Don't watch this either lol.

Dear God don't watch this I can't look at it lol.

Original treatments are the 1991 draft starring Tin Toy

WHERE IS THE SOUND!?

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Woody

Awesome

This is great!

Love it! Very well done Tim!

Suspense and a little humor, my kinda film 💛

I loved it and it made me laugh your scream Lol :´)

Hi Tim, AWESOME VIDEO! My initial thoughts are this: - Very good stop motion work… This takes patience & many takes… (did you do all the edits yourself?) - Maybe think about adding some back ground music or other sounds during the scenes so there won’t be so much silence. The sound does not need to dominate the scene, but adding sounds immerses the viewer more into your film by engaging our 'hearing' sense. (Some ideas for this could be "sleeping/snoring" sounds for the guy who fell asleep at the bus station, motorcycle engine revving, “city noises”- such as cars honking, people walking, dogs barking, maybe bird sounds) (fill the empty spaces). - Intro music would be a good start as well for sound. (I was messing with my sound buttons and earphones because I saw the video playing , but heard no sound until you spoke.) - I’m impressed with the many shots and angles that you were able to create…(People waiting at the bus station, bus arriving, missing the bus, taking motorcycle to catch up, running out of gas, taking skate board , the two buses crashing, the police arriving, etc.) - I laughed at the part where the bus driver drank the hot tea. (So random, but unexpectedly funny at the same time). - When you stop the video and do the explanation, at minute 1:13-1:14, possibly think about extending the time so the viewer can read whats on the screen. The font is unique and the viewer needs time to adjust to the font to be able to read it entirely, and the video cuts to the next scene really fast. (I counted 2 seconds) - GREAT JOB ON THE STORY LINE AS WELL.

Great start to your channel! I agree with Nick that you can always improve by bringing in other people that have different skills than you do to make you better! By focusing on what you are great at, you will become more and more successful For example Stan Lee wrote great comics, but he found others to do alot of different parts in creating the marvel films

thanks to you I learned more about Lego and I'm really liking, you are a good film maker

Awesome stop motion! Loved the sound effects! Keep up the good work :)

good film. a good film maker knows how to bring others together to make the project work. look for people who can do things better than you and bring them together to turn your vision into a reality. I liked the sound effects. You are a natural story teller and it will only get better from here.