Next time, get a narrator who doesn't pronounce a hyphen as 'minus'. Your subtitles are also useless. There are a ton of low effort poor quality robo narration channels, and this one is as mediocre as any of them. And: We're facing an unknown enemy - we aren't going down without a fight. You've already accepted that you're going down, then? Hell of a motivational speech.
@Shannon-SmithКүн бұрын
I gotta say, I absolutely love this story. It's gotta be written by a guy because being wanted like that is every guy's desire!
@captainobvious9233Күн бұрын
You said this story is Written and Own By You? So why did you choose to use a little boy as the victim when there are already hundreds of 'Human Child Tortured by Galactic Empire But His Grandfather's Ancient Fleet Saved the Day' ? Why did you not decide to be original and refreshing and for just once make the child a GIRL and do something new? Seeing Human Child Tortured by Galactic Empire But HER Grandfather's Ancient Fleet Saved the Day' when be a sight for sore eyes. So tired of the same stories being repeated over and over again with the same genders and names.
@robertabraham6456Күн бұрын
very poor reader AI !!
@andyflannigan6432Күн бұрын
Terrible.
@DataStorm1Күн бұрын
TLDR: Its a shit AI story, with lots of repeats and no logic or good narrative. It holds the cake tho, it repeats like 10x the same up to the end, with nothing to end the story. If you have no concept of a lie, then you can't make a reliable lie-detector. How can you invent something for something that isn't a thing in your experience, have effects to measure, subjects that DO lie and can verify and calibrate such etc. And this is absolute shite, the story repeats parts of itself a dozen times, Why is an interrogator going to engineering etc when there is a full complement of his race doing that and probably higher ranking involved. Not his job, not his turf, he'd be informed outside on key points or sending messages, and someone outside observing etc, not stopping interrogation on this for near any reason. And then the claim of "fair use". Fair use is CRITIQUE or other coverage where you show a tiny part and then analyse this. Claiming this means you don't own copyright, so some /r/HFY story got regurgitated thru an AI rewrite that failed beyond repair, and then thru an AI voice. That's doing nothing on fair use.
@jan42725Күн бұрын
if it was a culture where lying was unheard of.... why did they have lie detectors ready? why would they even invent such a device?
@hunter9431Күн бұрын
3 v 3 but picking off enemies with pinpoint accuracy….so AI can’t count, got it
@djdark1Күн бұрын
Does every paragraph need a title?
@v65dreamer2 күн бұрын
Anyone else wondering why NONE of the alien ships could be reactivated and simply flown back to Earth to have its secrets studied ?
@digitalexcavators5352 күн бұрын
AI content….
@noelcross52742 күн бұрын
Devara = Devourer !!!! you think
@lifelongconservative33382 күн бұрын
Where did the Iridians disappear to??
@kennethabagis83922 күн бұрын
It keeps repeating .
@anthonystark39592 күн бұрын
Humanity is disease Alien is the cure
@rastifan78633 күн бұрын
Ai trash of the first order.
@davecaskey4293 күн бұрын
In this day and age why can the AI not pronunciate words properly wtf?
@sohara763 күн бұрын
A good story but nothing to do with the title.
@Fuilleverte3 күн бұрын
Why is there no test no puzzle or word game? The answer wouldn't need to be provided but the test itself would give a philosophical puzzle for the listener/reader.
@chinopersaud14423 күн бұрын
Na the whole story is no good
@t.n.-js6ei3 күн бұрын
No, its not even THAT good. And what's a poultry system, I didn't know that alien chickens achieved space flight?
@davecaskey4293 күн бұрын
Decent story but the AI is retarded
@celestekent12363 күн бұрын
Your AI is dreadful. Find a different one and try again.
@jiplix3 күн бұрын
Very poor naration and story
@KeithChastney3 күн бұрын
A good story, but you kept repeating the phrase "the smallest and weakest race" in reference to Humanity - slightly insulting.
@matsunagast62183 күн бұрын
I think this story is being written by AI
@evanmcclellan83283 күн бұрын
Cool story but large portions of it are totally ai generated. The inclusion of ecological conservation and excessive definitions of coloquial terms are give aways.
@evanmcclellan83283 күн бұрын
But I really like sci fi like this. You could make a video on your stategies of prompting ai
@user-ym1pf4lz3h3 күн бұрын
that and it's a shit story.
@opposition223 күн бұрын
"There's no way, humanity was winning the war" and then like 10 minutes later. Apparently humanity was on the verge of Extinction and resorting to a desperate measures
@jiplix3 күн бұрын
poor
@elmo16394 күн бұрын
Hmmm🤔
@ChadLetourneaurhavoc4 күн бұрын
More Stupid AI Crap
@brian7704 күн бұрын
love the story, great delivery, just sounds a bit "chipper"
@HFYSTORyExpedition4 күн бұрын
Why do you think so?
@andrewschultz25044 күн бұрын
Good video sir there are a lot of variables involved. My two road kings require vastly different pressure. The ABS model requires less pressure on the front brake. I agree practice is important and you definitely spend quite a bit of time doing it so it would definitely help you be quicker there are other reasons for covering your front brake and just be quicker. One reason for covering from break is for trail breaking. I live in the mountains and often times the house would be prepared for trail breaking. Another reason to cover the front brake is different grades and surface conditions require different brakes to be used Coming down the hill off road your rear brake would be almost useless Going up the hill sometimes your rear brake is more effective than your front off road
@lanedixon72624 күн бұрын
If only this could become true. Thanks for this one!
@Alice-ng2po5 күн бұрын
Slow down on reading sentences.
@Alice-ng2po5 күн бұрын
Need to stop properly and pause properly.
@pratikmohite62025 күн бұрын
too many word burgers
@XolaresTiberius5 күн бұрын
🤦♂️ So many errors......... lmao!
@cab88665 күн бұрын
A better editor is greatly needed. Correct pronunciation of words would be helpful.
@PeterStarr-x4h5 күн бұрын
learn English
@EdVILLA-vb1xs5 күн бұрын
What’s a “Humworld” planet of singers?
@catharinapacke92055 күн бұрын
The story is not long,but repaet
@adamstone47805 күн бұрын
Yay first
@dnixon87675 күн бұрын
Repeat, repeat and repeat
@user-vc4mm2ml8t5 күн бұрын
IV is not "iv". IV is 4
@randomstranger96745 күн бұрын
The subtitles are comically bad. I don't know whether the storywas written by a human but it feels typical of the AI generated pulp so many robo narrators use, with cliche piled on cliche in every scene.
@MightyMe0016 күн бұрын
All these SF stories have one thing in common: Fighting anthe might of humans. Is the AI also capable to narrate something more intelligent?