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@mcgill9757 2 сағат бұрын
☺️👍
@lynneclark5313 4 сағат бұрын
Fantastic story!! AND I didn't see many errors.
@Shadowkey392 4 сағат бұрын
Why is Reed teaching the politicians to fight instead of the soldiers?
@lesperez1989 20 сағат бұрын
Reed again!
@Shadowkey392 5 сағат бұрын
He’s gotta be an expert on the Swarm by now.
@uwe2749 Күн бұрын
Why do you cont proofread your Subtitles. Shitty Quality.
@markwalker4485 Күн бұрын
Sounds like every Boilermaker I know.
@jimmygraham5693 3 күн бұрын
Very enjoyable story, well written, thank you
@MBaldelli 3 күн бұрын
Here's another example of writing that required to understand the basics of what makes a sci-fi story a sci-fi story. Read/Reed/Reid (seriously the CC used all of them and it was feeling problematic for hearing impaired people), and Green were also very common names for Humans -- making the story feel like anything sci-fi and more a conversion story that could work in any genre. Then there's the problem with all the buzzwords and their descriptions cookie cutter (Deathworlders and what that meant to be born on Earth) making this listener feel like an AI generated story. And then there's the problem with measurements.. 15 feet? Really? In a worldwide audience used to metrics (that's 4.5 meters for folk that don't know anything other than imperial (AKA Freedom) units? Oh Christ on a Drunken Rampage. "The simplest solution is the best one" trope? I've ignored one KZbin Channel that used this ad nausea, ad infinitum. Don't tell my you're the same under new drag? Like two others I've commented on, you really should look into a remedial course at college about creative writing in a sci-fi setting. This needs to be seriously improved.
@TusiFane-sd6ns 4 күн бұрын
Love your stories
@raymondcarter1137 4 күн бұрын
The captain; yes I can and don’t call me Shirley.
@MBaldelli 5 күн бұрын
Amusing story, however the alien names were surprisingly all Earther and Earthlike, which made this sounds like a WIP that editing wasn't performed to make the aliens to sound more alien.
@uwe2749 5 күн бұрын
Asterix ? really Shitty AI
@jackdabiel12 6 күн бұрын
Cool
@anangrymarine9174 6 күн бұрын
Would be unsurprising if this was written by AI
@mikecarter8440 7 күн бұрын
Good story
@HFYSci-FiWarX 8 сағат бұрын
Thank you! 🙂
@haraldontour 8 күн бұрын
🤣 So, they are lost, and don't know where they are, and can't tell the navigator where to find them, and he flies over to them? Why not simply tell them their position, and send some GPX file for their Garmin? That must be artificial logic.
@Julianna1220 9 күн бұрын
Well that was painful, how about putting the story in its proper order?
@Ron-y1b 11 күн бұрын
more drivel.
@armandoa2484 12 күн бұрын
I agree, Excellent story ❤
@rhago32 12 күн бұрын
Love the background image. 👍
@sfsgaming7831 12 күн бұрын
Is it just me or would a compass not work in space?
@anonanonymous1988 12 күн бұрын
Yeah, without magnetic poles, it would be useless.
@williamkowalchik572 11 күн бұрын
It would point to the strongest magnetic source. Like a sexton it takes things to be stable and time together to make it work.
@oddquad2010 12 күн бұрын
I don't know about some " bow chips bow wow " but I DO know that this unique story was very interesting and the combination of Earth sailing info with modern technology was a game changer in this excellent tale.!!!😬😬🤔🤔😁🤓 The writer created a storyline to be very proud of and I truly enjoyed the whole package of terror and success.!!!😯😧😮 Thank you writer for the fantastic tale and the story.!!! I thoroughly enjoyed every minute of this wonderful story.!!! 😣😖😵😳😲🖖👽🖖
@cb5117 12 күн бұрын
Come on, we all know there was some naughty and hot Alien/Human cross species “BOW CHICKA WOW WOW” copulating between Hannah and Simkho.
@williamkowalchik572 11 күн бұрын
He is not Captain lay every female Kirk.
@PoppsDebo 13 күн бұрын
Excellent well told story. Sailors in space using Earth sailors senses, cool method.
@dorugu 14 күн бұрын
xcellent story this one
@oldskool235 16 күн бұрын
Asian AI, and the subtitles suck not to mention why are they even surprised about humans when one is on the station. The whole thing is wonky. Delete it and try again, maybe ask a story teller fluent in English to help.
@Winged1212 17 күн бұрын
Can't hear anything. A.I. is whispering. It is such fundamental common sense that I'm not going to ask you to turn it up, just gonna block your channel. Done with ignorance.
@timlikekoolkid 14 күн бұрын
Wow talk about a crybaby
@JI-eq3zq 13 күн бұрын
the narrator's volume was fine for me. Speaking of fundamental common sense, did you check your own volume settings?
@Winged1212 13 күн бұрын
@JI-eq3zq might be fine for you but I'm riding busses and subways in NYC. Despite that I am good with 95% of narrators. Make the recording at max volume, people are capable of turning it down. Recording it low with no way to increase it is unintelligent. I use ear buds and I still couldn't hear this. Not everyone is sitting at home listening. Yes I was annoyed and snappy in my comment but that doesn't change the reality that not every listener is home with a cat in their lap.
@JI-eq3zq 13 күн бұрын
@@Winged1212 My system volume is down pretty low, and YT's volume is also pretty low, I could hear it just fine as is, with plenty of room to turn up one/both if needed. Sounds like a you problem.
@h13n12 11 күн бұрын
@@Winged1212 my youtube is at 5% volume and my laptop is at 10% volume and i can hear it pretty loudly. i recommend you check your device or maybe go to a doctor to get your hearing checked out.
@Winged1212 17 күн бұрын
Volume too low
@KMEnterprise 15 күн бұрын
Think you might need hearing aids. I hear this perfectly clearly