The creepy guys in the video look like hackers watching you watch the video.

Pausing at 5:45. An ex wife gets nothing. The daughters get nothing unless a will says so. It goes to his wife.

Wow. The first time she’s called him and he sounds EVIL!

This went from a reddit post to a fiction story pretty quick.

Don't know who/what is narrating but it sounds like they're 14 or 15 years old.

Good story line and (unlike most narration videos of similar intent) no grammar errors. Unfortunately, the speech is slow and is too sing-song for comfort. The background images rotate arbitrarily, which is hard on us viewers who have balance issues (including me) and is totally preventable. There is a major shortage of narration videos with female-perpetrator male-victim in case you the uploader are interested.

Stupid distracting background..do better…

The volume is so low

Why not find out some true stories? When Castro took over Cuba, Americans paid only a tiny tax on the vast amount of land they owned. (Sugar plantations I think.) This was extremely unjust to the Cuban people. So when he compensated those landowners for their lost plantations, he valued them the same. At almost nothing. Probably gave a funny speech at the same time.

No names given means it's fake.

The voice is annoying stop watching

You did the right thing by leaving that toxic family.

That random female in the background is out of sync with the narration. Teeth on edge. I’m out.

Jack is a total D-bag.

Oh, not this crappy nose picking background again…please..bye

Now picking her nose…for god’s sake…disgusting

Gross background..vaping..are you kidding….🤮🤮🤮🤮

Sob. Sob. Drama overload.

please get rid of he sing song voice

Crab meat seems too delicate to be a pizza topping. A topping needs piquancy.

The voices are extremely irritating

It is difficult to listen to your story. You need to work on how you read something outloud. You do not put the rise and fall of your voice in the natural positions for spoken English. For examples, sentences do not normally end with the last word or two going up in octave/pitch. That is reserved for when you are using the format of a sentence, but turning it into a question. For example: The car broke down in Chicago. That's a sentence when spoken in one pitch. But if you lift the end of the sentence on Chicago, you are making it a question, asking for clarification that Chicago is where the car broke down. In addition you put odd pauses in in places where they do not belong. You are putting stress on words that normally don't get stress, while not stressing others that should.

Ur autotune hurts

Loyd (Lloyd) is a prat. He needs to grow up and also go to therapy.

Stop with the weird voices. Couldn't listen very far the voices to annoying. Just tell the story in normal voice

They say women are entitled, but I suspect this is societal gaslighting. Yes women can be entitled but SO ARE MEN!

Unless the eraser maker had a chemical when mixed with water that was harmful to breath in… What was the grandmother trying to accomplish when tampering with the bath water?

damage report? this was attempted murder!

Jesus christ! I'm a minute and then I'm already rooting for the toxic sister

Your title card with the information for this episode is extremely misspelled. If this happens often perhaps either get a professional editor or someone to proofread your stuff. Good premise though so please keep improving and you'll get more views😊

Dumb ending. Once a doormat, always a doormat.

Another fake story. This is not on Reddit that I have seen or can find

Step sister get it right

George could have moved in with OP and all this drama would have been avoided. OP is a door mat, who just laid down on the floor and let Lily not walk but stomp all over her. This woman is the biggest wimp, if she's lonely she could have reconnected with her friends from her old job.

Oh bawd, NO..not spending my watch time with creepy guy drinking…bye

Same thing. Random dude on video who isnt the narrator. Disliked.

Wtf is dude on the overlay for if its not the narrator. You didnt even bother syncing the lips. Its also a dude when the story is a female voice. Disliked.

This has to be an Asian family

This is a load of garbage.

Shit that never happened.

Really? Canceled the wedding because of a dress? Weddings are not about clothing. Come back to reality people

Oh gawd awful background..bye

My X never put me before his bully of a father or his scizophrenic mother.

what culture is this?

What culture is this?

Annoying AI voices, AI is not set to say the words correctly and way too fast for speaking

Love your work and presentation by the way 👏

Cult culture has been adopted by most Governments, you've rightfully explained that politicians are sociapaths, have a think about it and make a video about why government policy, lockdowns, to isolate are different???

Adolf or Robert? Lol

This story is a mess. The AI has the entire story out of order, repeating of lines, etc.