Now I know what to do.🎉🎉

Story dialog is too reptative. It doesn't move along fast enough. nice picture but the story repeats so often it seems like it's only purpose is to make the story long enough to get points.

Oh God don't watch this really awful

Ok the ai voice is horrible. I can't listen any longer

Too many repeated things i couldn't stay in it sorry

why talk in circles??? instead of asking the right question-"why me"???? is that so hard???but nope you talk around the topic....yes she bathes with all her guards....thats what it projectes....and you tell the same too often till you reach the meant point and thats stressing(annoying) oneself while listening and at the end you dont want to listen anymore...

You going to spend 10 minutes rehashing over and over again. He marries the Queen or the Star will Destroy Humanity. WTF is your ignorant reason to shove this down our throats over and over and over again!!!!@!Q#$&@*

So... he did a bunch of 'tests', and never actually married the queen? Ok then..

The stories are ok but you really need to do something about the voice you’re using to narrate the stories it totally messes up the stories

he asked 'why me?' after being explicitly told why him. Aaaaaaaaghhhh!

Great reader but any one of these type stories that are 60 minutes or less yet take longer than 10 minutes for the protagonist and the female to even really accept what the plot is just turns the subscriber off. Plus the constant repeating of everything just to make the video longer as the creator was not talented enough to not constantly use those types of "filler" dialogue just to SLOWLY get the plot to crawl along REALLY keeps one's attention from getting into the plot and makes you irritated and frankly bored looking for a new video to watch. Posting these aren't just about volume but also substance, don't get me wrong I know you work hard just for others entertainment and I thank you for that but please take at least some of what I say as constructive criticism and implement them as I promise you will have allot more views. Thank you. 😁

Personally, I think they could’ve drawn a better looking queen. She is a bit of a skank. As per test, there were three tests the first time and I think two test the second time.

So he either did the strength test twice OR the battle of will twice? OR the queen needs to learn basic math.......

The "robonarration" makes this unlistenable.

Someone needs to fo a better job reading this AI worded story. Its like there are different versions of the ending

These stories seem weak and irritating. Your stories repeat , repeat and repeat and eventually turn you off completely. A very wimpy main character. This is one reason why I would not subscribe. Also based on a Chinese philosophy that is alien to most North Americans. Please improve your stories and get a better reader,,, He is also irritating .

The cover slide is undoubtedly the best part of story. The AI Narrator is so bad, I'm having difficulty following the story. I'll be moving on. Better luck the future. Changing the ai to a more lifelike, more personable is highly advised.

"Two beings, completely different, trying to communicate in a world that neither of us fully understood" - where's the sci-fi in that?

Repetitive writing. Boring.

And part 2 ???

loving her little camel toe. :)

You killed the kid. You don’t kill kids in Sci-fi stories.

I second the AI upgrade. Or you could get a human to do the narration.

Great story, but kept side stepping them finally committing to the relationship. I don’t find still sleeping in separate rooms, and not yet even expressing their true feeling to each other, a true loving relationship. Disappointing.

I'll tell you what I'd do with an alien vvoman... See, since my wife left me, I've been able to play video games, eat whatever I want, go to the gym any time, have a drink, etc.... I desperately need somebody to incessantly nag me, remind me how worthless I am, and to spend my savings on frivolous items to decorate the house with, all while denying me bedroom activity and making me sleep on the couch. The way I see it, if my ex-wife ever comes around, I want her to see me with somebody. Make her jealous that there's a vvoman in my life that nags me better than she ever did. It's petty, I know, but I never claimed to be either smart or ethical.

I think I counted 3 last tests.

?????????

ok we got it he doesnt know what to do....and a coward as mc is annoying and boring...cause isnt this fantasy???in my fantasy i dont see me as a coward or without any ideas....if not then you have real life and no fantasy story...but on YT its all the same one chanel starts with a route of story and the rest follows behind and you get piled under the same story every move you make on YT...and the way the mc works proofs he does all as if 15 years old...

Sounds like the same story again Mr. How many stories you're gonna say? That's the same find understand but this boys me.

Umm, can that mistake be replicated ? How ? Link ?

First part would have been better if on top of a probable joke, or some humorous theft involving a fake outfit or some 3D art, he would have expected friends having pirated his account, or some mafia selling a woman from the other side of the planet, until he realizes that the word "alien" meant to be real.

Pre-teen wordy waste of time. Skip.

also, the protagonist called her Aurora to have a name he could use but the alien commander also used that name when he addressed her

If they wanted her so bad, why didn't they just outbid him?

Too much blah blah blah

Wenked out at 33:09 and left.

Bye.

Repetitive junk.

Choose a better voice.

Please, please, please, please....get a better voice to tell these stories. This voice your using here, and in other stories, just sucks epically and makes it hard to try and listen to any story with this voice. It sounds worse than a gay robot.

Junk.

I would have ordered three 😂😂👍

Smooth Continuity suffers. Bids without knowing what it actually is, then shortly afterwards begins worrying how to deal with an Alien, without receiving anything other than the shipment is on the way.

Good story, even though I knew how it would go. Whoever you are, don't stop writing. Keep practicing. I have to see if there is a gay version out there somewhere...

I got bored about 3/4 of the way through and the stop listening.

This particular A.I. voice was very clipped and seemed to drone on. I think this could have been a better story with a clear rewrite and a better reading voice.

Absolutely terrible AI voice and god damn shit story!

Wait till she sees the Dad bod.

long winded and to much focus on feelings.

I did better writing in 6th grade, and I suck at writing