There you go. This is starting to look like a show. Keep it up. A couple pieces of feedback: 1. Bring the microphone closer to your mouth when you're doing on location pieces. 2. People like to see you walking into a restaurant and doing a panning shot (right to left) of the interior 3. You should take a bit on camera with some type of facial expression. 4. Slow down the b-roll of the dishes. It was hard to see what you were referencing because it happened so quickly. 5. Add a screenshot of Google Map to the video so people can easily see where the location is at in reference to Fort Belvoir. 6. Cut down the number of call-to-actions you have per video. Either use your opening as your pitch or the pitch towards the end. Two pitches in an under two minute video is a bit aggressive. 7. Keep posting. You'll get better over time.