What the heck, one minute the station is going to blow up, then suddenly it's gone in a different direction.

Slop

A.I rubbish

Just got this story, thanks for the algorithm and for this story which isn't the usual trope 💐⭐👽

Repetition.

I hope there is a part 2

????? All that and no ending. One hell of a build up, get to the planet and then, tune in next week for the next part, sorry folks, that was the end. You have to use your imagination for the rest. LoL

Listening to this a 2nd time, Zilkor kinda sounds like a coercive r@pist.. it's the way he said: "if we don't fu🙈💦, then i could DIE & YOU & EARTH DIE TOO.." 👀😱 ((he must have rehearsed & used that like a DOZEN times..! 👈

"I took a moment to remember where i had seen those eyes before.." 👀 -Really?? Ok, so this "guy" Zilkor has bright orange eyes so let me think..um.. who do i know that has EYES LIKE THAT?! oh yeah, my ex..💔🤖..👀😖

I do like this story and the verbal delivery is clear, but it DID have me toking my joint quite angrily 🚬😵‍💫🥴...😠 due to Nathan's repeat questioning and the repetition of "who sent you here?" - other than that, i love it 👍💜👍

Amazing!! I think Mira Hayze is a damn strong Leader and Captain, who, under severe pressure is still able to sieve out the "safest route possible" for her & her Team. Great story & Great Characters!! 👍 Go Team Mira🎊✨️🥰

First

want to hear the rest of the story, they destroyed 2 major posts, and the story ended

story was to long out with no ending. dumb.

Keeps repeating

Does the girl come out of the box?

If you want your channel to grow, you need to proofread the text and remove duplicates to start with. Then you can start adding multiple voices.

Snu snu

No explanation at all.. He depart and instantly he is married... No freaking introduction no trial nothing. Ai story is one but that's speed run at this point...

Is dude 3000 years old or something, he seems ro remeber a lot.

Nice start, but then you repeated it adding a few new details, which wasted time. You need and editor and an outline. You left the story hanging, perhaps for another chapter, but it felt like an incomplete thought (story). Perhaps you should study the Hero's Journey. It's not a book, but it is a way to write a book or tell a story.

I’m still looking for one .. maybe I’m looking in the wrong direction 😊😅

I don’t get the whole shield thing, if they can phase in and out of the dimension, why not build a drone explosive that will just phase into their enemies ships engines and boom. Nothing to escape either a black hole or implosion!

The Department of Redundancy Department wants it's story back.

The names changed, a couple of times. The editing is somewhat bad in places. This is just an introduction. The story ends on what should be an internal cliffhanger.

Ffs half a story. Pointless

boring. too much repetation. and drop this galactic council thing. youtube full of it already. stop copy others. use your brain, your imagination.