@beccabbea2511
@beccabbea2511 3 күн бұрын
​@SciFiHumanity Boxes, you need boxes. Cats love boxes. When I had cats, I had a box next to the computer, they loved that box. After investigating the keyboard, the desk and receiving the demanded attention they would curl up in the box and sleep for a while, then repeat the process. Perhaps you could have a quantum box and the cat could sleep in several realities at once. 😂
@s.r.howell1297
@s.r.howell1297 4 күн бұрын
It doesn't work.
@nancyjanzen5676
@nancyjanzen5676 4 күн бұрын
Alex is one person not a plural. AI should be taught using a plural for one person is offensive to some people.
@lightlegion_
@lightlegion_ 4 күн бұрын
Your content is amazing! Please keep it coming!
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity 4 күн бұрын
Thank you so much for your kind words! 😊 Your support means a lot to me and motivates me to create even better content. Stay tuned for more amazing videos! 🙌
@RayRatchford
@RayRatchford 4 күн бұрын
A good idea, but executed very patchil6, and with the usual repetition of whole sections.
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity 4 күн бұрын
Thank you for your honest feedback! I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. I'll definitely work on improving execution and avoiding repetition in future content. Your input helps me grow-thanks again!
@glassmask9778
@glassmask9778 4 күн бұрын
A lot of story beat repeat over and over. Was this written by ai?
@Sagano96
@Sagano96 4 күн бұрын
seems like it :/
@tamarlindsay8382
@tamarlindsay8382 6 күн бұрын
Reads like AI.
@Shoey77100
@Shoey77100 6 күн бұрын
blah, blah, blah
@gcanaday1
@gcanaday1 7 күн бұрын
All tell, no show.
@GuusRenirie
@GuusRenirie 7 күн бұрын
Too much 3rd person
@AnthonyRodriguez-om6id
@AnthonyRodriguez-om6id 11 күн бұрын
Interesting story. I feel the human will go back to his superiors and say how easily manipulated these creatures can be and eventually the humans will try to conquer them too. I feel the aliens in this come across a little one dimensional. They’re all about strength but somehow one of their greatest warriors is thwarted by a human diplomat? They don’t have prey on their world that can turn? Also how do they have a scientist alien if they only focus on strength? I feel there’s a little more complex character building needed here to understand these aliens better.
@jpatchin7405
@jpatchin7405 11 күн бұрын
This story sucks
@eriolduterion8855
@eriolduterion8855 12 күн бұрын
this is EXTREMELY poor as to knowledge of science, basic military structure, basic military strategy and tactics, especially typical Naval warfare, and especially poorly constructed as a story.
@mrt6874
@mrt6874 14 күн бұрын
who/what is the author/source of this story? and why do you have to spam this annoying bell sound throughout the whole reading, makes me even less want to subscribe to this??!
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity 13 күн бұрын
Thank you for your feedback! You made a good point. I'll work on reducing the bell sound to improve the viewing experience. Your feedback is always welcome! And if you have any other suggestions,
@f.k.burnham8491
@f.k.burnham8491 16 күн бұрын
This video does not match the title..
@annejohnson491
@annejohnson491 15 күн бұрын
This happens often.
@danielcowan4901
@danielcowan4901 20 күн бұрын
Humans avoiding war? Good luck with that.
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity 19 күн бұрын
Thanks for Watching..
@danielcowan4901
@danielcowan4901 18 күн бұрын
@@SciFiHumanity no worries. Thanks for the video.
@parrot849
@parrot849 20 күн бұрын
Very entertaining story but towards the end as the leaders of the coalition contemplated their defeat, the narrative became a bit repetitive. Just kinda saying the same thoughts by injecting new different words to repeat the message. But on the whole, a very good sci-fi story.
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity 20 күн бұрын
Thank you for your feedback! I’m glad you found the story entertaining overall. I appreciate your insight about the ending - it's helpful to know where the repetition stood out, as it wasn’t intentional. I'll definitely keep an eye on maintaining a unique flow for such scenes in future stories. Thanks again for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts! 😊
@grandfather3710
@grandfather3710 22 күн бұрын
Yeah I only got 5 minutes before I had to.leave, the audio A.I. is terrible
@rowdyharger2799
@rowdyharger2799 22 күн бұрын
Not often I go onto a part 2, enjoying it very much. Thanks😊
@SciFiHumanity
@SciFiHumanity 19 күн бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it
@lyrigageforge3259
@lyrigageforge3259 24 күн бұрын
Please even one emote sign or what ever those are supposed to be called these days, for say in one sentence long a comment is mostly more than the one too many, cause multiple readars will have to endure them. So kinly stop addig the more juvenile than childish flash flood barrage of them atop of each line, use a darn emty line if you can't force one liners without them. Its boringly distactive, like endles supply of stickers all over some baby-pink for the curse word worse than fecking wearing pre- teens school note book filled with such and anything else except subject study relevant notes in any script clear enough to even later be used for the actual purpose, given all the unnecessary crap plastered on set pages and such poor quality hand script it's very writer can't even read their own handwriting. Shortly, too many signs aka emotes of any kind defeat the whole purpose of them and generate deeply sickened audiences. It just seems so peppy it feels like that high side of something bipolar, an frankly, there for healthwise concerning. The thing is - that story does not sound half band -- but the delivery is audiences repelling. When those American tuber instructors so stress enthusiastic and excited delivery, I feel right now like this here is the, potentially second kind of miss understanding or just out right exaggeration of an example more on either getting it wrong or just, well not understanding why Walmart failed in for example Germany, because in part the demands they set for customer service behavior seemed culturally just creepy there. I mean that world has billions of people and US just like 340 million only - to put it bluntly, rest of the world does not reply 'fine' because someone asked them 'how are you' for the hello... even if we know they do and can play the uncaring friendly too. Except when we decide some decent trolling for tradition and national pride is in order and utterly empty our private troubles and challenges onto the person so very nice to offer and lent the ear. You may just recieve what you ask for, winky wink. Still... Excessive use of totally meaningless aka void of purpose emotes along the lenght of a video is head ache endorsing, because some of us would actually try to read some meaning out of you hieroclyphes... seriously sometimes ancient Egyptian looks more logical... First similar example being those revolting Tubers who literally scream getting excited over literally no reasons despite the topick being interesting, to the point of looking and sounding as if they were over acting their emotions and reactions all. The main term used being 'over acting' as in NOT GIVING A HONEST AND TRUE REACTION. Acting means not real or true, if it needs to be cast out of iron for here. And going over top with anything about anything at any time for any reasons - means that there is something either atention seeking -like OR missleading sort about it - or you just got freaking enough like me here. Just like that time when a Bibble peddler had, as he claimed, been precisely seeking for non-local language speakers to talk to them about Jesus, using English, when you just told them, that you do not speak enough the local tongue to understand even what they just mumbled once you opened that door... which also was true enough, I really do not speak the local tongue of my husbands people, as I am a migrant here and we have other common means of communicating aka English, its the world tongue anyhow. As for that over smooth exchange for English and their words as described literally... So creepy sleak that I chose to change toungue on them once more, into my native one - so rare thatif they could handle it well in that case they woyld also have to realize it comes from culture where honesty is highest form of politiness - explaining to them safely though, that I really do not speak the local and in refusing to use my significantly good enough English... I was actually being very hosbitable and polite, because, if I'd actually bothered to take up their challenge, their very faith would not survive the meassure of my actual knowledge about the topic. Obviously rolling my eyes, before adding in English that it was useles to try the 'other and poorly edited fantasy book' at our door, because Lord of the rings is hundreds of times more logically and henche plausibly written... oh, and not to play that trick either where they await a specific number of months as if respecting the request to never show up before sending a couple of new faces as if from some other group or church... like we normal people weren't aware of their silly little attempts of avoiding those rules about respecting peoples set demands to stay away. Not making sense? Just saying, as a woman, while also fake excitedly screaming male Tubers, never mind the topick, are totally intolerable, it is definately way worse when you find one of those non-voice-trained female ones whose voice is far too high pitched causing similar reactions within our non-existent souls as nails on the blackboard, worse even when they arent't just pretending at being excited, but when the act as if being all cute while at it too. The main word being again 'act cute' = being fakely cute, where it comes to the voice. Note ladies - our western men DO NOT LIKE acting like anything, including supposedly cute, something about making the skin crawl... and frankly I quite support that dislike cause st behavior is not real you. Banzee would likely sound more tolerable with time going on and on about the 'annoying show'. Making the point clear yet? Only imagine if evry one of the words in my LOOONG comment came with an emote. Yeet the use of all these and more😮🎉😂❤😮😅😊😢😂❤😂🎉😢😅😅😢😂 - cause they lost all the meaning being used so much. Pls, they just add to feeling annoyed, cause there is enough reasons in this gendre to feel just that, because of all the other realy shitty quality of AI ski-fi shit hitthing the fan far too often these days, just saying and do not get too upset over wee bit of colourful expression, cause atleast this story does not sound like some of that crap. I mean, if you are selling high fashion on the cat walk, you do not need to hire the local adult bar dancers to perform on dance poles to show of the clothes on them to get that media attention. Pls, just good narration of a decent story by actually capable author or hobby writer is enough. PS. No need to nag over typos, I am on a tablet which consistently attemps at correcting me wrong cause the spell check is based on tongue not even related to English and using most infuriating sort of keyboard ever aka a curesed tuch screen device, I refuse to try to fix this because I can barely see the size of those letters and am tired as hell with this pokey poke style way of writing... help I miss an actual keyboard.. what to give to get all 10 fingers back in action! Giggles! Yea, notice emotes ought to be actually written, that would reduce their unnecessary usage astronomically. We know how to feel without them and if the channel owner has something to say... well you got the platform for your words or can actually comment too. Just cut the emote circus, ty - or your video falls over the blade edge of being about a story to what ever and anything more, bit like hinted above.
@bradmiller6023
@bradmiller6023 28 күн бұрын
I don't know the pizza delivery guy is no where near as terrifying as KAREN'S. why not wright about the KAREN'S
@shanebraden8482
@shanebraden8482 29 күн бұрын
STOP! With the climate change.
@larrym3488
@larrym3488 Ай бұрын
BS story. Repeat, rinse, repeat... Tired of the duplicity and moronic stature.
@tonynelligan1930
@tonynelligan1930 Ай бұрын
not really into the voice sorry also the image is a little cartoonie? like it was meant for a 10 year old. not a bad story get used to issues through why they have issues i don't know.