Wow these bars are definitely deep bro i strive to be like you one day
@earlybird10719 күн бұрын
Any more exercises?
@Voice_is_Power28 күн бұрын
🔥
@VestahGiselle29 күн бұрын
Thank you 🥀 This video was definitely needed, as a young poet i definitely had a lot of fun with this one, here was mine She’s a vagabond, vagabond Here today, tomorrow in Lebanon Boys are starving for her Loving her is celebrating Ramadan Kiss her thighs in India Thick and warm, like eating naan But she’ll leave again She’ll leave you dehydrated like a Forest with a lack of ponds Your the poorest when she’s gone Your bloody wounds flourish As she was your dermabond To make her here and reappear Will take more than a magic wand Wandering bitch, She’ll linger, she’ll ditch She drank the vagabond tea Her speech so impressive, Black bare feet She’s the black breasted Gandhi
@terrorfirmamusicАй бұрын
Still fire!🔥🔥🔥
@williamanctil-fredette6631Ай бұрын
Men playing while rapping! That's amazing.
@almaastauheed3929Ай бұрын
Bro don't stop 💥
@ninakowalska9922 ай бұрын
what do u think bout my bars or how can i know if im wack???? "get on the mic, wreck the shit real quick. bringing fire flows, the competition gets sick"
@LilmxPhilox2 ай бұрын
But where is that clipped song from ?
@blender1762 ай бұрын
Can you make more of these please?.. such as how to come up with punclines as well.. thanks
@its1bdullah15 күн бұрын
For me i try to find the punch over the multi’s that I wrote down, overthinking with ur rhymes.
@its1bdullah15 күн бұрын
Or u can do it backwards, write a sentence and then turn it to bar, and then at the end write the rhymes over this bar as set ups
@blender1762 ай бұрын
Love this exercise and breakdown. I feel enlightened. Really helpful
@Pxy2123 ай бұрын
Owf ❤
@Pxy2123 ай бұрын
This is so useful thank you ❤
@cashbrown32093 ай бұрын
I got the chills 😲 this is 🔥🔥🔥!!!.
@theofficialmystery37153 ай бұрын
New music video is out kzbin.info/www/bejne/m6a1pKh5jJaEjaMsi=tldPbndV3TALGmVE
@keonatkinson25113 ай бұрын
I like Big L, he was a multi syllable rapper, i enjoy writing songs myself
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
Big L was definitely one of the GOATS. Underrated for sure.
@theofficialmystery37153 ай бұрын
I start a war every time I fart an' snore
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
Lol! I come in a two-pack (Tupac) cuz barz galore / lowkey (Loki) I'm part Marvel lore - the other part's Shakur.
@theofficialmystery37153 ай бұрын
@@wearetheledbetters How much more "pain I can endure? It's too heavy, I fell and "faint-ed to the floor" Voices in my head, "brain is gon explode".
I deserve to live in a "nice hood" It was difficult to "find food".
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
Dope! Sad lyrics - well written. Keep it going!
@theofficialmystery37153 ай бұрын
@@wearetheledbetters thanks fam! Check out my new music video
@theofficialmystery37153 ай бұрын
Thanks fam! Check out my new music video kzbin.info/www/bejne/f3nbqGqGjN-VpNksi=md_LrabH6yTvIfTG
@its1bdullah15 күн бұрын
I’ll be nice with those “rhymes dude” Writing bars since the “childhood” And try to make my life better , so i go to “my booth”
@theofficialmystery37153 ай бұрын
Loved this one! I've been doing the exact same since I started rapping. You can learn naturally by yourself, and it gets better with practice. Here is my new song using multisyllabic rhymes for example: "lights are off and sky above." Btw I'm an English teacher as well. kzbin.info/www/bejne/f3nbqGqGjN-VpNksi=9rc31Uph7MO9faMQ
@Al-qg9dr4 ай бұрын
this is great bro
@adamlashimself4 ай бұрын
Thanks fam!
@tristianileogben48034 ай бұрын
They do the dumbest things and call it challenge....worddd
@adamlashimself4 ай бұрын
✊🏿✊🏿✊🏿
@nimamotif30684 ай бұрын
I was looking for this so badly
@bad_juju9115 ай бұрын
great vid!
@guischard65 ай бұрын
This made it so easy to understand
@oozie79585 ай бұрын
This amazing, the punchlines are so deep
@Harrykesh6307 ай бұрын
resembles shady's technique of rapping
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
Yeah, most of who I'd consider the great MC's string together multiple syllable rhyme schemes. Eminem is definitely one of them.
@Harrykesh6303 ай бұрын
@@wearetheledbetters I appreciate your response, but I commented 3 months ago😅
@nellledbetter3 ай бұрын
Don’t blame him, I gave him two daughters, he’s a bit busier these days than he was 4 years ago. 😄🤷🏽♀️
@Harrykesh6303 ай бұрын
@@nellledbetter ohhh, that explains a lot 😁
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
@@Harrykesh630 fa sho - sorry fam lol
@Abraham0Abram7 ай бұрын
*Bastantes emblenas propagandísticos* Odio sus *poses* de *Dandi* , *gatos* *Cantantes en temas propagan dísticos* Dónde hacen *dioses* a *candi* - *datos*
@layskrauterbutter8 ай бұрын
g rap is actually often simple as fuck
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
Truth. Charles Mingus said "Making the simple complicated is commonplace; making the complicated simple, awesomely simple, that's creativity."
@layskrauterbutter2 ай бұрын
@@wearetheledbetters rappers are overrated anyway. i do hear a clever punchline every now and then but this is not the standard
@layskrauterbutter2 ай бұрын
lots of Nas is like word salad, and Jay says a lot of banal stuff
@layskrauterbutter2 ай бұрын
that "wonder where your fans go" was hot 🤣
@sockysworld80108 ай бұрын
subbed, hit the bell
@sockysworld80108 ай бұрын
dope vid appreciate it!!!!!
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
I appreciate you!
@thamsanqakheswa3058 ай бұрын
That was awesome 🔥
@tambourinh8 ай бұрын
this is kinda easy and clear, but for me it becomes very hard to decide when to apply another rhymescheme
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
True that. This is an exercise to get some content for rhyme structures but you definitely have to consider the larger arc of the verse you're writing when applying this.
@NEXUSQUAD7419 ай бұрын
am bad but l tried ima start my verse jotting down words sending you downwards our styles are diverse but mine better with these rhymes you need a digester your a curse clearly biased fans stand behind you it for the worse am more averse to your rule am a foreigner after my mistakes am more alert this is like a freestyle so you can call it a oral verse, moreover this is immortal verse you may never be the best MC small like a SMC irregular in the galaxy this mic a fallacy wake up to reality you never be as good as Rakim and Andre three
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
BARZ
@Haahaahaap9 ай бұрын
The best tutorial! Many thanks
@MF_DOOMer9 ай бұрын
Holy cow 🔥🔥
@MF_DOOMer9 ай бұрын
Wow that's amazing
@OldNerdLogan10 ай бұрын
I would listen to a song called fart and snore, for me it would be an autobiographical song
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
LOL
@CXIIIPHER10 ай бұрын
Love this video man
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
I'm so glad! Thanks for sharing 🙏🏿
@ChilledTV10 ай бұрын
Making 5 syllable rhyme schemes look easy is really something 🔥🔥🔥
@helloimsofia763010 ай бұрын
The lady who is singing my song is my choir teacher I'm lucky to have her
@xexeed136310 ай бұрын
Omg yes this is what I adore about great rappers like j Cole Eminem Kendrick Lamar etc. they use the syllables of the rhymes to string you along on a melodic adventure of highs and lows in the form of different vouls
@wearetheledbetters3 ай бұрын
💯
@cyih8u11 ай бұрын
I just discovered you and wow! I have to lot to go back and listen to. These are crazy nice. 🔥
@uneskyexperience1994 Жыл бұрын
man your channel is a treasure!!❤
@bitbybit1231 Жыл бұрын
Awesome video and technique, and you always use and 2 words to start off? "Barz & boardz" being replaced with any set of random words in other instances ex: cats & dogs, sing & song etc.. I'll try it out!
@bitbybit1231 Жыл бұрын
amazing
@eltrilliardo Жыл бұрын
I stumbled upon this song a week ago and have listened 100x. Spent an hour just trying to fully appreciate your rhyme scheme last night. It’s amazing.
@Jay-Nazir Жыл бұрын
I want to thank you for this tutorial as it is HANDS DOWN the best video for anyone looking to make conplex rhyme schemes. I've been using word clouding for about 2 years now and I must say that I think my potential rose off the charts because of it. Keep in mind I'm only 16 years old rhyming like I will in the reply to this comment
@Jay-Nazir Жыл бұрын
Verse: I wonder what year that people forgot knowledge and wisdom is power and vision because now we all follow what fits in It's uncommon to give the power to victims and if it's given then it's a hollow decision allows em to benefit Judges giving time for little bribes didn't commit the crime But still that doesn't mean you ain't gon get the time You could be living the prison life but you're innocent And in a sense you died lost life now your picturing What it's like outside the bars riding in cars Now your slowly going crazy hope is fading life's a mirage I rap divine god, but for now I'ma just pause
@Jay-Nazir Жыл бұрын
Peep that 5 syllable rhyme scheme: Knowledge and wisdom, Power and vision, Follow what fits in, common to give the, power to victims, hollow decision, allows em to bene(fit). I do believe you've created a monster with this fine video, once again, this was done by a 16 YEAR OLD
@ChilledTV10 ай бұрын
@@Jay-Nazir 🔥🔥🔥
@ChilledTV10 ай бұрын
@@Jay-Nazir Yo, I’m 16 as well and don’t see many people working at a decent level or above - nice to see my brother. Would love to see more 🔥
@Jay-Nazir10 ай бұрын
@@ChilledTV Definitely, I'm making music but rn my setup and my delivery are my biggest weaknesses