INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY. What will the look be? "The Joker" or "Lipstick on a pig?" Word Dancer STABS her lips with the lipstick.

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"Yeah, well, that's like... your opinion, man."

This is really a great teacher of screenwriting. I'm a novelist trying to transition to screenwriting. A screenwriter hurt my feelings by saying I was a great novelist but a terrible screenwriter. I mean, did I want him to lie to me? I'm not giving up; she, the teacher mentioned above, is a tremendous help.

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I write how people talk. In an everyday conversation people mis-pronounce they use slang, they use “is” they do everything the wrong way that we learn. You can’t write a dialogue the way you write a paper for a grade. Write as if you and an imaginary friend are sitting down having a conversation about whatever is taking place in the story at that moment.

Best video on screenplay writing that I've ever seen! Thank you! Can't wait to start this new journey!!!

The hero's journey beats are so oddly specific. It would take the wind out of me if I am writing just to hit every specific beat of this formula instead of just organically coming up with what happens next.

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I dunno, many people irl just revels in being evil. Putin, the China leader whose name I cannot mention. The cop who knee'd George Floyd to death, right wingers who harass Sandy Hook victims. They have no reason to be evil besides the fact that they can and they feel powerful being able to control the lives of others.

After having a successful play in the community threatre, I wrote the screen play to go with it, and I have a friend that works in Hollywood on Grays Anatomy. He said he would read it and see what other people thought. Ps.I like all the videos you have. Very helpful. Thank you.

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Ok haven't finished the vid yet I'm at 6:51 most of things i sort of agree with but the crowded no cause yes most of the movie isolation but for like a ending or opening i like to do something big like scream 6 quiet place day one so cool like a action scene with so much suspense. Plus unknown is better you can't reveal too much or it's just bad and leaves no imagination And there's so much real to that real killers

Great video- thank you x

Thank you so much. I’m a Children’s book writer but I have several ideas for movies. This really helped me get started on my ideas.

I personally like InteriorDay or Fade In! but trelby is my favorite

Word Dancer sits at a makeup table and slathers a tube of lipstick on and around her mouth and eyelids

HITLER-40’s anal about his appearance, epitomizing his need for control everything and everyone in an attempt to mask his hate driven mental illness.

INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY Word Dancer piles on the excess makeup. 2 sets of blinding Octopus lights her only fans.

I've never used Voice Over until recently. I used it in a short horror script.

not sure if you still check your comments since you haven't made content in a while but you just earned yourself a subscriber!

how to select a gripping script as a producer.

Excellent video!! Readability is one of my huge pet peeves in analysis!!

A remake of Herman's Head, an old TV show

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Didn’t realize it until I watched your analysis, but Legally Blonde could be the template on how to write a screenplay story structure & arc that sells the studio and the audience for almost any other idea.

Awesome.

Thank you for all the squirrel edits! lol

Books: Syd field: screenplay Robert McKee: Story Blake Synder: save the cat

Good video! Helpful info!

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Omg, someone who actually SHOWS themselves making a pitch. Most just talk blah blah blah. It's so hard to watch an example pitch being presented. Thank you, great work

I am an 80 year old retired construction supervisor living in the small Caribbean island Antigua. The most l want to do now is script writing. I listen to hundreds of other people talk about script writing and as a beginner get confused and turned off by most of them. As for you lady l could listen forever. You are simply the best. Thanks.

This is such a great movie.great video.very helpful

Great video.very informative

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HITLER, in his 60’s. Usually in controlled anger with military precision and stubbornness, loses his posture because of a mistake that is heavy enough to break character

Screaming recriminations at rigid sweating sycophants standing at the foot of the table, ADOLF HITLER-thinning dark hair, toothbrush mustache, wild eyes-punctuates his rage with jerky arm movements, nearly flinging himself out of his own chair. A narcissist driven to the edge of insanity by the failure of his subordinates to lay world domination at his feet.

Writing a script in hopes it gets picked up by a good director. If my script is followed correctly it could be a box office hit.

Thanks so much, I olmost finish mine!

KIller banana was a twist, ok, well played.

By now, I don't know how much I owe you. How can we reach you these days?

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You're amazing!

I always assumed a Spec Script by Hollywood standards meant a script of an already running show that a new writer writes to get a job....here you means any original script by a first-time writer?

This is so helpful! Thank you. ❤

You cannot get an A list actor without a budget in place.

This was so helpfull, thank you!

This video hits me at an opportune time. I just got word that my book (true auto-bio of being in a Thai prison) is being considered by a big time movie maker. With encouragement from your video, I'm going to offer to write a spec script. E-book's title: '1 Pill = 28 Years'

I love all your video, simply make me understand the game of screenwriting