I love the way the stringed instrument sounds, probably 6.5/10
@FunnyBeatBoxMan5 сағат бұрын
Rate it out of 10? Be honest.
@Confusion41217 сағат бұрын
I like it and if you want feedback on my thoughts check the other guys comment, i just commented on there but other than that, thats great work actually, also if you want to go over any music things, i have a discord thing where i help with music if you'd like mate, no pressure, good luck to you man, you'll do great
@FunnyBeatBoxMan11 сағат бұрын
What do you mean help with music? Like promoting it or help making it?
@Confusion4128 сағат бұрын
@@FunnyBeatBoxMan help creating it, I just look through it and give opinions and insight on how to make it better or what to change or add
@foxgenderКүн бұрын
the melody is very good, and you have a solid base here. it could use a little more variation. i really like the parts 2:19 here, they sound very dynamic and "trippy". i like this track a lot and hope to see what you do next!
@Confusion41217 сағат бұрын
I couldn't agree more, the foundation and everything is great and I love the way it sounds but it's too consistent, changing a small bit can go a long but other than that I don't see much need for improvement
@FunnyBeatBoxMan11 сағат бұрын
Thanks for the feedback! I release a track every 3 days, one of them being today.
@FunnyBeatBoxMan3 күн бұрын
This is one of my most experimental tracks, so please let me know what you think of it?
@randomdeer02 күн бұрын
It’s noice
@NARK-LS83 күн бұрын
"Your music sounds awesome! I’m new to DTM as well, but let’s both keep at it ☻ I can’t wait for the day we can collaborate!"
@FunnyBeatBoxMan3 күн бұрын
You can use anyone of my beats for a song, just remember to give credit either in the title or description.
@PresumablyTunes4 күн бұрын
1.5x speed makes it better 👍
@sonofalawnmower2 күн бұрын
@FunnyBeatBoxMan Definitely speed tempo up on song it will still sound great!
@litezout56824 күн бұрын
the shit that goes on with the synth with the almost a key change is phenomenal
@FunnyBeatBoxMan4 күн бұрын
Thanks
@Geebee37154 күн бұрын
It sounds like a song from Portal! Very cool!!
@CypherusMcClain5 күн бұрын
Needs some other layers, like sweeps and swooshy sounds, though that's just the style I go for. A little repetitive, but I will say that the synth that comes in at 1:46 has a very interesting chord progression, especially how a bard ends out of key, but almost like it's trying to push a key change, but it pulls back to the starting chord of the bar. That has some really good potential and just needs to be refined. Good work, overall! 😃
@lukeleedy37135 күн бұрын
It's not bad. a little repetitive in some areas tho
@FunnyBeatBoxMan6 күн бұрын
Be honest, what would you give this out of 10?
@Albatross_1645 күн бұрын
Hey! This sounds somewhat like the music i post on my channel and i really like the beats and the rhythm! youve got a gift! i subscribed!
@RICX_OFFICIXL_Channel4 күн бұрын
3/10
@KingScizor7 күн бұрын
7/10
@some_geezer28 күн бұрын
Miles better than my first song
@Rottot8 күн бұрын
This is pretty good for a first song. I like the percussion loop and great work on the synths
@FunnyBeatBoxMan9 күн бұрын
What would you give it out of 10? Be honest. Also this is the first song I ever made on GarageBand
@boneman96658 күн бұрын
I’m not even close to an expert on music composition, as I’ve actually just started using GarageBand about a month ago, but I think this is an 8/10 for a first song!
@6TB8 күн бұрын
you're going places/10
@wadeoreo15 күн бұрын
For a first 9/10 but if this was from someone experienced then 6/10
@Confusion41217 сағат бұрын
It's actually good, the synth was great and the lead was good too. If I had to give any criticism it's the big room part that's throwing me for a loop, it kind of stands out a little and the claps interject a little bit but other than that nice work. Solid 8.5/10
@roguemike625510 күн бұрын
Sounds like a top down rpg game when youre in like, a factory about to face an important story boss. Gotta let the homies know i fux with this
@FunnyBeatBoxMan8 күн бұрын
Thanks
@MemGod710 күн бұрын
(8/10)I'm genuinely love how the song sounds ominous in contrast to the name. Less like "there is hope." And more like. "is there hope?" and I love it. Song still could use some improvements, but overall pretty good. (I'm not really good at music so I don't have that much advice)
@FunnyBeatBoxMan8 күн бұрын
Huh, never really saw it like that, but now you say it a kinda understand what your talking about
@stupidteous11 күн бұрын
7.3/10 main bassy melody goes super hard, i liked the percussion as well. when that singular repeating note comes in its a bit repetitive; you could have added a little stepwise variation every so often, for example. also, when the next harmony part comes in its very similar to the bassline. when the next part does come in, however, the new synth sounds *really* good with the previous parts. and then the return to the original melody works really good as well. i feel like the next could have been a bit shorter, though, and the ending section could have been a bit different. like the new synth at the end could have been more of a descending line than its original one. overall tho i liked it!
@stupidteous11 күн бұрын
7/10 it has potential! i liked the instrumentation changes and liked the main melody. i would try experimenting with song structure (e.g. ABA structure) where subsequent parts have a different melodies, and then return to the original. i disagree with the other comment about dissonance; the synth sound is a little unstable but it fits the song nicely. and also, if you want, you can try experimenting with other styles/genres (e.g. something less electronic) to get more ideas. keep it up!
@FunnyBeatBoxMan11 күн бұрын
Thanks
@sunlin880311 күн бұрын
A little bit dirty and dissonant on chords side, needs improvement there. A little bit repetitive, would win from more melodic and harmonic variation. Overall it's fine, just keep up the work, I'm making music too and I get the struggle, just keep doing it Also, might be subjective, but consider using some better software (Ableton Live i.e.)
@FunnyBeatBoxMan12 күн бұрын
What would you give it out of 10? Be honest.
@marm485114 күн бұрын
6/10 sound like music from a space level of a cool maths games platformer (compliment)
@FunnyBeatBoxMan15 күн бұрын
Rate it out of 10, be honest.
@FunnyBeatBoxMan18 күн бұрын
Rate it out of 10, be honest.
@Progr_ammer20 күн бұрын
its actually really good! its quite a relaxing piece of music, well done!
@FunnyBeatBoxMan20 күн бұрын
What do you give it out of 10? Be honest
@JJBouga20 күн бұрын
7/10 its relaxing i like it. it reminds me of a Yoshi Wooly world music. I don't remember which one
@derpz274821 күн бұрын
Lots of sections for not much going on you could say..? sounds great but i feel like you only let each instrument do one thing instead of letting them each take on each others roles at some points
@8083music21 күн бұрын
Pretty cool
@Turntable14-0921 күн бұрын
Love it. Hate the people saying "Repeition". MEDIC! repeats a lot and people love it. LET THE SMALL CREATORS RISE UP!
@FunnyBeatBoxMan21 күн бұрын
Thanks man
@namelesswalaby21 күн бұрын
hey man you have some good ideas. reach out to me if you wanna collab
@FunnyBeatBoxMan21 күн бұрын
Yeah sure
@meekmook513221 күн бұрын
Oh wow I really enjoyed this!! I think this would be a perfect piece of music for a game soundtrack, it really gives me sci-fi vibes. I agree with other commenters who say that it's repetitive, however it's not boring at all in soundtrack context some repetition isn't a bad thing! I think its well made and that it sounds great, keep up the awesome work!
@ravijol122 күн бұрын
its good, but there's room for improvement. like some other people mentioned, repetition is not great. you can add a bridge and a chorus and i think it would be a lot better.
@hoIycow022 күн бұрын
if you cut out the repetitive boring parts, the song is about a minute long. (🧀 out of 10)
@suluntulu22 күн бұрын
i feel like it repeats a lot
@Tiger-702022 күн бұрын
Like... an alarm?
@jetsflyingoffatrain433822 күн бұрын
@@Tiger-7020 but it's not a literal alarm, it's a false alarm
@suluntulu21 күн бұрын
i meant in terms of chord sense and melodic sense
@ImNotKriss23 күн бұрын
Hey you just got into GarageBand right maybe you should start layering your beatbox even more like adding a bass and some harmonies
@FunnyBeatBoxMan23 күн бұрын
Thanks for the advice, I might do that someday in the future. So subscribe (if you haven’t already) to stay updated
@ImNotKriss23 күн бұрын
Hehe it sounds funni
@ImNotKriss23 күн бұрын
This song sounds familiar
@pricklyknuckle990823 күн бұрын
7/10. My take on it is that, as it is now, it is a great base to add vocals to! I can imagine a few different routes one could take, and I like them all. I think this track has a lot of potential, and the other comments offer solid advice.
@mrtechlab23 күн бұрын
ngl i know nothing about making music but that's pretty damn funky
@FunnyBeatBoxMan24 күн бұрын
Rate it out of 10, be honest.
@Eldridge072122 күн бұрын
25
@sandspider5396421 күн бұрын
7/10
@CL1PHARP3R25 күн бұрын
Sound selection bro😞
@DezzyBoio26 күн бұрын
6.4/10 its pretty decent i think mixing could be better though and some more verity and texture in all the sounds would be nice keep practicing and making music though!!
@Qhecky26 күн бұрын
6/10 - A decent song, but there's still some stuff to be learned. That's why I listed my findings below: Instrument choice is great imo. The drums are somewhat quiet though, while some instruments are quite loud (aka the mixing could be better). The melodies are somewhat repetitive and there's a lack of filler parts (the repeating melody part itself is good, but please make more melodies and more variations of them in a song). There is also no outro part where it either fades out (which is something you can do in Garageband) or slowly becomes more relaxed in style until it stops.
@FunnyBeatBoxMan27 күн бұрын
Rate it out of 10, be honest.
@jeppepedersen271727 күн бұрын
cool!
@FunnyBeatBoxManАй бұрын
Hey everyone! I hope you really enjoyed the EP. All these songs were made about a couple of months ago, I uploaded them to see if people like them and to see if I should keep making more. These videos have actually managed to revive my once dead channel. So I will continue. The next BIG upload will be a full on album, it will comprise of mostly new I’ve made, with a couple of songs I also made at a similar times to these. So I hope you will enjoy my newer songs to!
@quinn7894Ай бұрын
I'm working on a song that I was also planning to call "Legacy". It sounds a lot different from this, though
@FunnyBeatBoxManАй бұрын
I checked out your channel, you seem pretty good, I subscribed
@quinn789429 күн бұрын
@@FunnyBeatBoxMan Oh wow. Thank you!
@senpai_mangue6141Ай бұрын
doorbell.
@yourneighbour3309Ай бұрын
i loveee the vibe n feeling i get from this. Love how the ending loops it all real good, if made it longer or copy n pasted n add maybe like 1, 2 or more things later in it ooo itd be real good. I can imagine this go real goodddddd with a lottt of video games n game styles frfrrrr. 8/10🔥🔥🔥🔥🥰🥰🥰