I think if the lyrics were less spoken and were more sung the song would sound a little bit more professional. Another thing would be the instrumental since it’s live it cuts in and out as well as peak at some points. I think a final produced version would make the song sound a lot better. Like I think the spoken lyrics are ok, but I think if they had more rhythm it would come across better. Another thing is it being a live recording. If you sung into a mic and then put it on top of the instrumental it would sound a lot better due to peaking. A final version of this would sound pretty good. The only major complaint is the spoken lyrics as they don’t come across that clean and professional. This is just my opinion though. I hope it helps! :)
@DomLaGrotta3 жыл бұрын
Great work! Lovely, hoping all is well!
@bleakminded16584 жыл бұрын
Btw I subscribed 😂
@bleakminded16584 жыл бұрын
Oh my I love this thanks for sharing this 🙂
@alexiafrench2544 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! I've been writing some stuff I plan on releasing soon!!!
@bleakminded16584 жыл бұрын
Alexia French I’ll support whenever that comes out I love spoken word poetry
@AceHardy4 жыл бұрын
📙💯
@DataBotFound5 жыл бұрын
This is deep. First video(even if its old, thats, besides the point) I now wanna join you on the journey. Glad I came across this. I see Hamilton on this channel so that's an immediate sub. I gotta get to know Alexis now
@alexiafrench2545 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much more stuff coming soon!
@Tallmedicbro7 жыл бұрын
Ma’am are you deaf?? Or did you learn ASL??
@username60247 жыл бұрын
👍👍
@unoreg1037 жыл бұрын
This was amazing
@singinggymnastgmail7 жыл бұрын
Wow! Music video worthy!
@ashaliff92098 жыл бұрын
love this
@veganatoralpha76628 жыл бұрын
Such a wonderful voice! I love you!!!
@aegusa128 жыл бұрын
good job, Alexia!
@alexiafrench2548 жыл бұрын
thanks everyone means alot xD
@TheRealRoback928 жыл бұрын
👌💯
@ScottOctober8 жыл бұрын
keep it up ! love the singing and rapping aspect.
@aegusa128 жыл бұрын
also First!
@aegusa128 жыл бұрын
... hmm ... Amazing! I'd love to see a final version of this song in the future! I admire your bravery by putting your original stuff here on KZbin
@aegusa128 жыл бұрын
Nice Job!
@aegusa128 жыл бұрын
great! keep it up Alexia
@aegusa128 жыл бұрын
first! jk, Nice Job!
@aegusa128 жыл бұрын
nice, slightly pitchy at times but, honestly great!
@aegusa128 жыл бұрын
Nice! love your voice!
@alexiafrench2549 жыл бұрын
oh my god thank you so much xD hahaha ill check out your channel
@luciekay53549 жыл бұрын
You have so beautiful voice, I can see you are also so talented.... This cover is better than mine, I swear :) <3