can I get an essay reviewed

I am planning to apply to mechanical engineering at Upenn through ED considering I am an international student and already in grade 12 with no international,national level honours . Do I even have a chance?

My God youre drop dead

Can you give an example of the activity description you wrote on your CA? Thank you.

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Omg great essay that inspires mine.

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unrelated but girl you're so pretty?? i love your hair!

That was so beautiful and wholesome

Wow that was incredible !

Is that a personal statement?

YOUR NARRATION SWEPT ME OFF MY FEET.

About ehat topic should we write essay..? Ourself ?

Please how do you guys learn SAT and ACT?? buy book?

Hey hw can we connect on email?

Wow, I felt that writing an essay isn't as tough as the Costco essay (that level is too high for me) thanks~

Thank you!

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Great essay loved your diction and the editing made listening to someone reading their essay a lot more engaging. I’m feeling inspired so I’m gonna write an essay about a personal interest of mine. Good luck those of y’all applying to colleges. Let’s make it happen! 💪

Thank you so much for this!!!! I love it so so so much, thank you for sharing and CONGRATSSSSS <3

i wish i was smart:(

Excellent essay! You were short and to the point, which seems to be very unreachable by most people who write about their essay. You certainly accomplished a lot. But once you started reducing the pressure, you got more out of your experiences. U of Penn liked it!

Hello! I loved your essay and would extremely appreciate it if you could give me your email. My group and I are working on something and were wondering if you could help. You would very valuable to us. Please tell me what you think as soon as you can.

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Good essay. Creative editing. Very expressive reading. Well done. Blessings. Be safe. Be well. May all your ups and downs have only soft landings. ☮🕊☯💙💛💙💛💙💛🙏4 Ukraine.

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"Woah" is the only emotion I can muster up. This essay dealt with a perfect balance which, of course, lead you to a well-deserved admission to UPenn!! Good job, girl!!

oooh that last line though! so good!

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Thanks for sharing. It is a great inspiration point for others.

this Is sooo sooo good

Such a beautiful essay🥲💕

we love u!!!

Meanwhile my essay will be about my SA and being in and out of metal hospitals

This is the most humble brag essay and I respect you for it.

do you have your essay in pdf? :')

awesome! Refined thoughts!!

i genuinely think this video is a sign to me that i should stop carrying so much stress on myself, due to school. i’ve recently been struggling a lot with the balance between personal life and academics, and so when i heard what you wrote, not only did i think it was beautiful, i took it as a sign; a sign that i should allow myself to freely breathe in the environment i crave the most, which is feeling care-free. thank you, i will cherish this video forever.

this is so beautiful omfg

does anyone know which Common App prompt she used?

i want this to be me bruhh

Hi, I was wondering if there's any website or forum where peopke can read my application essays and give feedback

omg queen

Hi Valerie!thank you so much for the video, I am currently writing my essay for Cuny and I was wondering about the world limit you chose for this essay. Thank you!

Hi Valerie!thank you so much for the video, I am currently writing my essay for Cuny and I was wondering about the world limit you chose for this essay. Thank you!

it's actually so beauty, i'd read it if it was a book omg!⭐🤩

HOLY CRAP THAT ESSAY IS SO FREAKING GOOD WHY AM I LITERALLY CRYING OMG THIS IS SO GOOD

That was a beautiful essay and you’re beautiful too

Who taught you how to write so beautifully 🥹 please teach me hehe