Why is it as I listened to the story the writing has gotten worse it's almost as if every part had a different writer and they were all slapped together at the end without a reread or rewrite

mfw one man makes the call to share earth with another species lmao

This story begins with an epic HFY to a slow death heading to oblivion full of woke politics, and stupid and incompetent Humans, with all of their technology unable to beat inferior Aliens who were depicted as weak in the first chapter, but Humans became incompetent fools as the chapter progress. Not worth my time. So much for the so-called Elder Race, an actual Elder Race would not need population to conquer their enemies when technologies can do all the heavy work, like the Forerunners in Halo. In Halo 1 Forerunner commander can make the whole galaxy bend with the help of automation and AI. This story could have been better and it really feels HFY in the first part even though there's a hint that it is AI-GENERATED Text, but the preceding Chapters are just a slow death with politics and what, too bad.

Gen Z bullsit

Wowee..! Great show, thanks for sharing …. 👍🏼😎👍🏼

Hi there, I am the author of Corridors over at /r/HFY, and you do not have permission to use my stories in your videos. Please remove all of the videos that you have made of Corridors, and do not make any more. I am writing this as a warning before I begin submitting copyright strikes against your channel. Viewers, you do not have to wait for this channel to continue stealing from me. You can find the story up to Chapter 26 at /r/HFY and search for Corridors.

Fuck YT adds👎👎👎👎

This is probably the best combination of story and artwork of this type. The artwork added a bit of emphasis and using different voices add depth to the narration. I won't nitpick the story apart because I believe people have a way of letting perfect be the enemy of good, and this is good work.

Awoken? Or awakened?

Simple, type in sci fi ,

Blue... yeah Guess vikings left a mark

Aaww. I'm sad to learn that. 'Just like old times'. :-(

kjh

i know starship troopers when i hear it.

Although I am waiting I’m fearful how long chapter 11 will be haha

ENJOYED A LOT

a lot better than most

awesome awesome

When is part 11 coming out I’ve heard this chapter a number of times now just so I can stay interested please I hope it comes soon 👍🏻👍🏻😃

Great series! There has been a "1 unavailable video is hidden" notice just under the list of 10 current videos for a couple of days now, any change of that being released today?

Not complete?

Enjoying the story. I like the graphics too. I wonder why humans aren't simply asking the Drikenyl all their questions. They're an interstellar race with advanced tech. Surely they have doctors, scientists and engineers among the survivors. Why aren't humans working with them? Why run tests on a piece of Drikenyl skin when they could just consult with a Drikenyl doctor who could tell them all about it?

Good video thank you

Oh Derick I hope he survives I’m really enjoying this story it definitely has legs and I feel it’s going to get even better 👍🏻👍🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻😃😃

Great chapter 🎉

Awesome, keep it up!

This IS a great series please KEEP up the GREAT WORK

Great Video

❤❤ More please!! Need to know what happens next

this is one of the higher quality videos ive seen the art work is a huge plus and really adds to the story and makes it much better to watch thanks for the hard work

Great series. Much better then most! Hope there are new chapters coming.

AI audiobook, not too bad.

Great Video

If you enjoyed the style of this video, whether or not the story hit the mark for you, consider checking the new series, 'Corridors.' With today's episode, it surpasses 'The Elder Race' in length, now totaling 4 hours and 15 minutes, with much more to come. First episode of Corridors: kzbin.info/www/bejne/f3ObZo2Jr92jl80 Playlist link: kzbin.info/www/bejne/f3ObZo2Jr92jl80 Corridors by u/Nanoprober: After humanity received the gift of interstellar travel technology from a species of bird-like aliens called the Onathins, we did with it what we do best. Obviously, this means that we accidentally turned it into a weapon. Good thing we did, though, because as Humanity explored the stars, we found a horrifying enemy, hell-bent on destroying all life on its path towards the galactic center. Corridors is a story of how one small tweak to a gifted technology can alter the entire course of history for Humanity and all the destines of the nearby interstellar civilizations.

Ooohgh nope.. It's like AI decided it's not necessary to even try make it sound convincing.

Any story that open up with a visual description of _anything_ is hack. It is the hackest way to start a story and only hacks do it. Hack that hack the hack up, hack.

There's a book series called The Wanderer by Simon Goodson. I think this is in the same "universe". The taint and the physical characteristics are the same

Was this written by a 13 yo? English might not be their first language to be fair.

this canal project is incredibly STUPID.. Cambodia is not even connected to China , it is surrounded by 3 other countries AND it isn't even connected to Andaman Sea, so what benefits are there to waste that much money on it? AND the Mekong river's depth is strongly influenced by the rainy season which can drop to a very low level. China will still have to go thru the Malacca strait.. China should invest that money in Myanmar which IS connected to the Andaman Sea and the canal will bypass ALL of SOUTH EAST ASIA. Also Myanmar is well known for it's jade and many more jewerly rocks, so digging a canal there will benenit both countries economically.

darek better not die! 😢❤❤❤

Who wrote "The Kill Switch" it's like a toddler wrote it.

Thanks for the story, 😊

I do like how an exploration drone is on par with alien weapons when used by Humans

I was waiting for this... since last chapter. 😁

Is a great story but it's unfinished

Why not send a drone and/or probe out first??!!

Where's the rest?

Excellent 😊