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@Svensk7119
@Svensk7119 18 күн бұрын
Less a story than a description. Basically, the Colonists went native, like, "Dark They Were, And Golden-Eyed". The discovery of the artifact is mentioned twice. The story is poorly edited.
@GiantHFY
@GiantHFY 18 күн бұрын
@@Svensk7119 Thank you for your thoughts. I hope I can achieve a smoother narration in future stories.
@nomadgd
@nomadgd Ай бұрын
Mankind was the bad guy. Invaded and destroyed, after destroying their own world.
@NA-en7kz
@NA-en7kz 2 ай бұрын
Welcome to 40 Marcus
@GiantHFY
@GiantHFY 2 ай бұрын
Thank you for your comment😆
@lyles0073
@lyles0073 3 ай бұрын
Is this an AI telling of the Truman Show 😂
@GiantHFY
@GiantHFY 3 ай бұрын
It definitely resembles. Thank you for your comment.
@EllenCrawford-h1f
@EllenCrawford-h1f 3 ай бұрын
Story keeps repeating itself need to communicate with your editor to prevent that from happening
@GiantHFY
@GiantHFY 3 ай бұрын
I am working on it. Thank you for your valuable comment. 🙏
@John-jv5gt
@John-jv5gt 4 ай бұрын
And the verry first time i steped through the portal i died too late i realized the sun is traviling through the univerce the earth is traveling around the sun and spining and that yellow speck weigh off in the distance was the sun and i would be long dead by rhe time it got here
@mavrathmasterofsecrets8712
@mavrathmasterofsecrets8712 4 ай бұрын
Oh, this is a story. I thought this was one of those videos by over excited “scientists” talking about how we could finally discover the existence of life on other planets with this new discovery.
@GiantHFY
@GiantHFY 4 ай бұрын
☺I hope so too. We just completed a true story that was left unfinished. Thank you for comment btw.
@johnmac4769
@johnmac4769 4 ай бұрын
wish the story line was better put together.
@GiantHFY
@GiantHFY 4 ай бұрын
Thank you for commenting. I hope it will be more settled in future stories. I am trying to improve.
@thomasdevine867
@thomasdevine867 4 ай бұрын
This reminds me of both Bradbury's "Dark They were and Golden Eyed," and Le Guin's "Vaster than Empires and more Slow." But it lacks the poetry of either of those. I see some influence of Van Vogt's "The Village" as well.
@GiantHFY
@GiantHFY 4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your thoughts. I hope I can achieve a smoother narration in future stories.