Way too many repetitive sentences, sometimes just reworded a little.
@Perurikun12 сағат бұрын
i could see this story getting developed into a limited tv series with the right budget. or a movie in the vein of Valerian and the City of a Thousand Planets. 😁👊🖖
@zelda-t9q20 сағат бұрын
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼💖!
@ericgrace9995Күн бұрын
Teenage fiction. Every feelgood cliché imaginable. .
@TheMadwokКүн бұрын
Going to need a long time to heal my injuries from falling in all the gaping plot holes. Crap.
@JackT1961Күн бұрын
why do these stories always replay certain parts. it's annoying
@dochunnicutt6980Күн бұрын
Oh hell no sarah chen again. Total crap learn a new story
@marinesgt8048Күн бұрын
Good story 👍
@stephenpaton9906Күн бұрын
I know a Sarah chenz 😂
@trampertravelsКүн бұрын
Boring!
@janmalan1463Күн бұрын
Ah Adam and Eve surname was Chen for sure
@timlewis5096Күн бұрын
Absolute rubbish. A click Bait header and an AI more interested in how man y words it can pack in. The Content Creator needs to go back to school and learn the old ways. Throw the AI you used out and narrate the stories yourself!!! Stop wasting my time with such rubbish
@ronwick3022Күн бұрын
Hold my beer
@jeston2862 күн бұрын
Is the author of these stories named Sarah Chen? Or is it a multivers kinda thing
@BoniCAST2 күн бұрын
Spd writer keeps repeating the same line 6X.
@karl-heinzklimach12842 күн бұрын
Please NO MORE CHENS !
@arkoone49052 күн бұрын
AUDIO SUCKS !
@janetriggan32672 күн бұрын
Great Story
@tcstms-gmail13272 күн бұрын
Numerous mispronunciations detract from a good storyline. Quality/accuracy control?
@janmalan14632 күн бұрын
Tin foil hats ...war over
@beccabbea25112 күн бұрын
It was a good story, which I enjoyed. However, it needs editing, badly, as there is a repeat of part of the story, word for word. There is too much repetition, and yes, we got the message. They had been preparing for FIFTY years. And then there are the incorrect pronunciations. That said, it was different, and as I mentioned, I enjoyed listening to it. Thanks.
@saramarrspellmaker95922 күн бұрын
The ending would never happen!
@beccabbea25112 күн бұрын
Sarah Chen! Phew! I was worried for a few minutes there. Pleased to know the famous Sarah Chen is alive and well, and that she is an admiral.
@jpassen59802 күн бұрын
I really wish the narrator could pronounce armada!!
@RickH-v2g21 сағат бұрын
Blame he AI reader! 😅
@CyberOdyssey-f8i2 күн бұрын
There's something wrong with the narrator's voice :)
@dochunnicutt69802 күн бұрын
Good story, but pls learn to read the words correctly
@RickH-v2g22 сағат бұрын
They use AI readers, hence bad pronunciations of words.
@SYSBM4Life2 күн бұрын
This is not a good story at all. Title is never in this story. Sad using AI is bad at making stories.
@karl-heinzklimach12842 күн бұрын
Enough of the Chens already !
@reinovator2 күн бұрын
Why the repetition in the Story? Stupid!
@troyculp13102 күн бұрын
Hey if y’all didn’t know consciousness can be harvested
@oddquad20103 күн бұрын
Any idea can be taken to an extreme and I believe that, in this story, they did just do that here. The premise is exciting and has great merit but when the plant that lights the commode also wipes out the waste from your butt I think that they have gone too far.🤓. This example is my exaggerated idea but it shows that a premise can be taken WAY too far. They came very close to that in this tale. The story basis is unique and fascinating so do NOT discard this one story using my complaint Listen and create your own opinion. I implore you to play it through and see if my opinion was overboard. PLEASE. L.M.K what you think about this unique story. I will be watching for your opinions. Thank you writer and thank you reader \ listener.!!!😳😲😬🙄🙄😯😧😮😣😖😵🖖👽 🖖👽🖖 🖖👽🖖
@alfredcane90893 күн бұрын
Chen again and again
@acefire40503 күн бұрын
I never consider a moon as satellite.A moon is a moon.It's not one of those little metal objects.You put in space and circles the Earth or goals and crashes on the Mars and just drives around Mars.Come on, why do everybody call moona satellite?It's a freaking moon
@beccabbea25112 күн бұрын
Yes, the moon is a moon. However, it is also a satellite. It can be both.
@darkshadow92912 күн бұрын
It's called a natural satellite
@LindaVanasperen6 сағат бұрын
Then why are there stories of the world before the moon?
@rogerlarge48273 күн бұрын
Editing is crap. But story 7 of 10.
@GraemeWilby3 күн бұрын
A few minutes into the story and I hear the name Sarah chen Time for another story
@Zetsumei223 күн бұрын
So please use different names including alien names and also proof read the words since first it was armada then it was armeta.
@richardbradfield74373 күн бұрын
Awesome story! Really enjoyed it!
@thomasweeds34253 күн бұрын
Really good story.
@oldschool33723 күн бұрын
Another chapter is needed
@kaykaymishka55483 күн бұрын
Love this take on humanity... showing what the definition of HUMANITY could mean if we all pooled together the best of our beliefs ❤
@acefire40503 күн бұрын
Then human decides to go there with a whole army Fleet and captures the whole thing.Because you know aliens.There are an enemy to Earth.Put in again they are a science lab tests for humanity to test
@acefire40503 күн бұрын
Of course it's not over yet
@acefire40503 күн бұрын
Of course, every alien Vader that was captured.They're not gonna let them go ever.They're gonna make their way to earth and make their way to area fifty one and be locked up forever and no just be sentenced to life because of their crimes anyways so they'll never get back to their home
@LawrenceKennard3 күн бұрын
A great science fiction story❤
@acefire40503 күн бұрын
Of course.There's another couple of fleets coming from Earth.Yet that you talked about before the major Fleet.Even coming so when are they gonna arrive?Just after the Zarconian fleet , Another Fleet of the United States arrives and then a couple days later, another, one of the United States fleets arrives.Or should I say Earth and Mars?Oh, and don't forget about all the other places that were sent to help too.Even if there are small forces that would still make a large force eventually with all the numbers
@Ron-y1b3 күн бұрын
If this is still the HFY Chronicles A.I, then it has greatly improved. Little to non bloviating self aggrandizement. So much better
@acefire40503 күн бұрын
Of course, it could not be the United States because the United States would have set off within 20 minutes.Cause they already have a fleet because united states always has a fleet
@ericgrace9995Күн бұрын
And for God's sake : Don't Touch Their Boats !!
@acefire40503 күн бұрын
And then United States sites to use the lasers that they invented in 2020 that they perfected in 2012 that to share with the armed forces of the United States and 23. That is hotter than the surface of the Sun and get chewed at 350 target. How does it surface of the send out their Fleet within 10 minutes of any sign of distress from any other place which means they've been traveling to that place for a long time already. United States has laser. Guns shouldn't hotter than the surface of the Sun can make the moon disappear in 3 seconds if they shot it. So what is it gonna do to a Fleet? You would not. Wanna know. But it will vanish