SS Relic? Really?

So every single order issued by the captain was second guessed and he had to explain himself. This story is dumb.

"Options ?" Blake says. How about firing a gun or two at the disabled Talone Of Tyranny ? Was I the only one who noticed that they just sat and watched The Talone Of Tyranny reboot its systems after the EMP strike without firing a shot ?

Three similar stories in a row, would be nice if they were on a Sequential Playlist...

Pirate Ship, Combat Rules; Get Close and "Fire Everything"...

Ok repeat

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HOW STUPID....................... WHAT A GARBAGE STORY................

Who were they ?

Why build only one dreadnought???? Who does that?

Seems you guys got the scripts mixed up a bit towards the end there, the third group appearing twice, while there's discrepancies in fighting the empire, got a bit disjointed.

An abrupt ending...

Edit your work. You only need to say Dracan AR once or twice. Also learn military rank: a captain commands a ship or a small group of ships, not an offensive fleet

No military would operate like this. Plus the commander should have briefed his officers properly, massive failure of command

I would transfer that Lt. at first chance.

Not the best one I've heard, nah I'm good

Not bad but......not bad but......not bad but

I tire of folks who do not at least proof check their stories before posting them. This insane repetitiveness is worse than a junior high school level story. You've ruined what could have been an interesting tale. 🤢😡

Doesn’t make sense

This would be a good story except for the PC bullshit, a male is he/him, not they/them/thier/they're. If you want to cater to the minority, you will lose the majority. Go woke, go broke.

Possibly the worst sci fi story ever. Its bad enough you have to be too lazy to do a real story, but you're mailing in the a.i. crap as well

So so bad.

Common strange occurrence - narrator going from she to he to she. This happens over multiple tales.

Damn this is so bad

Holy crap, this is MST3K bad. Good job. Love me some really bad sci-fi. You guys nailed it

The powerful humans, too much self promoting fantasy

This plot has been used a number of times; time for a new one.

Pointless.

Alright. Another story without closure. I noticed 133 views of this story with 9 thumbs up and 0 comments. That's around 12%. Me, I'm a thumbs down kinda reader with half-stories

a ship of that size would at least have a central command bridge and between 5 and smaller and an admiral would have command and the other bridges would have generals or at least captains, a lieutenant next to a terminal would not give advice but only follow orders.

Thats not what my Terran super ship "The Indomitable" is supposed to look like! We would never make something like that. Have you seen the F-22 or B-21? I'm expecting a black glass diamond that looks like the darkness pyramid from Destiny 2 and a futuristic katana shaped submarine.

First one At long last 😅

Strategy fell apart. Destroy the command ships. Destroy the transports,and warn Earth of ground force defense.

Ai written, ai narrated, and not checked for actual quality at all. It's constantly refraining and reafiriming the same thing. Between that and the monotone, this would work better as one of those brainwashing videos with a spiral animation, if the story wasn't about smelling it's own farts and loving the smell.

13 mins roughly u means the galaxy's previous top power. U just had ur story defeat it and replace power. Ud think u'd know what ur saying but ur not even following ur own story

The repetitive structure screams of so called a.i. generated stories by those who could not with "pen and paper" achieve the same. The lack of quality content and structure is evident to one who actually reads.

Offered submission? Nay, slavery.

So many things wrong it’s actually impressive. So many it makes you think not even AI could fail so hard. Give the author a foreign sounding name and claim AI translated it and it may feel less fail. “This is strategy, they are hitting all outpost one by one” -laterally the most basic of basic thoughtless strategies, no intelligence needed for that. “No pattern, no logic…. Just ruthless efficiency”. Oh. Ok, even the story is now mocking the story. Well played

First, A general would never be in charge of a Naval Operation or ship(s). They would be in charge of ground forces and possibly, if they still exist in a multisystem government, air force but not Naval forces. Second there isn't a lieutenant anywhere in any universe or time that would be the second in command to a general. A Lieutenant is O1, O2 at the highest. A General is O9 or at least near there. If the lieutenant was particularly dumb he would have at most 10 years in the military. He would be discharged past that as unfit for duty. I have listened to many of these stories and have come to find many have writers that are either AI written or the writers don't have any idea about the military, its rank structures, or the qualifications and training that goes into each rank as someone gets promoted into their positions. It flat out ruins a story when they talk about a commander being in charge of the entire Human fleets fighting to defend humanity from the bad aliens. A commander would be in charge of a single ship. A captain MIGHT be put in charge of a division (2-4 ships) but only as part of a larger unit like a squadron and under that squadron commanders orders and guidance. If you want to write Sci-Fi or HFY Military fiction, learn at least basic rank structures and role of the military commands you are going to be using. It isnt complicated and would only take a few hours of basic research.

At 14:30, it repeat the story, , ,

Way to many ad's. It ruins the story

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Since you can so easily narrate this is either a story or your attempts to start a war in outer space to strike fear of the extraterrestrials who actually have the technology to wipe us out in a wink. You are therefore trying to instigate fear of our vastly superior technological galactic neighbours, who have, so far never attacked us; but instead have time and again visited your heads of state with the proposal to heal our diseases lengthen our lives. Instead you are paving the way for the deepening slavery of all earth dwellers with your poisons in foods and all the other forms death you or who you are doing this for. The earth was told to DISARM (Hiroshima and Nagasaki) YOU should NOT at this time put such a programme, if it's just a work of fiction. Many years ago in the mid-1900s a programme of invasion of earth by another planet was aired and the people of the USA went into widespread panic. Why should do so?

A fair story but needed to finish the ending Rate the story C As listener when you want to fast forward the story that means your story did not hold the listener and its Si Fi You can lie to us and make it a great story hold the listener with maybe a good ending without a lot of Bla Bla adding fill words in a story ! BE A GOOD STORY TELLER HOLD THE LISTENER !

Cool story, good job

Love it.

Wait, two things. The self destruct needed to be shut down by command lest it get fooled by an enemy incursion. Also, the crew we abandoning the ship and there was no way they would still be onboard and able to return so quickly. It is all in the details.

The US Government prepares scenarios for some pretty wild options, like, say, if we needed to invade Canada tomorrow, there's a plan. So I wouldn't doubt that a Human government in a dangerous galaxy would have contingency plans for every possibility. And be armed to the teeth.

The Relic said that this was a warning, not that humanity was coming back to destroy them. If it wanted to annihilate them it could have done so then and there.

A ship as big as earth you got ten min ( Bull Sh-t ) to set bomb so walk in that ship thousand miles in ten min. and the captain side kick is a Idiot ! The story half the time does not make any since even in Si Fi rate the story D +