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@danaprall3743
@danaprall3743 6 сағат бұрын
Lots of "determination" in this story
@RobertMattison-pp6uf
@RobertMattison-pp6uf 7 сағат бұрын
This story was okay.
@dirkschmidt2276
@dirkschmidt2276 14 сағат бұрын
shovel- bay???
@rippedlimbo7884
@rippedlimbo7884 14 сағат бұрын
fucking AI
@krowodom5719
@krowodom5719 18 сағат бұрын
No love, only battle.
@randomstranger9674
@randomstranger9674 18 сағат бұрын
Next time, get a narrator who doesn't pronounce a hyphen as 'minus'. Your subtitles are also useless. There are a ton of low effort poor quality robo narration channels, and this one is as mediocre as any of them. And: We're facing an unknown enemy - we aren't going down without a fight. You've already accepted that you're going down, then? Hell of a motivational speech.
@Shannon-Smith
@Shannon-Smith Күн бұрын
I gotta say, I absolutely love this story. It's gotta be written by a guy because being wanted like that is every guy's desire!
@captainobvious9233
@captainobvious9233 Күн бұрын
You said this story is Written and Own By You? So why did you choose to use a little boy as the victim when there are already hundreds of 'Human Child Tortured by Galactic Empire But His Grandfather's Ancient Fleet Saved the Day' ? Why did you not decide to be original and refreshing and for just once make the child a GIRL and do something new? Seeing Human Child Tortured by Galactic Empire But HER Grandfather's Ancient Fleet Saved the Day' when be a sight for sore eyes. So tired of the same stories being repeated over and over again with the same genders and names.
@robertabraham6456
@robertabraham6456 Күн бұрын
very poor reader AI !!
@andyflannigan6432
@andyflannigan6432 Күн бұрын
Terrible.
@DataStorm1
@DataStorm1 Күн бұрын
TLDR: Its a shit AI story, with lots of repeats and no logic or good narrative. It holds the cake tho, it repeats like 10x the same up to the end, with nothing to end the story. If you have no concept of a lie, then you can't make a reliable lie-detector. How can you invent something for something that isn't a thing in your experience, have effects to measure, subjects that DO lie and can verify and calibrate such etc. And this is absolute shite, the story repeats parts of itself a dozen times, Why is an interrogator going to engineering etc when there is a full complement of his race doing that and probably higher ranking involved. Not his job, not his turf, he'd be informed outside on key points or sending messages, and someone outside observing etc, not stopping interrogation on this for near any reason. And then the claim of "fair use". Fair use is CRITIQUE or other coverage where you show a tiny part and then analyse this. Claiming this means you don't own copyright, so some /r/HFY story got regurgitated thru an AI rewrite that failed beyond repair, and then thru an AI voice. That's doing nothing on fair use.
@jan42725
@jan42725 Күн бұрын
if it was a culture where lying was unheard of.... why did they have lie detectors ready? why would they even invent such a device?
@hunter9431
@hunter9431 Күн бұрын
3 v 3 but picking off enemies with pinpoint accuracy….so AI can’t count, got it
@djdark1
@djdark1 Күн бұрын
Does every paragraph need a title?
@v65dreamer
@v65dreamer 2 күн бұрын
Anyone else wondering why NONE of the alien ships could be reactivated and simply flown back to Earth to have its secrets studied ?
@digitalexcavators535
@digitalexcavators535 2 күн бұрын
AI content….
@noelcross5274
@noelcross5274 2 күн бұрын
Devara = Devourer !!!! you think
@lifelongconservative3338
@lifelongconservative3338 2 күн бұрын
Where did the Iridians disappear to??
@kennethabagis8392
@kennethabagis8392 2 күн бұрын
It keeps repeating .
@anthonystark3959
@anthonystark3959 2 күн бұрын
Humanity is disease Alien is the cure
@rastifan7863
@rastifan7863 3 күн бұрын
Ai trash of the first order.
@davecaskey429
@davecaskey429 3 күн бұрын
In this day and age why can the AI not pronunciate words properly wtf?
@sohara76
@sohara76 3 күн бұрын
A good story but nothing to do with the title.
@Fuilleverte
@Fuilleverte 3 күн бұрын
Why is there no test no puzzle or word game? The answer wouldn't need to be provided but the test itself would give a philosophical puzzle for the listener/reader.
@chinopersaud1442
@chinopersaud1442 3 күн бұрын
Na the whole story is no good
@t.n.-js6ei
@t.n.-js6ei 3 күн бұрын
No, its not even THAT good. And what's a poultry system, I didn't know that alien chickens achieved space flight?
@davecaskey429
@davecaskey429 3 күн бұрын
Decent story but the AI is retarded
@celestekent1236
@celestekent1236 3 күн бұрын
Your AI is dreadful. Find a different one and try again.
@jiplix
@jiplix 3 күн бұрын
Very poor naration and story
@KeithChastney
@KeithChastney 3 күн бұрын
A good story, but you kept repeating the phrase "the smallest and weakest race" in reference to Humanity - slightly insulting.
@matsunagast6218
@matsunagast6218 3 күн бұрын
I think this story is being written by AI
@evanmcclellan8328
@evanmcclellan8328 3 күн бұрын
Cool story but large portions of it are totally ai generated. The inclusion of ecological conservation and excessive definitions of coloquial terms are give aways.
@evanmcclellan8328
@evanmcclellan8328 3 күн бұрын
But I really like sci fi like this. You could make a video on your stategies of prompting ai
@user-ym1pf4lz3h
@user-ym1pf4lz3h 3 күн бұрын
that and it's a shit story.
@opposition22
@opposition22 3 күн бұрын
"There's no way, humanity was winning the war" and then like 10 minutes later. Apparently humanity was on the verge of Extinction and resorting to a desperate measures
@jiplix
@jiplix 3 күн бұрын
poor
@elmo1639
@elmo1639 4 күн бұрын
Hmmm🤔
@ChadLetourneaurhavoc
@ChadLetourneaurhavoc 4 күн бұрын
More Stupid AI Crap
@brian770
@brian770 4 күн бұрын
love the story, great delivery, just sounds a bit "chipper"
@HFYSTORyExpedition
@HFYSTORyExpedition 4 күн бұрын
Why do you think so?
@andrewschultz2504
@andrewschultz2504 4 күн бұрын
Good video sir there are a lot of variables involved. My two road kings require vastly different pressure. The ABS model requires less pressure on the front brake. I agree practice is important and you definitely spend quite a bit of time doing it so it would definitely help you be quicker there are other reasons for covering your front brake and just be quicker. One reason for covering from break is for trail breaking. I live in the mountains and often times the house would be prepared for trail breaking. Another reason to cover the front brake is different grades and surface conditions require different brakes to be used Coming down the hill off road your rear brake would be almost useless Going up the hill sometimes your rear brake is more effective than your front off road
@lanedixon7262
@lanedixon7262 4 күн бұрын
If only this could become true. Thanks for this one!
@Alice-ng2po
@Alice-ng2po 5 күн бұрын
Slow down on reading sentences.
@Alice-ng2po
@Alice-ng2po 5 күн бұрын
Need to stop properly and pause properly.
@pratikmohite6202
@pratikmohite6202 5 күн бұрын
too many word burgers
@XolaresTiberius
@XolaresTiberius 5 күн бұрын
🤦‍♂️ So many errors......... lmao!
@cab8866
@cab8866 5 күн бұрын
A better editor is greatly needed. Correct pronunciation of words would be helpful.
@PeterStarr-x4h
@PeterStarr-x4h 5 күн бұрын
learn English
@EdVILLA-vb1xs
@EdVILLA-vb1xs 5 күн бұрын
What’s a “Humworld” planet of singers?
@catharinapacke9205
@catharinapacke9205 5 күн бұрын
The story is not long,but repaet
@adamstone4780
@adamstone4780 5 күн бұрын
Yay first
@dnixon8767
@dnixon8767 5 күн бұрын
Repeat, repeat and repeat
@user-vc4mm2ml8t
@user-vc4mm2ml8t 5 күн бұрын
IV is not "iv". IV is 4
@randomstranger9674
@randomstranger9674 5 күн бұрын
The subtitles are comically bad. I don't know whether the storywas written by a human but it feels typical of the AI generated pulp so many robo narrators use, with cliche piled on cliche in every scene.
@MightyMe001
@MightyMe001 6 күн бұрын
All these SF stories have one thing in common: Fighting anthe might of humans. Is the AI also capable to narrate something more intelligent?