Wow, that is very descriptive . I love it . The Vacari is pretty merciless . Vey dark story .

cool work

16:00 A successful defence is too dangerous? It's hard to believe !! 20:30 Absurd woke arguments!!

While later claiming That the opponent ship dwarfs the defiant. When writers say stupid crap like that it just goes to show you that it's either been written by AI Which isn't advanced enough to tell a Which isn't advanced enough to tell a decent story Or the writers just lazy and doesn't double check and add it is own story. It's a decent story story except for that I'm sure he was just trying to create drama some sort but You just can't make those kind of conflicting statements

Keep track of your own statements please. The defiant can't be the largest ship on the battlefield by far no. 🇦🇸🇧🇷🇦🇸🇧🇸🇧🇪 🇦🇸🇦🇸 🇧🇪🇧🇷🇧🇸

Cool story, good job

A good story but it needed duplication edited out.

great job, cool story

Can't listen to this crap.

very cool

Great story

So are there any male crew members or is this an all-female earth and Mars and anywhere else? I mean the blatant sexism is really unpalatable.

cool

Cool

WTF is with the restarts?? Ridiculious...

Palpable that women are the main defense of Earth, lol

next chapter?

Why is this looping & repeating itself?

Load of shit don't bother watching keeps jumping

capt karen was at fault!

Where's the audio

Good story 👍

So the spaceship just appeared out of thin air. OK then!!!

Well you-all TRYED 😊🎉

You were doing good until the repetition kicked in.

Shit chick lit.

Most of these AI sci-fi channels have a decent AI narrator, but like others have stated, they don't have a human give it a once over before pumping it out. The stories are all over the place or repeat with subtle changes. Some are better than others, but every single channel seems to have horrible subtitle generation. The same characters name, one sentence later, is spelled differently. And most don't let us turn the bad subs off. Lazy work in this genre so far it seems.

I liked this story. Nice to see we don't have to go all the way to humans making peace with the whole galaxy and being the overlords in a HFY.

Do you think that any Sci Fi story can exist without using the word PALPABLE?

Childish and Stupid.

This was a good story, i liked it.

I understand that you are using AI, but it would be great if you could take the time to proofread your work. Proofreading is an integral part of ensuring the quality of your publications. By doing this, you'll be ahead of other AI authors and ensure that we can fully enjoy the stories you are creating. Thank you for your attention to this matter.

Did we miss a few pages?? Repetitive, and what outburst? Wow.. I've read better stories from 5th graders..

Too much jumping around. Hard to get a good feel for the story

I liked the story* Great Naration

this story is soooo raw, its like a first draft of a first grader or crack head.

Seemed short but good

You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Cx were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, end on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps you ran out of time, it would be a fitting end to this story .

You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Seahawks were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, and on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps she ran out of time, it would be a filling in, as there was no end to this story .

Thats right... our soldiers are super model warrior maidens descended from Aphrodite herself. More importantly though, the blood of Ares himself runs in their veins and they will $!#@ing BURY you. Not complaining but this constant AI image of the ridiculously gorgeous human girl in scifi armor is hilarious.

This makes sense no. It jumps from one point to the other. Is like pieces of the story were cut off.

How many times will the Captain leave thr med bay and still be there???

Good story.

Whoa whoa whoa, Why is the story repeating but slightly different? Yall run out of story?

I like the story 

While I do love the “humans come to the rescue” themed stories.. Just as an inside joke, some alien bastard named Ralph, some slightly absurd human name would be a blast..😂 🤭👍

Zorgan, Zoran,Zonian / Zargon, Zaren, Zarthon? The author is confused with the species and characters? This story should have started with the second half repeat. I wanted to like the story, too much confusion with the name(s) of the whatever species and leadership. Weapons description was also varied and confused. Try again, try proofreading next time.

Okay, first problem. The implication in the first scan of Earth is that the aliens are tracking a pack of wolves hunting when they come upon the dog, and its companion. Why does the narrtor immediately assume that the biped is the higher life form? and not the quadruped that is genetically similar to the animals they were tracking? Other problems flow out of that first switch. Can we hear how the aliens discuss their data instead of always being "told" by the narrator? This piece needs a good editor.

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Good story need another one