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@bradhaaf4749
@bradhaaf4749 11 сағат бұрын
Gets beautiful queen & ancient power but he fights it and walks away... ya thats believable 😂😂😂 As if any man would make that choice...
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 8 сағат бұрын
Thanks for your comment
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 15 сағат бұрын
What are your thoughts on the story?
@johnmoore8016
@johnmoore8016 16 сағат бұрын
If they are out there I would like to meet one of them to see what they are like. Good story. (Mississippi gulf Coast, USA).
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 14 сағат бұрын
@@johnmoore8016 Thank you for your comment ❤️
@anthonypyritz2927
@anthonypyritz2927 18 сағат бұрын
🎼 I'm just a gigolo and everywhere I go...
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 14 сағат бұрын
@@anthonypyritz2927 🤔
@jas8542
@jas8542 Күн бұрын
Where are all the Men??
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine Күн бұрын
That's the concept of the story; no men
@StoryVerse9337
@StoryVerse9337 Күн бұрын
Hello how are you i watch your channel I like your videos please tell me which app use to story generate i want too make videos please guide me i will be thankful to you all time.
@kellywilkins8043
@kellywilkins8043 Күн бұрын
Would like to see a continuation of this story with a happy ending!
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine Күн бұрын
Thanks for your comment
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine Күн бұрын
What are your thoughts on the story?
@williamcarney8119
@williamcarney8119 Күн бұрын
Too bad he did not stay.
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine Күн бұрын
@@williamcarney8119 If he stayed, the story would have to be longer, he had to come back to earth so it wouldn't be a boring story. Thanks for your comment ❤️
@MrEddienoe
@MrEddienoe 2 күн бұрын
Need him to go back to her and make a baby
@LuisZenquis-c8n
@LuisZenquis-c8n 2 күн бұрын
I like this type of story I want more.
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 2 күн бұрын
Thanks for your comment ❤️
@tetaomichel
@tetaomichel 2 күн бұрын
@@Sci-fiLine I am against genocide so i am against Israel. Better delete my comments as you Zionists always hide the truth ;) O I AM a Jew. So forget the AS shit.
@tetaomichel
@tetaomichel 2 күн бұрын
How many alien queens are searching for virile human males? Where can I send my CV?
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 2 күн бұрын
@@tetaomichel Thank you for sharing your opinion
@tetaomichel
@tetaomichel 2 күн бұрын
@@Sci-fiLine YT messed up. I posted this reaction somewhere else. Must be new. I change the post a bit, more positive ;)
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 2 күн бұрын
What are your thoughts on the story?
@juangringo3906
@juangringo3906 2 күн бұрын
All that just to say dude had sex with a alien to save both humanity and the alien species. 🙄
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 2 күн бұрын
You don't like it?
@OmnipotentSag
@OmnipotentSag 2 күн бұрын
Is there a part 2?
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 2 күн бұрын
@@OmnipotentSag It will be soon
@OmnipotentSag
@OmnipotentSag 2 күн бұрын
@@Sci-fiLine Team Luna! Haha -=80)
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 2 күн бұрын
😂
@markjackson2247
@markjackson2247 3 күн бұрын
Poorly written, Jack is just random human with zero backstory. He never once tries to explain WHY freedom and self determination are important and Saris never explains why she is so curious about humans. They never communicate with each other.
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 2 күн бұрын
Thank you for sharing your opinion
@richardprobst7885
@richardprobst7885 3 күн бұрын
I will volunteer to live with her
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 3 күн бұрын
Really?
@LeslieWatson-t5f
@LeslieWatson-t5f 3 күн бұрын
This reminds me of an old Two Ronnies joke… And tonight we will be talking to an Arab Sheik who married to 365 wife’s. He be explaining why he really looks forward to leap-years 😂❤️
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 3 күн бұрын
@@LeslieWatson-t5f Thank you for your valuable comment ❤️
@LeslieWatson-t5f
@LeslieWatson-t5f 3 күн бұрын
@@Sci-fiLine I still like the story but that joke kept coming to mind. Sorry if I offended anyone but I just couldn’t shake it 🤷🏻‍♂️…
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 3 күн бұрын
👍👍
@michaellinnet6095
@michaellinnet6095 4 күн бұрын
I wanted him to report Serrana to the high council. Telling them "this is the kind of thing she made me do". Lying there on the bed naked and tied up, I don't think they would believe anything she had to say.😮
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 4 күн бұрын
Thank you for sharing your opinion ❤️
@robertdickinson8923
@robertdickinson8923 5 күн бұрын
Why do you writers write"His Fists Clenched at his Side"?!?
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 5 күн бұрын
I don't have any idea 🤔
@louischannel7008
@louischannel7008 5 күн бұрын
Shimmering technology and the cleaner uses a broom. Yes very high tech.😂😂😂 And the slave leads the native, of course.🥴👎👎👎
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 5 күн бұрын
Thank you for sharing your opinion
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 5 күн бұрын
What are your thoughts on the story?
@robertd.7060
@robertd.7060 5 күн бұрын
Shiver down his spine ! I hear that same thing in all of your stories ? MIGHT want to add in SOME other type of sayings some time ? His bones grew cold ? His hair on his body stood up ? Just a FEW [ NEW ] ideas to use some times ?
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 5 күн бұрын
@@robertd.7060 Thank you for sharing your opinion. you are right, we will take what you say into consideration
@jasondrew5768
@jasondrew5768 5 күн бұрын
Did the Queen sleep on one side of Jack and the Princess on the other side?
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 5 күн бұрын
@@jasondrew5768 This is your imagination
@LuisZenquis-c8n
@LuisZenquis-c8n 5 күн бұрын
It's interesting I like it very much!. 11:32
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 5 күн бұрын
@@LuisZenquis-c8n thanks ❤️
@acefire4050
@acefire4050 5 күн бұрын
Really taller theology smaller corn in your picture
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 5 күн бұрын
@@acefire4050 😂
@hlapanesello
@hlapanesello 6 күн бұрын
I want it like real movie action.
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 6 күн бұрын
I recommend you watch the next video
@davidwickboldt712
@davidwickboldt712 6 күн бұрын
Only a small percentage of people would chains pain and most likely death over self preservation. Many may think they would not give in but reality is not kind.
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 6 күн бұрын
Thank you for sharing your views, I agree with you
@joshp5432
@joshp5432 6 күн бұрын
I think bro should have made I clear that her tough words mean nothing before physically dominant men. She may be a queen but she is still just a female.
@joshp5432
@joshp5432 6 күн бұрын
Also, she doesn't allow weakness? Bro is the literal definition of weak by letting her walk all over him and say whatever she wants. Strong men are strong at all times. Not just when it's convenient. Bro better grow a pair before this story ends or I'm disliking.
@joshp5432
@joshp5432 6 күн бұрын
Did they mess up the gender/name of the Daniel character? Dude sounds and acts like a woman from a romance novel.
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 6 күн бұрын
@@joshp5432 You may be right in what you say, but imagine a slave, how manly can he be towards his master? Also at the beginning of the story he defies the queen and expects punishment as a result
@joshp5432
@joshp5432 6 күн бұрын
@Sci-fiLine Yeah I get that however, the queen and the others did offer to return him to Earth. Unless in this reality humanity has either beaten and partially enslaved ot has decided to embrace slavery again I have to assume that Daniel is a special case. If so then he is a submissive man, aka feminine, by refusing to defy her at every turn and, based on the narration, his physical and and emotional responses to her were the kind usually displayed by women in romance novels. I know this because in my younger days I read a fair bit of them.
@joshp5432
@joshp5432 6 күн бұрын
@Sci-fiLine To be fair I acknowledge that most modern men would fold or break under threat of harm or mortality but this story isn't exactly about modern times and I would like to think men regained their spine and manliness by the time we faced alien societies. Wishful thinking perhaps seeing how things now days are heading in the opposite direction lmao
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 6 күн бұрын
What are your thoughts on the story?
@LuisZenquis-c8n
@LuisZenquis-c8n 5 күн бұрын
I'd like to hear more of these stories very interesting 😮
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 5 күн бұрын
Thanks for your comment ❤️
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 5 күн бұрын
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@rayfreemanjr4752
@rayfreemanjr4752 6 күн бұрын
😂
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 6 күн бұрын
😂
@rayfreemanjr4752
@rayfreemanjr4752 6 күн бұрын
Sbang her brains are out
@bruceleealmighty
@bruceleealmighty 7 күн бұрын
Thank You for associating the visuals with the story.
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 6 күн бұрын
❤️
@JeronWhite
@JeronWhite 7 күн бұрын
Great.stroy
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 7 күн бұрын
@@JeronWhite thanks ❤️
@geemooney2229
@geemooney2229 7 күн бұрын
Ever since Avatar, Blue women are the desirable alien women😂!
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 7 күн бұрын
You are right 😂
@mickeymike-yk4bf
@mickeymike-yk4bf 7 күн бұрын
👍 🤟
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 7 күн бұрын
👍👍
@mickeymike-yk4bf
@mickeymike-yk4bf 7 күн бұрын
enjoy story "But" Most story's are a lot alike!
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 7 күн бұрын
Thank you for sharing your valuable feedback
@petegarnett7731
@petegarnett7731 8 күн бұрын
Somewhere around 30 minutes, I thought the escape was going to demonstrate the best way to initiate a hyperspace jump
@a_z.tazzzfan8497
@a_z.tazzzfan8497 8 күн бұрын
Interesting... Through most of the story, Jack appeared to be a low- intelligent petulant 💩. Where was he going to escape to? How would he get off the planet? He didn't even know how he was brought to the planet. If he managed to make it to a vessel capable of space travel, how would he know how to operate & navigate it? Pretty sure the Aliens would be smart enough to have security protocols preventing this sort of theft. The only "true" reality is somehow Jack & Saris actually managed to fall In 💕 and marry after a year or so. Food for 💭 - Seeing as how Jack thought of himself as a kidnapped prisoner, I'd love to see how Jack's vocal attitude would fare in a WWII, Korean War, Vietnam War or Middle East POW camp. 🤔🧐😒 Anyone younger than "Boomer" or "Gen-X" don't seem to grasp this type of "reality". In real life, there's no such thing as a "safe space". 😂
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 8 күн бұрын
Thank you for sharing your opinion
@a_z.tazzzfan8497
@a_z.tazzzfan8497 8 күн бұрын
@@Sci-fiLine Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the story. My primary thought 🤔💭 was addressing Jack's idiocy and short sightedness as a sentient being. If it wasn't for this, the story most likely would have been a lot shorter with listeners probably complaining about lack of context, unless his thought/action process was different from beginning to end. Regardless of how the middle of the story developed, the end would have been the same. 😎🤙
@michikoiesaka3365
@michikoiesaka3365 8 күн бұрын
It never happened this way. You got it wrong. Instead I took the queen first. She liked it. I convinced her to sleep with her daughter
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 8 күн бұрын
👍👍
@Mike64-hl6pt
@Mike64-hl6pt 8 күн бұрын
Bland, generic, no real story, boring, bad ai voice, main character is a fool who acts stupidly. Predictable. Story lacks content to envelop the listener, just lots of words, mostly adjectives with no vision. Story lacks the development to pull the listener into the story, falls flat on the ear.
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 8 күн бұрын
Thank you for sharing your opinion
@richardcox6935
@richardcox6935 8 күн бұрын
Nera was too HOT!
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 8 күн бұрын
🤔
@a_z.tazzzfan8497
@a_z.tazzzfan8497 8 күн бұрын
11:14 Took almost 10 minutes but, redemption achieved for description of Saris's garment.
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 8 күн бұрын
You are right
@a_z.tazzzfan8497
@a_z.tazzzfan8497 8 күн бұрын
1:15 Well, up until this point, I was gonna give you an A+ for accuracy on our primary Alien's descriptions but, gonna have to drop it to an A (still better than a lot of other creators/stories).👍 Our younger Alien is wearing a Crimson gown/dress and not a violet robe. 🤔 Still, an exceptional score in matching the characters to the artwork. 😘🤙
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 8 күн бұрын
Thank you for sharing your opinion ❤️
@anthonypyritz2927
@anthonypyritz2927 8 күн бұрын
The only line crossed that shouldn't have been was crossed by the government. Viva la revolution.
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 8 күн бұрын
🤔
@anthonypyritz2927
@anthonypyritz2927 8 күн бұрын
Sounds like he has been sentanced to death by Snu snu😅😂😋♀️♂️
@banquomctavish5607
@banquomctavish5607 8 күн бұрын
Terrible story, highly predictable = boring...!
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 8 күн бұрын
@@banquomctavish5607 thanks
@prrantanen
@prrantanen 9 күн бұрын
Disgusting story of weak beta males slavery and turning into a pet simp ! Yuck
@OmnipotentSag
@OmnipotentSag 9 күн бұрын
I'd hit it. -=80)
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 9 күн бұрын
What are your thoughts on the story?
@johanzuidema353
@johanzuidema353 9 күн бұрын
That Jack is weak, from me she would only get my hatred. How could one ever fall in love with his captor ?. Kindnapped, chained, love. forget it.. I suggest you chance the title in "Alien stockholm syndrome" or something like it.
@lesley643
@lesley643 9 күн бұрын
I mean why does the girl always have big ears? Not complaining you understand. if ykyk.
@lesley643
@lesley643 9 күн бұрын
Is Jack gay?
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 9 күн бұрын
Thank you for sharing your opinion
@Sci-fiLine
@Sci-fiLine 9 күн бұрын
Because this is the most common depiction of an alien
@drcovell
@drcovell 9 күн бұрын
A normal, virile, human male, would do it. As the Bare 😂might have said: “Methinks he doth protest too much!” Is this guy supposed to be a sworn celibate member or something?