This deserves way more attention and I’m really serious about that lad!
@lisaneuman9248Ай бұрын
I’m jamming out right now to this!
@lisaneuman9248Ай бұрын
I love this so much!!!!!
@lisaneuman9248Ай бұрын
This is amazing
@alleksandrplay8332Ай бұрын
Of course it turned out cool...
@palyapi782 ай бұрын
Bruh why does every good creator haven't much views💀💀
@squidboi272 ай бұрын
awesome, thanks for taking my suggestion
@nexotica62422 ай бұрын
@@squidboi27 I don't get suggestions much so when I get them, I'll do them. Obviously, there are some songs out of my reach but I'd be happy to take some more requests
@alleksandrplay83322 ай бұрын
Of course it turned out cool...
@alleksandrplay83322 ай бұрын
Of course it turned out cool...
@MechanicalDog_B-0472 ай бұрын
aMAXINg dude
@DaxisNumberOneFangirl2 ай бұрын
Sounds awesome!
@squidboi273 ай бұрын
great remix, it'd be cool if you did finale sometime
@nexotica62422 ай бұрын
kzbin.info/www/bejne/rZ-Vh61pf9arp8U
@alleksandrplay83323 ай бұрын
Of course it turned out cool... If this video had been about a year ago, it would have become part of ours, at least one of its fragments for sure...
@majupaju96333 ай бұрын
I genuinely want to help you improve your music, which is why I'm offering some constructive criticism. My intention is not to offend you in any way but to support your growth as a composer and producer. The transition to the chorus, as well as the chorus itself, feels a bit off-rhythmically, and there are noticeable off-notes throughout. The synth sound in the higher notes could be refined, and the pad doesn’t quite fit into the overall texture. It feels like the chorus tries to merge two contrasting *emotional bursts* - one *cheerful* and one *aggressive* - but they don’t blend together smoothly, resulting in a somewhat *vague* and *disjointed* feel. The piece shifts its composition too abruptly at times, almost as if the music has been switched to something entirely different without a natural flow. It would be beneficial to work on keeping the composition unified and cohesive. For example, imagine the Mona Lisa painting, but with a modern disco in the background and *Winnie the Pooh* drawn in a completely different style on the left. It wouldn’t create a harmonious image, and that’s what happens when musical elements clash without a cohesive blend. For now, it might be best to focus on sticking with a consistent melody and emotion throughout the piece, especially as a beginner producer. If you do want to experiment with mixing genres or emotions, aim for a smoother, more gradual transition, and ensure the elements complement each other. You could also try extending the buildup before the chorus and focus on refining the sound quality and variety in the instrumental sections. Pay attention to the individual sounds you're using - even changing just the tones could make a significant improvement. Experiment with new sounds, improve their quality, and work on understanding which elements fit best together. Samples can also be great for adding texture, but it’s important that everything is carefully calibrated to maintain a coherent structure. Lastly, I highly recommend checking out the "*Synthet*" channel on KZbin (with 248k subs). It’s not an ad, but their videos are really helpful. Regularly watching and practicing along with their tutorials can help you progress much faster in music production.
@nexotica62423 ай бұрын
Thanks for that, and also for being actually constructive about it. By the way, I made this song in 1 day. I was making another song but I wasn't proud of it but I only had 1 day left before I had to release for song for the fortnight. So it may sound rushed and that's because it is.