Very nice; short, sweet and satisfying indeed to imagine the cretinous serpent-character smashed into mulch and all its ill-works fall to insignificance. My compliments for your artistic talent as well, the illustration very much compounds the tone of the work. My one suggestion for future works is that if you download a freeware audio editing program such as 'Audacity' (assuming you don't have it already), you can edit out the breaths between sentences which will make for a smoother narration.