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@ i was wondering if it was that last line on the first verse that tripped you up in to the chorus.

@@thewhiterabbituk still a lil confused

@ i am listening again. has this been written down with pen and paper?

what happens if you move the chorus and run two verses together?

yeah thank you i thought itd add effect

my next one i just wrote is better bro

thank you 👊

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yo, yano what depending on where ya from you can join one my brother 👊

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gonna remaster it better instrumentals, stay tuned with notifications on my g

merry late xmas to you too, i checked your channel out and sorry but im not interested in collaberating since your videos are a different genre thanks

gun in me gum hahaha funny comment tho

quite mentally ill so that helps the creative flow haha

@ I suffer with mental health for the last 20 years mate. I’m 40 now about seven years ago. I got the help and now I’m much better. Best thing to do is talk about it bro.

@@flowersintheattic2411 yeah musics how i vent emotions experiences and thoughts as im quite psychotic and depressed and have 2 personalities

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cheers brother, homemade. subscribe to hear more gonna be multiple uploads a week with how well it seems to be going g