More....more.....more..more..😂 Thank you, little gem it is.

Jesus Christ learn the stuff you are reading, it's not 'emp' it's e m p Electro magnetic pulse . There are good narrators and there are bad , you fall in the latter.....

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I’m enjoying this story. I hope there’s a part two.

There's a lot overlooked. Like how the clone was fully able to comprehend and manipulate equipment.

I'm looking forward to a serie. This story are really good!

Never put Elara in a captain's chair, one pms joke and she'd be glassing worlds 😂

What do you want the scientists to do, physically knock sense into the alien disruptors?😊

Evolve them out of obsessive hero worship

A balance of both.

A non story, of repetitive restatements of the plot outline... AI generated, or really challenged writing, where the videotitle is either clickbating or the narrative actually had no logical conclusion given the original setting and somehow failure becoming a proof of victory, unless the writer is being sarcastic about the general tone of these stories, essentially calling our species being incredibly deranged just for writing them. It just hapens that most human writers would also laugh their arse off at the suggestion they actually believe ourkind to be that incredible, I mean, we also invented supper heroes, and while some folk may argue those started bit like attempting to compensate for somethingnerdy, I move to refute the assumption. The reader would not find it funny, if they actually believed every exaggeration out there. Tagy indeed like. someone stated also for this reason. My problem with it is much more simple, it lost the plot, right about when that Maya had nothing else to contribute to the conversation, except repeating her reservations. But by then I was already listening because my hands were too busy deciding on right shade of violet in a game, to save my ears from the asult of boring, aka telling instead of showing in verbal means... case of watching paint dry being literally more vigorating, because I am somehow still avake enough to write anything, not that I really wish to sleep, even if that would certainly delete days faster from my list of problems there are no solutions for... well like the questionable decision making of my native country's governmet at the time. Or the way it can end the income of certain people based on where they do not live at, you know, just the kind of little nuisances a democratic nation sould not dabble with, but unfortunately and somehow that still manages not to, well, have them stop at least the silly nonsense about DEI checklist implementation and upkeep cost or the idea at all, even though supposed savings from the first all together will not even cover the spending for the latter. And if you think the examples here sound absurd - welcome to reality rising the odds over purely fantastical oddities which merely seem impossible. Now, where was I, yes, the point is that this story has no story to it. And I am not disuppointed that they died, lol. I am sure I heard the names of these people aka characters before, but if I did not, the reason for that is, that most comonly we have loads of short stories, totally unrelated, where same characters get far too reused and as if that was not the only lazy AI or author bs about, the description of battle manovering tends to remain at the level of stating that they repositioned, without any viable tactical description, often literally none the less, while bragging or out right claiming the strategies genious... yet not even explainig as to how supposedly it was, when not even a move wasn't mentioned. Oh, and better yet, somehow surrounded fleet beeing few sentences later the surrounding one, like few stories back, or when human exchange student managed to join galactick high school, a few days ago, before anyone even managed to invent FTL or equivalent, for set a school to even exist. Little tings like that matters. Just like attempting at least answer the claim. But that aside, I need to figure out how to make dark texture simultaneusly paler and not loose it's tone or richness of the color, because blue purple is still not violet, no more than redpurple. I'll squeeze it out somehow, purplegrey, just paler, but not violet or so pale it looks white. Would look ok if that house was full of colors, but as it dances on the blade edge of blueish pastels... baby violet is just not enough... but first need to shacke tube vigorously for something less treathening for my brain cells.

a circumflex zero?

Fun story but a bit left out. No surprise from humans at her alien visage. Taking her for an animal too. Nothing from her shipmate.. it's like they discarded the whole I'm an alien plot and made it animals get smart and talk with humans. Still fun but those lapses made it feel incomplete.

Field Marshall von Plothole was there leading the troops.

Lots of plot holes and an ending that made little sense, it was like the ending was rushed.

Interesting story though I note that it gave little to no desc of the alien except name and gender. But only a third of the way thru yet. Very intriguing. Though curious as how she seemingly knows some of the animals species yet others are simply this or that predator. That critique aside, finding it a very enjoyable story so far. 😊

Audio cuts out several times. If I wanted to read, I'd just put my cleaning stuff down, sit, and read.

Good story i listen to alot

You can listen to this while going to sleep...

Tacky Story

HOW CAN SO MUCH FLUFF THINK IT'S A STORY?

This was good until the sudden ending, it feels like a large chunk of the story was cut out.

Nicely narrated but story is rather repetitive and shallow. Attack oblivious enemy.. vague description of where or how long to get there.. gather data.. escape.. then repeating that cycle over and over.. goal always the same.. and aliens always remaining oblivious without reacting after each strike? Shooting down a starship from the ground with a single shot with a hand weapon was absolutely absurd though.

Nice sharing keep it up

So many repeated sections and phrases, this whole story could have been reduced to like 30-40 minutes and you wouldn't notice a thing missing. There are good ones of this 2 hour+ type, but this is a big pile of crap.

A few years ago Americans and Chinese had a Google War. It was simple. Just keep spamming the search bar with "I am very afraid of Chinese" and vice versa. Google tries to complete the thought, so for a while, Chinese was the top choice. Then it was Americans. Super hilarious, super fun, and nobody got hurt. I think everyone just laughed. A good bit of Internet humour. Now, I am wondering why this supposedly advanced AI only knows the name CHEN. Meaning:Dawn, morning; Grace, charm. Chen is a gender-neutral name of Chinese origin, meaning "dawn" or "morning.” Chen is also a common surname throughout China and is used in different dialects, such as Hokkien, Cantonese, and Mandarin. Somehow we need to infect AI with John Smith, or something like that, but maybe emphasis on words with L and N. You don't get to jump through logical hoops and make it sound reasonable. There are several good eggs of a reasonable story here, but you conclude with a mash that is inedible. In less than three minutes we find out there are humans on the surface, and then they are fighting with the invaders? lol. Take a writing course. Oh, the humans living underground are all helpless cattle it seems. Seriously dude. Take a writing course so you don't embarrass yourself in public.

So stupid, they sent out a message RUN and they’re not even ready for battle yet.

Redeem

These Ai stories are so ridiculous they’re actually entertaining

redeem

A Great Story but the multiple scenarios destroyed the story. Editing is so important, and rewrites are a necessary part of editing. So disappointing!

I hope there is a part 2

Great story

I hate these incomplete stories 😤

redeem humanity

Perhaps sanitise your inputs

Love it!

I understand stories need opponents (Arcturian) to make them interesting. Why do the Galactic Council and thereby the Arcturians have any influence? Is it their planet? Do they put on bids for planets, rewarding a species with the best plan with a lease on the planet? Confused reader here!

You spend too much time talking pride in these stories. Just tell the story man

To much verbiage. Not enough story. To much repetition

Run? You need to adjust the story to suit "run" theme 😮

Same argument every time. Also what function does Elara perform apart ftom whinging and whining? The way she talks to her CO would land her a court martial so quick her head would spin.

This is about money! When you involve betting you involve corruption.

Propaganda at its best! The news media are the enemy of the people.

FOR SUCH A GOOD STORYLINE, THE ENDING SUCKED. WASTE OF TIME.

You folks know it's sci-fi right? Not real? Just a story about the human spirit?

This one sounds like a twilight zone episode

You have made mistakes First they were aliens looking at earth Then they are humans defending the power of earth It’s very confusing to fallow this story Sorry but it’s a no from me because of the story changing from being aliens to changing to humans .

You keep saying the same thing over and over!