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@feelings38148
@feelings38148 18 сағат бұрын
Sorry to say but You disappointed me by your story ending It's worst 😢
@Aishanagar119
@Aishanagar119 Күн бұрын
I love the storyline and the choice of words The topic you have picked is such a sensitive one like I have always witnessed a tension between my mother and my grandma back then but now they are doing great after years Although my father never leave my mom’s side and always helped both the women to get along with each other.. Really loved it❤ Also wanna tell you that I recently started reading your ffs and I am so impressed by your storylines.. Being a hardcore book reader finally found a channel with great choice of words😊 really appreciate that😍 And also it was a bit fast causing a difficultly in reading can you please make sure to keep it in Mind from next time😊
@Dingdongggggggg
@Dingdongggggggg 4 күн бұрын
She survived alone took care of a child alone even in her pregnancy she worked tirelessly to provide for her child alone and now he came like nothing happened? Even if she wanted a father figure in jiho's life there was no need of her giving jk a second chance her parents and jk did same thing ABANDONED her but still she gave chance to jk but not her parents if jk deserves don't you think her parents do to?and that taehyung was barking so much infront of everyone didn't even come to apologize? Wow author you've a great mentality 🤡
@shijinambiar8524
@shijinambiar8524 4 күн бұрын
Pathetic. Just pathetic. Nothing else to say.
@Bookworm56
@Bookworm56 4 күн бұрын
I enjoyed it and I loved the ending. She made him work for forgiveness and she didn't accept her parents back. Great writing! 😊
@manujimkook6689
@manujimkook6689 4 күн бұрын
Very bad ending 🤡
@CS-PriyankaC
@CS-PriyankaC 19 сағат бұрын
I love your comments especially the emojis you use 😂 😂😂
@manujimkook6689
@manujimkook6689 4 сағат бұрын
@CS-PriyankaC thank you 😁
@JIGYASA-q9o
@JIGYASA-q9o 4 күн бұрын
sorry to say but he didn't desevr her if he once can abonden her then he wont think twice doing that
@shreyagoturu5634
@shreyagoturu5634 4 күн бұрын
bouns part plz
@jiminfoundhisjamsthatnamjo1861
@jiminfoundhisjamsthatnamjo1861 4 күн бұрын
the story was good and had a common plot though i m not a big fan of the ending but it is your story and i respect your decision
@EtherealEnclave-r7n
@EtherealEnclave-r7n 6 күн бұрын
Please can u make another part "When u got harrassed but ur brother didn't believe you" please please And yeah she is not going to forgive her family but to Taehyung can because he tried to console her and he also wanted to listen to her side story please 🥺 🥺 🥺 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
@og.snowiiebits1213
@og.snowiiebits1213 9 күн бұрын
We stan Mama Jeon❤
@michellestafford1319
@michellestafford1319 9 күн бұрын
Love story, but as a mother not all women are delicate flowers, they can do for themselves most if the time!
@777world18
@777world18 9 күн бұрын
PLEASE READ" CAPTAIN JEON " 🙌😭❤️‍🩹🤌✨️💗🙂💜
@terrenceranathunga1967
@terrenceranathunga1967 18 күн бұрын
And also there is underrated one , but its so good "Bodyguard love"
@MomaCat59
@MomaCat59 20 күн бұрын
I don’t really understand the whole thing at the end with her parents. They arranged everything and made a big deal over the wedding. Why is there even a question of them accepting the marriage? How does that make sense? No continuity of the storyline.
@pratibhadubey3180
@pratibhadubey3180 20 күн бұрын
Amazing 😊😊
@amandapalmieri1271
@amandapalmieri1271 21 күн бұрын
Ok I hate it. She accepted to marry him for who know what reason, she accepted every insult possible, and when the only one with a little of brain try to "save" her, she denied. She doesn't have a bit of self respect. Pathetic
@zulfqaranjum1576
@zulfqaranjum1576 22 күн бұрын
Author your English is just Wowwwwww😊😊😊 by the way I am from Pakistan 🇵🇰🇵🇰🇵🇰
@dinadaniella9317
@dinadaniella9317 23 күн бұрын
What happened with this story, why your story is so nasty and digusting
@zareenamohammad8061
@zareenamohammad8061 23 күн бұрын
So disappointed story 😞
@shijinambiar8524
@shijinambiar8524 23 күн бұрын
This is another ff where yn doesn't have any self respect. He didn't believe the girl he claim to love, didn't even protect her and just left her like that with her harasser. And continuously disrespecting her. And she didn't even make his regret and ended up with him as if he is the only person who is left on earth.
@mariacorpuz4086
@mariacorpuz4086 21 күн бұрын
Just like that after all the harsh words thrown to her she’ll forget all about it, where’s her self respect, so disappointed she should have left in the first place & not swallow all the insults from him
@anjumankabir9427
@anjumankabir9427 23 күн бұрын
A relation always based on trust if there is no trust there is no relation you make y/n so pathetic.
@jeon_roseie30
@jeon_roseie30 23 күн бұрын
Every author make yn pathetic It's not new😂😒
@manujimkook6689
@manujimkook6689 23 күн бұрын
Sorry but it's the most disappointing story I have ever read. When yn deserves someone better but no why u will give her that she don't deserve to be happy right author ?
@anjumankabir9427
@anjumankabir9427 23 күн бұрын
I agree with you
@manujimkook6689
@manujimkook6689 23 күн бұрын
@anjumankabir9427 👍
@mariacorpuz4086
@mariacorpuz4086 21 күн бұрын
⁠totally agree! Very disappointing
@kalpnaved945
@kalpnaved945 25 күн бұрын
Wow it was great I am sorry I couldn't get time to see it before but a masterpiece is always a masterpiece ✨️ 💜 umm.. BTW author nimshii when will you upload my request I am waiting for it eagerly
@AminaBibi-zw2ec
@AminaBibi-zw2ec 27 күн бұрын
I love your vids but one complain can u guve us more time to read it goes sayy to fast ❤ ty unni
@taehyung_bangtan123
@taehyung_bangtan123 27 күн бұрын
Sorry about that. I will make sure to increase the time. ❤️❤️❤️
@baniamin1877
@baniamin1877 27 күн бұрын
Can we get a bonus??
@baniamin1877
@baniamin1877 27 күн бұрын
Woah I'm first yaAa.... Loved it author unnie💜💜
@kalpnaved945
@kalpnaved945 28 күн бұрын
It was just amazing and fabulous ❤ I have seen your every single video and i loved it but specially step brother series❤😊 And can you please please please please please please make my request 🙏 Yoongi as your elder brother who is an idol and yn is his 15 years old sister and there parents live in Australia they don't know about it so the scene us when her principal sexually harassed her and threatened her that he will upload her ai generated nu*es if she tells anyone on other hand yoongi is planning to surprise his sister but he get to know the truth from the doctor thar she has been ra*ed and please add some role of bts members also as her brother and a happy ending 😅 Sorry if I being too dramatic and rest of is your imagination now but pls pls pls pls pls pls pls please make it😢❤❤
@taehyung_bangtan123
@taehyung_bangtan123 28 күн бұрын
Will work on it. Thanks for the suggestion ❤️❤️❤️ Also thank you so much for loving and watching my videos.❤️❤️❤️
@kalpnaved945
@kalpnaved945 27 күн бұрын
@@taehyung_bangtan123 🥰😊
@music-dw5mb
@music-dw5mb 29 күн бұрын
Y/n and her husband were just visiting and not living with the in-laws? When y/n was snubbed so often, why not just leave and go back home? Sure, her mother-in law's behavior needed to be addressed, but why stick around for a long duration? Other than that, the storyline was very entertaining and the writing itself was top notch.👏👏👏
@iqqukook9322
@iqqukook9322 29 күн бұрын
I had to stop this in middle because of speed.. It's little high unable to read properly
@Bhavika-n8m
@Bhavika-n8m 27 күн бұрын
Yes it is and that is why I'm watching this on 0.6x
@edgloss1299
@edgloss1299 Ай бұрын
So sweet.. Took awhile to realize your stupidity JK 😂😂
@edgloss1299
@edgloss1299 Ай бұрын
Yn. What a troublemaker you are 😂🤣😂🤣
@ManasaBTSARMY
@ManasaBTSARMY Ай бұрын
Amazing ❤
@FanFictionFanatic
@FanFictionFanatic Ай бұрын
it was wonderful!!
@catherinerapisaldo1671
@catherinerapisaldo1671 Ай бұрын
❤❤😊😊
@catherinerapisaldo1671
@catherinerapisaldo1671 Ай бұрын
We all need to be careful with our words. Always be loving, kind and respectful of eachother and ourselves. We all are precious. God created All of us in his image he never makes mistakes. Lol. ❤🤗🙏
@Aesthetic_X_Fairies
@Aesthetic_X_Fairies Ай бұрын
Woah!!!! 😳🤯 This was the only thing which I want, thanks to you, but don't you think that it was like, I want you to show that, they should get their baby sister early & should've spent time with her(bonus in which they spend time with her) 😅
@aquaq193
@aquaq193 Ай бұрын
Make it twoshot please
@catherinerapisaldo1671
@catherinerapisaldo1671 Ай бұрын
❤❤❤
@edgloss1299
@edgloss1299 Ай бұрын
Please.. This need a bonus of the security for the time she's in labor and a little future with their baby
@Avantika-l6e
@Avantika-l6e Ай бұрын
plsss plssss a BONUS part plssss author nim
@le-anne4309
@le-anne4309 Ай бұрын
The end? NO!😭
@Aesthetic_X_Fairies
@Aesthetic_X_Fairies Ай бұрын
Won't you make mine requested ff, I'm waiting for it, 😙 I thought you hearted my that comment( in which I request that ff) so you will make this ff, but I know I'm unlucky 😞😢
@taehyung_bangtan123
@taehyung_bangtan123 Ай бұрын
I'm working on it🤍🤍🤍
@Aesthetic_X_Fairies
@Aesthetic_X_Fairies Ай бұрын
​​@@taehyung_bangtan123 Okie, thnku soo much 🤗🤗🥰🥰
@sahana1775
@sahana1775 Ай бұрын
I didn’t find the second one
@ShivangeeShandiliya-uw7rx
@ShivangeeShandiliya-uw7rx Ай бұрын
Amazing bonus please 💜💜
@cybeleabuhan1871
@cybeleabuhan1871 Ай бұрын
🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮
@KalkidanBekele-l5k
@KalkidanBekele-l5k Ай бұрын
Wow
@Niyaaa008
@Niyaaa008 Ай бұрын
Such a nonsense ff there's no self-respect for y/n😂🙏🏻
@ShristiDas1507
@ShristiDas1507 Ай бұрын
💯