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way too much melodrama dialogue and the story takes a major leap from him by his car to suddenly talking about his sleep

Beautifully written! Excellent. ❤🎉😊

Absolute Crap!

I've watched about 50 of these videos. I find them to be not very good. Your narrators need to learn how to read including grammar and punctuation. They are redundant and repetitive. Also there are more men's names than Liam, Alex, Jake, etc. Also no one is unaware as your characters as in, "I did not know what I was feeling." Or, "I don't know what I'm doing." Really?? Very dissapointed.

I watch your each video. Your great work. And more importantly your stories

Most stupid story ive heard with to many repitations

All about nothing

Incomplete story without end - waste of time - clickbaiting?

Fix your story before posting....would have been a good story had it been properly edited

Written by a silly elementary school girl. Boring crap I can’t listen to and have to turn off. Trying to block any further shit like this from popping up on my feed. 😎

Can't wait for chapter 2, beautiful story

Story needs editing as part of the story repeats itself and there are a few inconsistencies!

Clichés, clichés, clichés,boring boring boring 🤷🤷🤷🤦🤦🤦

Seems like these stories are written with AI. Storylines get whacky. 😮

Nice ❤❤❤

Nice ❤❤❤

In reality there are many a pervert cop out there.

Tell both parents what happened and now it is dad?

и что там дальше было ? расказ не полный, и думаю начни слушать все ваши рассказы, они все будут такими, фактически не законченными, а это не интересно

Did the creature run it's hands through it's hair?

Why is everyone running their hands through their hair?

Loyalty, commitment, sacrifice! Ethan needs help and Jamie needs to run away.

So many repeats of the same sentances, please listen to the stories posted and take out the repeated parts.

That story was totally ambiguous and lame

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It was frustrating to hear the same thing but in slightly different words. There was too much fluff. We got the picture after the first couple of times. If this was paid by the word, the payment would hit a jackpot. The premise of the story was excellent.

What a cool story

Have I mist something when did they get together I thought he had is own flat?

A lot of repeating all the time

What a gross way to share your personal fantasies by making normal ppl read this shit and they think its real and psychoanalyze it lmao

Boring. Stop repeating the same thing over and over again. Not a M4M story. You have failed your channel so give up now since you are too lazy to write stories yourself. Using AI is a cop out because this is crap! 😎

This was very confusing and not close to the title. The ending made no sense.

35 minutes of the the same rights, wrongs, guilts, hurts, trusts, betrayals, on and on and on. Blah blah blah...

Well, there's 37 minutes of my life that I'll never get back. What a dumb, pointless story. What did he do that was so terrible that his brother couldn't forgive him for and caused all this tension and trauma? It made no sense whatsoever, Like everyone else, I thought surely at the end of the story9 there would be an explanation... but nope. Just a fragment of non-story that went nowhere.

These stories are flooding KZbin. Every other story has a character named Liam or Ethan. In every story it's either 'we can work this thing out together' or 'his expression unreadable' or ' our foreheads resting together'. 'The air was thick with tension', 'I felt a jolt of electricity.' Often the same themes are explored. It's either between brothers, father and son, co workers, friends. Obviously this particular story is two halves of two completely different stories with characters of the same name. Characters often are living in the same house and suddenly one is living in an apartment. Or brothers are sharing a bedroom and suddenly they have separate rooms. Or an exam is scheduled for next day and suddenly there are weeks leading up to that same exam. Then there are the stories that go nowhere. A theme setting the scene is repeated on a loop. These stories have become a joke. Even gender changing from 'he' to 'she' and then back to 'he' again. The entire KZbin platform has become a forum for the insane. Thankfully most of these stories fail to garner a single comment. Just occasionally there is a good story. But mostly they fall under the category of 'time wasters'.

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More made-up crap . . . don't bother.

what a complete waste of time!!!!!

Your story is so so so boring. Good grief!!!! 9:25 9:34

Why did Ryan get mad and hurt. It was never explained why there was trouble between the brothers. Seems Ryan has problems of his own and needs professional help. Why try to satisfy Ryan, it seems he continues to lie about his feelings and stringing his brother along. What is the use if Ryan refuses to settle the problems and move on.

Wasn't terrible, but the ending was. WTF?!!!

TOTAL NONSENSE

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Why TF would I look forward to more protracted drivel like this. Deliberately drawn out and excruciatingly repetitive in order to milk the viewing minutes to the max. One minute, Ryan lives in the same house, in another room, and then, apparently after no time at all has passed, older brother is meeting him at a park near to his (Ryan's) apartment. One can only assume that older brother was caught masturbating by Ryan; Ok big deal! But, apart from that, all I did was waste another half hour reading, over and over again, the words, hurt, pain, anguish, love is not enough, and aftermath. AFTERMATH OF WHAT?? At no point in this boring load of dog shite, was there a single mention, apart from the (supposed) wanking incident, of anything at all that happened and that could have caused such emotional devastation. We never were told what was the massive secret that "poor little Ryan" was so heartbroken at not being told. And then, to top it all at the end we are "treated" to subtle(??) suggestions that these two might actually be incestuous lovers. WHEN TF did that happen, was it before or after the masturbation incident?? We were never told anything, only fed endless frustrating repetitive BS. What a complete waste of 37 minutes.

youtube why do you let people put this porn on here, so stupid......you just my as well play real porn

What an odd story. He walked in on his brother without knocking his bad. Not the end of the world, I wouldn't call it an ordeal or a storm. Gee wiz.

WTF is this crap ?

I'm trying to figure out if they're brothers or trying to be lovers, and since when do 17 yr Olds live in their own apartments, while the older brother lives at home with his parents. This story was all over the place.😮🤔🙄

He catches you playing with yourself so where did this attitude come from?