Well written

😒Disappointed in this story. Cheating by the husband is not addressed and although his being poisoned was wrong, so was his cheating. I guess the writer thought cheating on your spouse was okay.👎

A story of two brave woman, battered and abused, but managed to build a better life for themselves,.A good story. Thank you!❤

So, what was Gloria doing when all the courtroom stuff was going on? Was she being a supportive wife? Did she ask for a divorce? Did she freak out? She is quite an important character because he suspected her so why wasn't more made of her role in the story? It was obviously going to be the mistress because she had easy access to his food and drinks. The brother was definitely shifty but I didn't forsee that Julia was his mistress too. Nice little twist there. I enjoyed this story. It kept my attention throughout.

I thought when the crow. Landed on the coffin something good was going to happen. I don't see the sense of the story I didn't hear about how. ,and when the child was poison

Good story that ends in heartbreak

The hospital never reported the poisoning? So the cheater was being poisoned by his mistress and loyal brother 😂

Dumb men are everywhere. Martin has an affair with a woman who is his brother's lover. Scot, the brother wanted his own brother death to take over his company for power and money. Scot used his lover to have an affair with his own brother to poison him. This is not new in human history. Power, money and evil women are always behind the downfall of empires/nations/civilisation. We human, never learn. 😢 😢 😢

5 mins in and this has the Mistress and his brother's fingerprints are all over his poisoning!! Dummy😅😅😅

Wrongly suspected his wife instead of his mistress....?

Good story and Narration.

Goodness what happen to tom did he die or what.?

i will not look at them any more

Didn't even say who did it dang

Your endings are not good at all

The pitchers don't go with the store

This is a good story and excellent narration

Story shows the bad side of people. But was good story, thank you 😊

A beautiful story but it's ending was to abrupt. It didn't say anything about kelly , her condition. How they came to find out that Mr Kamp had staged everything. I was disappointed with the ending , but I loved the story ❤.

The end: It's insane that people don't understand/ don't want to understand "All charges were dropped"

1300 AD. Hafiz, Persia/ Iran, said this: "It's easy to steal a tiger's cubs. As easy as it is to remove a delusion from Julia's mind"

This is a very good story. Thank you!

Unsatisfactory ending to this story. Wish I hadn't bothered with it. It was obvious that Jason would always cheat and she shouldn't have been surprised, after finding him out the first time.

your Stoers are good but the end of them suck biskets

i don't like the end

LOTS OF TALKIES OVR TALKNG INSTEAD OF ACTION

You have finish your story's.

Wish there was a better ending she is making a big mistake but she will learn as we all do! There is someone special waiting for ethan.❤

Poor Ethan ? BS. HE IS GOING TO CHEAT AGAIN & soon !

Shouldn't have taken him back in the first place! Once a cheater, always a cheater!

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story is cut off, incomplete😒😒

You need an internet after 5 years of prison to work a laptop

This voice’s stroller , always has dead end finishing.

Her friend 's advice is correct. The man betrayed once, and you forgive him, thinking that's the last .You're either stupid or naive

Another attractive story 😍.

Poor Ethan. He’s a rebound. The ending? Ethan realised and ran away from her as fast and far as possible! 😂

Please spelling is deplorable

Which part is that fortune teller😢

Good story but no ending how come,

This is such a thrilling plot! The suspense is real, and I’m hooked to find out what’s in the fiancé’s car. I love how the story is building up the mystery!

Thanks for the warnings that there is no ending. That will save me time that would have been better spent elsewhere!

Oh no not again story cuts off needs ending,,l

Explain where the gypsy came from. Ridiculous.

Part 2. Next time warn people when the story is in two parts.

She listens to a fortune teller ends the engagement. Reinvents herself. Meets Ethan that offers a new perspective on living life? Takes back the cheater because everything is right in her life again. Listens again to a fortune teller. Ends the engagement again. Calls Ethan? Check yourself into therapy lady before you ruin Ethan

What about Ethan? This story was incomplete. She wanted to believe in that jerk. Everyone wanted her to marry him anyway? Forcing a marriage for alliances again?

Enjoyed this story- Thank you to the author and Narrator❤

I'm just a little confused was that his parents? ❤

Story cut off. Needs ending.