Podpinam sie pod pytanie 😊

Super jakby powstało więcej odcinków, bo u nas ten jeden jest oglądany codziennie

U 9uh

Like what? No point in a critique if you don’t say what you think is wrong with it

@@Chloe-ks1fq Saying something could've been better isn't a critique, but fine if you want a critique so be it. The story could've been better paced for the audience to care more about the characters. It feels kind of generic. It is the kind of story that's been done many times, but that doesn't mean it couldn't have been better. More pacing and showing more of the brother and sisters relationship. Maybe even more than "haha video games bad" but something that shows the brother does care for his little sister. The animation also could've been better. By that I don't necessarily mean the "animation", but the acting. Animation is more than simply showing a characters emotion, but going inside their head as to why they think a certain way. People have mannerisms, good animation captures who the character is beyond just making their face sad or happy. As i said, it's charming but there's tiny changes that would've strengthen the story, one of those things would've simply been how the characters move

FrilledMayfly I just think if you’re gonna say, ‘this could be better’ it’s more helpful to point out what. And everything you said is great! 100% agree with it. It’s a lot more helpful for the creative to get constructive feedback and that’s perfect!

@@Chloe-ks1fq I didn't want to be rude. Many people don't want un asked for feedback. Saying "things could've been better" would've left things open to interpretation for them to make of what they will. I don't want to give anyone constructive criticism if they didn't ask for it

FrilledMayfly that’s fair enough