Bad story, jumps around, double story. CACA. Do better or do something else.

The sentence should read "who now identify as males but haven't made the transition yet?"

Why is the female letter carrier referred to as "his" and "he" in this story as women are referred to in many others so that the words "her" and "she don't have to be mentioned? So are you telling me now that your females are actually gay males acting as crossdressers or transexual females who now identify as males but having made the transition yet? If either case is true then I will cease viewing your stories and block you! Fix the problem and when you say that a person is a woman say "her" or "she" and when it is a man say "his" or "he." ALSO, when you tell us a discription of the character make sure that the description matches the photo or video of the character. I have noticed BOTH of these errors on other Sci Fi videos as well! Have good day!

Speaking of the artwork; it sure is cute. Makes me think of what you might get if you genetically mixed a Smurf, Barny the Purple Dinosaur, and a Teletubby 🤪

Where is her other ear in the picture Congratulations with your AI picture It set off my OCD Where is the other ear I'm only here for that Give it another ear please

The AI is BAD. Tale verbose, rambling, repetative and predictable. Story a HOOOOOO HUUUUUUUM weak, poorly thought out and weakly written. Suggestion- every power has a warrior elite. Better would be for Earth to guide, train, and prepare the Woman Diplomat and to teach Her military stealth, logistics and leadership. Armed with Her restored Diplomatic acumen and synergized with a powerful military mind-set, she returns to lead a new Diplomatic Mission. Her clothing reflects a blend of Grace, Elegance, and hidden Military Utility. On her first day as Diplomat for Earth, someone says she looks familiar. She speaks that she is new to these negotiations . Oddly different, Her tunic bears the markings of Earth's Diplomatic Service and a name patch that says, "Laura Croft". Her kidnappers return "waiting in the wings". But as the kidnappers look in to Her eyes, they have a feeling of unease and the beginnings of the Fear that descends on criminals who see Justice coming for them. By day, she is an exemplary Diplomat. By night, she becomes a terrifyingly efficient and stealthy Warrior who seeks out and punishes her kidnappers leaving them alive, terrified, broken, and weak. Justice is served; the CALTHRAX leadership hesitates moving towards a less beligerant stance. They abandon these criminals who become beggars with no Rights as Calthraxian Citizens.

Good story & enjoyed it. However, it had nothing to do with the title. Good stories don't need click bait titles & images. 🤔🤨😒

Why does Ai always write about blue alien women and crystalline energy?

The journey had just begun? If you say so. I'll never know what their journey was going to be because you chose to end this tale when the Climax hadn't been completed. Without that happening there cannot be a Falling action nor a Resolution. You have no intention of taking this tale to fruition which means the tale will never continue as it should. IMHO that is not acceptable. So I won't ever be frustrated again with another unfinished tale from this channel. Why? Because KZbin has this awesome feature titled "Don't Recommend Channel." I'll activate it and then poof'.....your channel will never be recommended to me by KZbin ever again. I'm gone.

To many words and to much repeating. Dislike.

This guy defines a young engineer. A few years ago I read a study of highly educated professionals in their late 40's-early 50s. They possessed what seemed to their younger colleagues an uncanny diagnostic ability - to quickly & correctly analyse a situation and arrive at a solution, then to further refine it during application. What their younger associates didn't - could not - grasp is that the ability is based in literally thousands of prior real world instances. A knowledge base arising from right - and wrong - resolutions, by themselves and others. It allows them to assess a problem and quickly arrive at what seemed an instinctive method of addressing it. One that proved correct in almost every case and that they were quickly able to adapt and adjust to resolve the issue in most of the cases when their initial diagnosis wasn't ideal. Other studies indicates, for most individuals, prodigies excepted, across multiple fields - medicine, music, science, teaching - mastery of a field requires 20,000 hours of DOING in that field. In that time an individual builds the internal knowledge base allowing one to solve problems their highly educated associates (but haing less experience) viewed as almost mystical. Circumstances forced me to stop providing flight instruction in my late 50's, almost 15 years ago. I had never been better - at understanding different students based on their behavior and reactions, in anticipating their thoughts, at succinctly communicating instruction in real time, adapting it both to their response and the changing flight environment we were in. Now in my seventies with a degree in Journalism and decades of sales experience, I'm better than I've ever been at communicating and convincing. If 'Ethan' is fortunate enough to age he will likely reach a point at which Lyricia's different abilities will be not only easier to understand but welcomed. True partnership is rate even in the same species. It would be a good theme to explore, I think.

A good message about working together but a couple of issues with the overall story. 1. Deep space is cold. They wouldn’t be getting hotter, but colder. 2. If the inside temp reached 160 degrees Fahrenheit none of them would survive.

One thing about this video and others like it is that all the men are fully clothed, but when it comes to the women, they barely have anything on. Whom ever write this video appears that they think that women walk around with barly anything on. They need to grow up PIGS.

Why is ALMOST every story sexually oriented? And why are ALL alien females always nude? Answer; a sexually frustrated creator's idea.

So you are telling me that the Mail man is gay . !!!

Look's like Barbie and Ken Engineer.

seductress??

My story's so much shorter: - It gets hot - I remove my shirt - Alien girls send me to check the airlock

Really irritating AI narration when it can't even pronounce the protagonist's name correctly

i completely lost interest as soon as i learned that we wouldnt get to make them suffer, the incessant repetition of awful AI written slop is the final straw. i'm blocking this channel from my feed and you should too.

What happened to the nanites in their veins reparing their wounds 'instantly'? Why leave a message that "Earth Remembers' if earth should not be implicated? Why even attack if you know the enemy fleet cannot be stopped? Their retalliation will come, unless you can make certain they won't be able to. The story is a collection of plotholes, repeats and weird, incorrect assumptions. I stopped it halfway. Also... Why not 'leak' the information gathered from the intelligence centre... Let the entire galaxy know the plans, forcing them to unite for their own safety... Yeah, not impressed at all with this one...

Bla bla

Certain words are misspelled .... Example : ' as the evening wore on .. ' Instead the caption said / as the evening moron... ( Why the mistake?

Why a blue face and neck,, but a different color from the neck down.., ? ( Just a curiosity question

This is such a rip-off of Star Wars and Independence Day among many others that I'm surprised you aren't being sued for copyright infringement!

The stories like this are kinda boring because you can't put anything naughty on youtube. Just stick to "wow humans are strong/tough/weird" stories.

So they sent basically their entire military command structure on this milk run to smack an infant species. Because they wanted to make sure nobody got lazy. And what happens? The military command just half-assed an attack anyway, so their soldiers were still unprepared. Maybe letting the snipers retire the top 15 in line for the throne would put some better generals in charge.

Command failure #1: we should have realized that once we do any visible action, they’ll launch an “overwhelming” invasion. If our stealth tech is so good, we should have put cloaked bombs on every enemy ship. “Oh looks, they’ve sent their Third Fleet to smash proxima… <presses button> so now the third fleet mysteriously vanishes en route to attacking Earth. I assume these aliens still have a single sovereign. Every time they move against Earth, whoever is the sitting monarch dies. Three or four cycles of that… eventually someone who assumed she was so far from the throne it would never be theirs. And now that person is realizing if she attacks earth like her older sisters did, she’ll probably be assassinated.

This sory had promise,to much repeat and repeat,repeat

Did they not say that this was a mission not to implicate Earth but yet still left a message implicating Earth? I could be wrong...

🤔 This was cool until the narrator mentioned the two female members of the special forces each unit. Special units don’t have females nor should they. That took away from the story. Other than that it would make a good move. A lot of repeats and the characters name are used in several similar stories . Most likely A.I. generated or assisted.

At some point it feels like the ai got caught in a loop and didnt know how to continue the story

Pathetically Repetitive with totally implausible plot holes.

This is actually badly written. Again we see a complete lack of research. A diplomat would Absolutely have access to secret information. Also human politicians wouldn't care what happened to a diplomat unless it became public knowledge.

So is she like a cyborg or an Android it talks about being programmed and sensors

The humans mess with the data...Somehow, the the Calthrax noticed the intrusion. 😮‍💨

clickbait

It's Gypsy Danger's big bro

Listened to less than half because it was read soooooo slow. Need a new robot to read the story.

So is she an alien robot?

Let me get this straight all of humanity’s super soldiers are women 💩

I am impressed that you didn't use the same names used in other stories like this; or the same phrases like "atmosphere was palpable", etc. You are original. Great job!

Likely A.I. written, constantly repeats itself. Cool artwork, and a good concept.

Nice artwork.

She learned nothing. John should have told her the truth the growth was controlled by her leaning over him in the loose top she was wearing. He should have told her if you want to see something neet watch what happen if you let me hold them for science.

Humans could get almost wiped out and as long as James Kirk survives, he can repopulate the galaxy.