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@hazcat640 24 минут бұрын
Might be a good story but I can't get past the boring, ASMR AI voice.
@Knife_Collector 2 сағат бұрын
Aliens attacked, glassed over the Earth, went back home, clocked out, had a beer and called it a day.
@tellyfanatic 2 сағат бұрын
Also we are pretty good at the art of war.
@tellyfanatic 3 сағат бұрын
My comment is I'm not upvoting past 666 .
@tjcole12 4 сағат бұрын
So repetitive. The whole story could be told in 1/8th of the time....had to fast forward a lot to skip the repetition.
@stevekucpittet802 4 сағат бұрын
Shit story, repetition, and pretty damn dumb.
@briancooper4959 5 сағат бұрын
Somebody likes the sound of his voice too much. This story is way too long. In fact, you could condense it by four minutes, and not lose anything of significance.
@_AcatHat 5 сағат бұрын
Craptastic. It even has one of my pet peeves in it. Intergalactic means between 2 or more galaxies . Intra galact means internal to a galaxy. Just say Galactic instead of trying to use a larger word in the wrong way😂.
@michaelblankenship6125 5 сағат бұрын
Well after all that Bla Bla in story to fill air space she did not escape that hell hole ? Rate the story D +
@NOC-H 6 сағат бұрын
“You’re going to destroy solar systems if you don’t stop…. Fine, we’ll go ahead and do it for you”. Seriously?!?
@Slick64 8 сағат бұрын
Repeat of another store very bad
@theamiralgarner 9 сағат бұрын
Admiral to the empire: we are like peace, but ready for war and we are danm good at it.
@TR-wl4bp 9 сағат бұрын
It’s like showing one a floor tile and then spending two hours telling them it’s a floor tile..😂
@Znix-w4n 12 сағат бұрын
This story is only 5 min long rest is repeated and same thing told in different ways save your self a frustration and skip this crap
@oldmanfromscenetwentyfour8164 13 сағат бұрын
These stories are getting too long, repetitive and BORING.
@oldergent5266 16 сағат бұрын
Narrator: "...broadcast a message across the galaxy. A declaration heard on every planet, in every system..." Sudden random advertisement: "These mushrooms make you feel...good" The timing was the best part of this story!!! But seriously, a bit of overkill, yes? The Council leaders did a horrible thing, so we're going to destroy several worlds and kill all of the inhabitants of those worlds. In the end, who are the true bad ones?
@roysquires287 11 сағат бұрын
There are a couple of themes on these stories, this over reaction can be seen in many of our responses to aggression in our history over the last hundred years. The USS Wisconsin was hit by a barrage of mortar fire, three injured, six square feet of wood decking damaged. Their response: remove the mountain that the mortar team, fired from. In the 1980's we has a ship damaged by minefields by Iran, in eight hours the US decimated their fleet and took out two oil wells used for staging amphibious troops, and of course WWII, the Germans drew the world into war while they exterminated Jewish men, women and children, many German people are still devastated by the results of our treatment of their population. These fictional accounts stem from accounts easily found in our history, I am certain over a larger sample period and through every culture on earth, we can find similar stories. Here they can be enlarged, simplified and sterilized without questions being asked during the suspension of belief to allow the orator time to tell a story that on average takes 30 minutes.
@micheallinne3159 16 сағат бұрын
You have a childcare voice, not a hfy voice. If it works for you, it works for you, but you speak too softly to really sell interplanetary anything. Your voice just isn't commanding enough for the full effect.
@reaperstanek2364 17 сағат бұрын
Stop with the constant repeating in these stories please
@slapmywilly 19 сағат бұрын
just another lazy auto generated voice.
@slapmywilly 19 сағат бұрын
HOLLY SHIT THIS AI STORY WAS BAD
@Joshkie2 20 сағат бұрын
This why you never pay the Danegeld.
@wonttell4873 21 сағат бұрын
To much repeating and unnecessary words. This only gets a dislike.
@dropshot1967 21 сағат бұрын
A prime example of a story that has too many repetitions, is trying to make the same point over and over, and just takes too long. The same story could be told in less than a third of the time. Is it written by a 12-year-old kid, or by an AI trying to impersonate a 12-year-old kid. This is not the first time on this channel, I am unsubscribing and blocking it for a time.
@mutantplants1 22 сағат бұрын
Why do these stories always treat the solar system as a two dimensional battle field where enemy ships have to pass through the planetary orbits and the asteroid belt when in reality they would attack directly from above or below the ecliptic, bypassing the rest of the solar system?
@troymclauren1546 Күн бұрын
Same Ole thing repeat to up the run time
@michaelblankenship6125 Күн бұрын
What a lot off Bla Bla like trying to ad words to story you heard over and over and I was getting bored as a listener So I went to another story !
@aarondizor1069 17 сағат бұрын
You are the one who is full of blah blah blah, if you don't like the story, just skip and don't watch. How pathetic!
@rastifan7863 Күн бұрын
More AI trash with all the "humans are the galactic semi gods". The plot is something a 14 year old would come up with.
@TEXASUSA45 Күн бұрын
Too repetitive. Same words over and over and over.
@morrisanderson818 Күн бұрын
Oh boo,hoo got annoyed, because they got the boot for being naughty grow up, id say typical human's,true to form, can't even get along today,let alone tomorrow
@KennethMulmat Күн бұрын
Nice modification - good tale. Problem - like many of the stories much too much repentive wording. The writing would have been more enjoyable if it was shorten.
@matzerat Күн бұрын
I agree with you! You are absolutely right!
@timb7328 Күн бұрын
So then the council was right but didnt go far enough. Earth is barbarically destroying cities and planets for no reason other than vengeance. Council thinks....we should have just destroyed Earth when we could instead of seeing if they could evolve into a peaceful species.
@Plankensen Күн бұрын
so first they don't know aboutt the vespra but then they do? sounds silly.
@Shinobubu Күн бұрын
Earth becomes Eco terrorists. Instead of preventing a catastrophe they accelerated it. Green Peace Logic.
@calvinmasters6159 Күн бұрын
"...You woke the sleeping giant..."? We misread the memo. We thought it said, "woke the sleeping gnat."
@EmmanuelBubod Күн бұрын
Same words used over and over in the same story...too much redundancy...
@ghostshadow9046 Күн бұрын
FAIL AI generated story
@GowonMattah Күн бұрын
Same sentences over and over and over
@user-xw9ci7vg3x Күн бұрын
More fingers flying across the controls?
@Ral9284 2 күн бұрын
The story is boring, it relies in deux ex machina a lot without setting it, and repeats itself.
@oldschoolmarine3047 2 күн бұрын
To many repetitions of the same phases.
@JMM33RanMA Күн бұрын
Yes, and also preachy. OTOH, watching these could be a drinking game, one shot per vocabulary mistake or repeated trope. Warning! Some of them are so full of errors that alcohol poisoning could be a distinct possibility!
@raymondcarter1137 2 күн бұрын
Repeat with me. Repeat with me. Repeat again and again
@blade65dagger 2 күн бұрын
What was the time line? 50 years sol standards? 2'000? 10k years? . . . the narrative seems chronologically fast forwarded. and yet it did not made footnotes how **occupied** manufacturing sectors switch sides and new tool-lings and tech where merged or repurposed to build faster rate of arms produce nor the R&D expansions. come to think of it, the more you pursue a galactic commerce and its weapons industries . . the thinner your spread out - the slower your to address some hostile multi-faceted fronts !!? the above seems a magic box is always there to ever produce exponentially more armadas to attacked some ever wider direction of targets ???
@eleklovatka7666 2 күн бұрын
Let me give critic: too long-winded. This whole story could be summarized in a sentence: "Humans were diplomats, not warriors, therefore the GC thought they are weak and went to exterminate them, but f*cked up, because humans fought back and decided to destroy them instead. The end." I get that this was done by an AI , but it should have been a 6-7 minute story instead of 23... all thanks to these: "they did not know that this would happen and now they were losing, though it will bring change, even when their defenses were crumbling, a new future was on the horizon, while everyone in the command center looked shocked when another force has fallen, though they didn't know that this will change everything they believed in"......
@EmmanuelBubod 2 күн бұрын
Redundant...
@I.C.U-c7l 2 күн бұрын
YES ANOTHER STUPID AND BULL$H*T STORY................. GOD THESE PEOPLE JUST SAT ANYTHING TO GET PAID
@jackreisewitz6632 2 күн бұрын
And the most ruthless strategy employed by humanity was to engage the empire with authors like this one who talked the empire forces to death.
@brucenice3169 2 күн бұрын
A pretty decent story here! could use a bit more work.
@ErtaiCZ Күн бұрын
And less repetition...
@DarrochJohnson 2 күн бұрын
Making a new Big Bang is unwise
@grandfather3710 2 күн бұрын
Come on, edit your texts
@johnrich6270 2 күн бұрын
this story had WAY to many repeats of the same few lines. If the story isn't long enough, and captivating enough, don't extend the story by repeating the same lines!!!!!!