It was great author just one thing could you skip the baccha part? If u don't mind... and it's okay if u don't skip too I'll still keep loving your works love ya💜
@OgArmy-zКүн бұрын
Did anybody noticed at 2:13 she wrote tae instead of tea 🤣😜
@muffin.24Күн бұрын
Love it❤ Well done author
@Kookielover-ot7Күн бұрын
Wooowwwww awesome 🫰🏻♥️♥️♥️
@FarihaAnjum1Күн бұрын
Aweeeeee😳😳😳😳😳🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣💕💕💕💕i loved y/n's character here innocent and soft but not dumb
@BTSarmygirl-pb6zh2 күн бұрын
Masterpiece indeed 👏😁😅😊😂🎉💘💝♾️🫂😌🌟🤌💐🎉💞✨💓🥳😍💜🐰🐰
@Sooyasbangtang_fairy2 күн бұрын
It was good but somewhere it makes me cringe reason I skip so many of it 😂
@hardeephardeep11703 күн бұрын
Vote for part 2 👇
@gabyreyes10573 күн бұрын
❤❤❤❤❤ perfection indeed
@tejasshree49733 күн бұрын
Your ff is awesome but I request u to not use the word bachcha. I think it means child in Hindi. It feels awkward as it is a word used by parents or elders ( I just know Hindi a little bit, correct me if am wrong). No offense, just my opinion😊❤
@beapsaeot71123 күн бұрын
Yess,, I said the same thing before... The ff is awesome.. but this 'Baccha ' feels like Emotional Daaamage😢 Plz dont use this
@Palak-x3m8w3 күн бұрын
@@beapsaeot7112but I think it gives just a safe feeling it helps to make u feel protective by a loved one(who is elder)
@ckdramalove-jz6dk3 күн бұрын
No bacha gives a safe feeling and having said by our partners means he has got our back so in my opinion I love bacha so dont stop ❤❤
@osenatnazari82473 күн бұрын
I think it cute
@mujiburrahman79142 күн бұрын
Yeah you're r8
@nimmiwithmona63023 күн бұрын
Not me this time I was busy in exam😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔 sorry
@AliZafarn-m1p3 күн бұрын
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@GazalaAnjum-u1n3 күн бұрын
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@GazalaAnjum-u1n3 күн бұрын
Caught you in 10 min 😁
@RituMahaman3 күн бұрын
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@17S123 күн бұрын
4th comment🎉❤i love your ff's they're amazing
@anjuaman41173 күн бұрын
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@NaisargiPatel-k2f3 күн бұрын
Heyy author it’s amazing I was waiting for your next ff….. ❤❤❤
@funnybee24313 күн бұрын
Caught u in 20 sec😅 pin me
@AshaRani-hg8jb3 күн бұрын
First🎉
@ShiviMittal-r1b5 күн бұрын
Your English is terrible
@Meowzik_official5 күн бұрын
Unnie it's fantastic I can't explain. I love the purity of the ff and how fantastic it'was I'm subbing you for more. I'm waiting for the next one ❤❤❤❤
😢That's why i never request to anyone as i know no one even look at my suggestion it's so heartbreaking 😔😞but i love your stories author you are amazing
@BTSforever16096 күн бұрын
Bonus Like after their marriage rin came to separate them and jk showing his dangerous side to her
@ShivangeeShandiliya-uw7rx6 күн бұрын
Awesome 💜💜
@daddaboo6 күн бұрын
see now also she didn't understand our request
@kooktaeinnocentgirl6 күн бұрын
Dear, it's not like that!! I creat like the way my mind can.. & I try to make what I can so please understand..
@daddaboo5 күн бұрын
@@kooktaeinnocentgirlit's completely depends on you
@javeriyaraza91276 күн бұрын
The last line "her smiling face calmed her dad's heart" ❤
@manjuthakran34346 күн бұрын
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@umeshavani10406 күн бұрын
👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻💜💜💜💜💜💜💜ILOVE IT SO MUCH 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻