First they are called "Krone" and then in the next sentence they are the "Crumbs". Piss off and stop wasting my time
@ssnerd5833 күн бұрын
shockwaves do not ripple through space
@N7cmder2 күн бұрын
Actually they can
@ssnerd5833 күн бұрын
....well....there's that 'cacophony' word, again, at 1:43......there's the tell.
@Vaquero43823 күн бұрын
How do you corner someone in a "narrow" star system?
@morrisanderson8184 күн бұрын
Another woke
@873984 күн бұрын
A true ghost rider in the sky
@labelledamedumanor48764 күн бұрын
Just 1 problem here, the subtitles include misspelled words.
@Hfystoryworld4 күн бұрын
Okay we will resolve it❗
@348joey4 күн бұрын
Doubt that picture is yours, and no, you can't say a fictional story is for "educational purposes". You couldn't be bothered to even fit all the words on the screen or keep a consistent spelling for a planet's name that's mentioned more than twelve times.
@348joey4 күн бұрын
"en route" "and wrote" Could've at least written the captions rather than using bad speech to text.
@fbi8055 күн бұрын
Fuck me, these ai stories suck. My 5 year old makes more sense when she tells her stories.
@barrygann37616 күн бұрын
You mispronounced words but outside of that this is a damn good story
@labelledamedumanor48764 күн бұрын
You mean misspelled?
@TheLunacyofOurTimes6 күн бұрын
hang in the balance, unwavering resolve. Get away from HFY for a while. Read classic scifi from the 1950s and 60's. Quit using common AI phrases.
@raincoast90106 күн бұрын
It has that soulless word salad computer generated feel to it.
@TheLunacyofOurTimes5 күн бұрын
@@raincoast9010 Yeah but I think it's human written, by someone infected with watching a hundred actual AI slop videos. Getting some real classic stories in would fix that quick.
@user-zp9lg6sq7s7 күн бұрын
What is a narrow star system? Explosions in space are not a threat unless you get hit by shrapnel. This is just more revenue harvesting crap
@jan80trs7 күн бұрын
Quintus Fabius Maximus Verrucosus, surnamed Cunctator (c. 280 - 203 BC), was a Roman statesman and general of the third century BC. His derisive nickname, Cunctator, "the delayer", refers to the strategy that he employed against Hannibal's forces during the Second Punic War. Facing an outstanding commander with superior numbers, he pursued a then-novel strategy of evading a pitched battle, and accepting only smaller engagements on favourable ground. As a result, he is regarded as the originator of many tactics used in guerrilla warfare. Despite several victories, Hannibal had very few results to show for after 16 years of war in Italy. He left for Africa, and 'Cunctator' became a honored title in Rome. It helps to look back in history to find a good strategy. ;-)
@paulshri86097 күн бұрын
Good story...awesome pic ❤
@stanvalentine18397 күн бұрын
Thank you for the real voice!
@alexhu7657 күн бұрын
One of the best stories I heard in a long time 👍 👍
@gramrairerr7437 күн бұрын
How many times do you have to repeat the same words, over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over
@isharathedragon23128 күн бұрын
yeah, you would think as part of turning it into a museum piece they would remove all the ammo from the ship
@aarondizor10698 күн бұрын
Thanks for this wonderful sci-fi Story!!! I enjoyed the strory.
@Hfystoryworld7 күн бұрын
Thanks for listening
@andrewhardage65618 күн бұрын
Yeah it's a nice piece of revenge. But these so called Soran conquerors that are so goddamned smart should have seen right through a derelict "human made" battleship completely armed to the teeth with a vengeful AI to boot; all in order to grace the halls of their museum and avenge dead humans....
@fbi8059 күн бұрын
So this story literally demotes the human military leader from Vice Admiral at he beginning of the story to commander at the end. It sure would be nice if you actually reviewed your own stories before posting them on KZbin. AI stories are so boring and literally not imaginative
@jimsavage1477 күн бұрын
In the first sentence he is introduced as a former Admiral. You certainly have a lot to say for someone who doesn't know how to read
@ainnunyabidniz6 күн бұрын
@@jimsavage147 The one telling the story, the one introduced at the beginning of the story, is a former whatever from the alien fleet, not the human. The human military leader mentioned in the story was a woman and she was a Commodore from beginning to end.
@ainnunyabidniz6 күн бұрын
@@jimsavage147i enjoy correcting people who attempt to correct someone else while being wrong, themselves 😁
@James-xu7lb9 күн бұрын
Haven't met our Resident & Kumala yet I guess.😂
@davecaskey4299 күн бұрын
As usual piss poor Ai and the volume went away about 2/3 of the way through the story
@ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc10 күн бұрын
Story is repetitious and feels incomplete. So the aliens won. What happened next. I presume the aliens having what they wanted and the humans having lost had an armistice. Something along the lines of what happened in the korean war. Maybe not a fractious as that situation is. But I doubt humans forgave the aliens or had much tolerance for them afterwards. There would be an established border with mines drones and more warships esp on the human side .The aliens probably had a lot of warships on their side at first as the armistice dragged on and there was no sign of any violation on the human side they withdrew most of theirs while the humans built bases and built more warships much more sophisticated ones based on the reverse engineered tech from the aliens. It has been 30 years and probably the humans have caught up to the aliens by now in numbers and tech and could probably invade and beat them but choose not to. More than likely the humans have expanded their territory in another direction away from these aliens. Remember the human fleet was destroyed. It seems Bailey surrendered at the end as she survived and that is laudable. Things would have been much worse if she and her troops had all been killed. Humanity would not have forgiven that. But I doubt the humans would have been as forgiving as the story author said regardless. The humans likely have expanded their empire in other directions. Humans do not like to lose and I would not have the optimism the story author has. If I had written this story the humans would have had a tense border with the Draconids and likely be ahead militarily and technologically at this point. I would not have had them attack the Draconids. I would have had a common threat appear and the humans would have to decide if they could put their past resentment of the Draconids aside and help them or let them be eaten up by this threat and then taken it on by themselves.. That would have made for a much more compelling story imo.
@ghostpatriot237010 күн бұрын
The stories are becoming repetitive and weak plot lines. This story was just bad
@michaeltrent272610 күн бұрын
The same things being said over and over
@jamespseaman413610 күн бұрын
Story told twice? Why?
@grantgunz10 күн бұрын
"Peace cannot be kept by force; it can only be achieved by understanding." - Albert Einstein. 3000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!
@felixw871111 күн бұрын
nothing like the title
@djdark112 күн бұрын
Magastructure!!!! Magastructure!!!
@jackd703212 күн бұрын
Be honest buddy, with that opening? This story was written by chatgpt not you.
@hilmaallen130212 күн бұрын
That face that the narrator cannot pronounce megastructure is disgraceful.
@Fuilleverte13 күн бұрын
Wait... a MAGA structure. Did someone freeze Trump? Or is it a clone like the boys from Brazil?
@nickbreen28714 күн бұрын
3 mins in and it makes no sense.
@antsquirly765414 күн бұрын
The AI needs to learn how to read.
@RNMSC15 күн бұрын
So the AI got told to fill 22 min or so and did so by repeating blocks of the story eh? Cute.
@RNMSC15 күн бұрын
And the story doesn't run to completion. Was he successful, did one of the council get involved and throw sand in the works to prevent humans from joining them by making it take longer than a month? The world will never know...
@user-px2sn8pr5t15 күн бұрын
edit err
@markschneider881521 күн бұрын
Carter should have mentioned the new weapon during the debrief, instead of bringing it up as an afterthought later. Dummy!
@mysticdragonwolf8921 күн бұрын
There’s no sound
@CryptidsRoost24 күн бұрын
ChatGPT written and AI/TTS narrated. If you are going to use tts, please please choose a voice that pronounces words correctly. There are SOOOO many that was misproniunced! Bomb-bers! WTF!!
@timb732825 күн бұрын
As the aliens landed one walked out and seen a Dove fly by...it yelled....ACK ACK ACK and pulled out a laser gun and incinerated the Dove....lol
@FeralPreacher26 күн бұрын
Do the principals of HFY Story really believe that Earth would call a newly developed colony "New TERROR"? Are the people (AI BOTS) so inane that they expect that readers would accept this insult? You talk about "ponds" of the Council. Did you really mean "Pawns", or is this another insult? Good story, ruined by the printed words shown.
@sthavoc826 күн бұрын
Dump the bot and read it yourself. I have listened to enough bastardized English !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@michaeltrent272627 күн бұрын
Really you need to get a new captioning system
@cseale6128 күн бұрын
You keep saying races, but I think you mean species.
@phoboskittym8500Ай бұрын
I have played this game 3 times
@KseudonymАй бұрын
It's tagged Reddit but has no link to the story, probably stolen.
@alpha2gproject783Ай бұрын
Starting to notice a pattern with these short stories...massive battle, loss, star killer. Pretty much the same process for a dozen stories.
@AliceI7764Ай бұрын
I agree with you, and a lot of the dialogue and terminology is identical from story to story. The battle is won , but the war is far from over. That particular phrase is embedded at least three or four times in every single story that I've listened to. The other thing that irritates me is humanity is honestly betrayed not as we really are. Humanity is relentless.It never gives up humanities the savior of the galaxy blah blah blah. What would be nice is something that portrays humanity a little more realistically.
@ghostshadow904627 күн бұрын
stories are AI generated and some are just copied. sometimes they don't even change title
@oquillo25 күн бұрын
@@AliceI7764 You mean we dont have "indomitable will" like I heard?