Great great video : Could you make the audio a little louder. Even when I turn the volume fully up, I am unable to hear clearly
@AnnieFinchPoet15 күн бұрын
I don't think it is possible for this one--but in the future I will keep it in mind. thank you!
@karmen6394Ай бұрын
Thank you so much for this, very helpful explanation as im studying for an English exam that will include a scansion portion
@AnnieFinchPoet15 күн бұрын
I'm delighted that it is helpful!
@penielmomoh70182 ай бұрын
Lovely, Professor Finch. Thank you from Nigeria. It's truly a powerful passionate juicy wild amazing empowering thing, thank you !
@AnnieFinchPoet15 күн бұрын
so glad!!
@TVSoaps-c8n3 ай бұрын
I can’t do this anymore
@RapborlangGassah4 ай бұрын
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@PendulumMapTarotLightWorker5 ай бұрын
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@SanyaKhurana5 ай бұрын
Loved this 👏👏
@Zheugma6 ай бұрын
This is great. I love to write poems and read poetry, study it ... I wish I could learn more
@darkengine59318 ай бұрын
Something that's really confusing me about English scansion, and coming from a musical background, is that it doesn't seem like conformity to classical Greek meters necessarily creates something all that rhythmic. Example: 1. The jelly master glared at Max and charged a fine. 2. The scarred master glared at Max and charged him a fine. #1 is in perfect iambic hexameter to my understanding: >> the JE lly MAS ter GLARED at MAX and CHARGED a FINE. [6 iambs] #2 seems a bit all over the place. >> the SCARRED MAS ter GLARED at MAX and CHARGED him a FINE. >> [iamb, trochee, trochee, trochee, trochee, iamb?] Yet #2 actually sounds more rhythmic and smoother to my ears given the way I pronounce it. Inserting "him" towards the end of the line seems to alleviate a sort of tension and desire to slow down/pause, and "SCARRED MAS-ter" flows more smoothly to me and seems to better evenly distribute the stressed syllables than "JE-lly MAS-ter". "SCARRED" also seems like it wants to turn into two beats given how long of a syllable it is relative to the ones around it (I take about as long to say "scarred" as I do "jelly", despite the latter being two syllables and the former only one). I want to read it and divide the stress beats somewhat like this: >> the SCARR | rred MAS | ter GLARED | at MAXx | and CHAR | rrged him | a FINE. >> / ðə skɑ | rd ˈmæs | tər glɛrd | æt mæks | ænd ʧɑ | rʤd hɪm | ə ˈfineɪ / This is decomposing the exceptionally long syllables (SCARRED and CHARGED) into two pieces which seems to help me understand the rhythm sometimes. The longer syllables often want to break into two or more sound pieces to my ears to understand their sound relationships with their surrounding sounds and also the relative timing of each sound. Another example: 1. The cat had sat on grass. 2. The cat had sat on a log. #1 sounds more rhythmically tense to my ears even though it perfectly conforms to iambic trimeter. #2 doesn't conform nicely to a syllabic meter yet it seems much more rhythmic to speak aloud. I say #1 like: 1-2: the CAT 3-4: had SAT 5-6: on GRASS [GRASS is off-timed; it's ahead of the 6th beat] ... and #2 like: 1-2: the CAT 3-4: had SAT 5-6: on a LOG [LOG is timed well to the 6th beat] Both are 6 beats (3 stressed beats), but against a steadily-timed metronome, "GRASS" is off-timed with the way I say it. It comes too early, making me want to pause if I want to smooth out the rhythm or if I don't pause, it just sounds off-beat. #2 seems to land "LOG" much more evenly in timing with "CAT" and "SAT". I can appreciate conformity to accentual/stress patterns from my musical background as part of rhythm, but a drummer consistently playing accented beat patterns is not going to sound the slightest bit rhythmic if his timings are all over the place. It seems to me like if we want the timings of accented beats to be reasonably rhythmic, we must factor in the length of the syllables involved and decompose them into smaller sound units.
@AnnieFinchPoet8 ай бұрын
It looks like you are counting syllables instead of hearing feet. The "scarred master" line scans best as an iambic pentameter line, with two anapestic variations (in first and last foot). Feet are best heard wtihin the context of the rhythm of the whole poem, since meter can vary wtihin the pattern. I recommend my book How to Scan a Poem: A Poetry Witch Workbook, which includes detailed explanation and sample poems to scan for practice..Here is a link: bookshop.org/a/1041/9781737307563
@darkengine59318 ай бұрын
@@AnnieFinchPoet Thank you! I think I'm neither counting syllables nor feet in a conventional sense, but rather how these syllables are timed to a metronome in natural speech. For example, "SPAR-kled" seems to take less time to say than "SPARKED on", so the timing of "kled" and "on" seem different, along with shifting the rhythmic timing of whatever succeeds them.
@darkengine59318 ай бұрын
@@AnnieFinchPoetWhat I am finding at least with the cat example is that against a uniformly-timed metronome or if we clap to a steady beat, "sat on" seems to take too little time to say to neatly make "grass" land on the 3rd stress beat. If I elongate it like "slept on grass", I can avoid breaking iambic pentameter and make "grass" land closer to the 3rd stress beat. "The cat had slept on grass." That seems to land "grass" at approximately the same timing as "log" when I say, "The cat had sat on a log." So I'm often finding there are certain sections that don't sound right if the syllables are too short or too long to quantize the stress beats to a uniform timer unless we deviate from poetic meter in favor of more precise rhythmic timing.
@charlesjunior9089 ай бұрын
Can a man recite it ? For cause the abortion ?
@trulytarana Жыл бұрын
❤
@AnnieFinchPoet11 ай бұрын
🔥Goddess bless!🔥
@lixii80 Жыл бұрын
I am an Arab girl. I am studying English literature. I have a test tomorrow. Thank you for the explanation. Wish me success🥹
@AnnieFinchPoet Жыл бұрын
Good luck! Hope you pass with flying colors!
@lixii80 Жыл бұрын
@@AnnieFinchPoet Yes, I passed the exam and got a full score. Thank you for helping me ❤️
@AnnieFinchPoet8 ай бұрын
@@lixii80 wonderful, so glad to hear:)!
@eomalo3531 Жыл бұрын
Thank you Annie you saved my ass tonight.
@AnnieFinchPoet Жыл бұрын
Ha! Glad to hear!:)
@tinalove6465 Жыл бұрын
Beauty in beautiful.
@AnnieFinchPoet Жыл бұрын
thank you Tina!
@meterandmayhem Жыл бұрын
I love this! I wrote an entire novel (well, it's very short, so maybe novella to some) enrhythming to Wordsworth's The Prelude and I think it did such fun things to my prose that I never would have done without it.
@AnnieFinchPoet11 ай бұрын
That is fantastic:) A good way to deal with the anxiety of influence too, I would think? woud love to see it!
@meterandmayhem11 ай бұрын
@@AnnieFinchPoetShe's a wild and weird ride, but I'll send it along to you. :)
@meterandmayhem Жыл бұрын
I can't even begin to say how much the Meter Magic Spiral means to me!
@AnnieFinchPoet Жыл бұрын
Yay! So glad you are part of the Magic there, Jen:)
@rodneyabrownnmynigasituation Жыл бұрын
Amen/Awoman
@thomasdef634 Жыл бұрын
Powerfully, beautifully, written and read. I bow in reverence to the light of your voice.
@AnnieFinchPoet Жыл бұрын
Thank you! I appreciate your kind comment--and its beautiful metrical rhythms.
@thomasdef634 Жыл бұрын
I write both prosodically and nonprosodically. Perhaps unsurprisingly, the poems I memorise most easily are the ones with a regular heartbeat. Thank you for this video, confirming deep intuitions and adding new light to them.
@AnnieFinchPoet11 ай бұрын
You are welcome! Meter matters:)
@luminancebloom Жыл бұрын
Very clear explanation--thank you! Love the idea of shouting the line to emphasize the stress!
@AnnieFinchPoet Жыл бұрын
You are very welcome!:)
@CrystaljeanHoffman2 жыл бұрын
Glorious
@AnnieFinchPoet Жыл бұрын
thank you Crystal for feeling Brigid's magic, Crystal!
@rodneyabrownnmynigasituation2 жыл бұрын
Blessed Be
@toddjacksonpoetry2 жыл бұрын
Proud to be view 1 like 1 on this, Annie, beautifully done.
@saramalekian38922 жыл бұрын
Thank you 🙏🏼 I learned it :)
@AnnieFinchPoet2 жыл бұрын
so glad it was helpful! I am now offering classes around the web and in my own community; check it out if you want to learn more...www.anniefinch.com
@pamelaroebuck10792 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your gifts
@pamelaroebuck10792 жыл бұрын
Wonderful to hear a poem in the meter of love. I felt as if I was held in the arms of the Great Mother. Thank you, Annie
@AnnieFinchPoet2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much Pamela! xox
@toddjacksonpoetry2 жыл бұрын
Excellent!
@AnnieFinchPoet2 жыл бұрын
Glad you liked it!
@hifiunicorn3 жыл бұрын
The link to your books doesn't have a purchase option. How can I get a copy? Thanks!
@anniefinch90422 жыл бұрын
Here's a link with a purchase option. Enjoy! www.amazon.com/Poets-Craft-Comprehensive-Making-Sharing/dp/0472033646
@AnnieFinchPoet Жыл бұрын
Here's a link to this & the other books all together. Hope they are helpful! bookshop.org/p/book!s/how-to-scan-a-poem-a-poetry-witch-workbook-annie-finch/20040040?aid=1041&ean=9781737307563&listref=books-by-annie-finch-poetry-witch-press&
@shreyabanik29873 жыл бұрын
Could the sentence { I hear the wands, half-wands and cups} scan as iamb, iamb, trochee and iamb
@anniefinch90422 жыл бұрын
I see what you mean--and theoretically, maybe it could--but if you think about the actual meaning of the compound-word "half-wands" as you say it, you might find you put more emphasis on "WANDS" than on "half," because "wands" carries more information in the compound-word and hence is a more important syllable. So, if you pronounce it like that, the third foot would also be an iamb.
@moonlightiguana3 жыл бұрын
Could the third line scan as an iamb, a pyrrhic, a spondee, an iamb?
@AnnieFinchPoet3 жыл бұрын
Yes, it definitely could scan that way! the third foot, "write po," is scanned in the video as a half-wand and a wand, which is already basically a spondee (as Paul Kiparsky said, whether a foot is a spondee or not is basically just a matter of if you consider a spondee as two stresses, or as two equal stresses). And in the second foot, it would be perfectly reasonable to scan "ing to" as a pyrrhic. That decision falls into the 20% or so of scansion that is subjective, that gives a good, sensitive scansion its own unique feeling.
@nickwettstein11874 жыл бұрын
Awesome, thanks for sharing! Eventually it'd be great to implement this kind of knowledge into my poems, that is, once I get the hang of it.
@nickwettstein11874 жыл бұрын
also, I enjoy your poetry! I wish to know more on punctuation in poems, any advice or places you can send me would be greatly appreciated, thanks!
@AnnieFinchPoet3 жыл бұрын
@@nickwettstein1187 thank you, how nice to hear you enjoy my poetry. As for punctuation, there is some discussion of punctuation in poetry in my book A Poet's Craft, which you might find helpful..
@AnnieFinchPoet3 жыл бұрын
reading great poems in meter aloud is a very useful way to get the hang of it--it develops body memory. If you want a nice collection to read aloud you could check out Measure for Measure: An Anthology of Poetic Meters
@nickwettstein11873 жыл бұрын
@@AnnieFinchPoet after replying I happened to find the book, I've been using it every now and again =)
@AnnieFinchPoet Жыл бұрын
@@nickwettstein1187 cool! Hope you are reading the poems aloud 3x; that is my motto now: #SpeakItThrice!
@ceciledenimes78424 жыл бұрын
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@sherryking6644 жыл бұрын
Very helpful! Thank you.
@AnnieFinchPoet4 жыл бұрын
So glad it was helpful, Sherry! (I was without a tripod so holding the camera with my other hand--but the scansion technique is as sturdy as it gets!)
@AceHardy5 жыл бұрын
📙💯
@biigjojo28 жыл бұрын
that was pretty
@ChristianAdrienne9 жыл бұрын
Love this! Reminds me of a book I'm reading now, "The Earth Path" by Starhawk. The book tells us readers how to align ourselves with the rhythms of the earth.
@AnnieFinchPoet4 жыл бұрын
thanks for your comment, Adrienne! You won't be surprised that I'm a fan of Starhawk; her book Dreaming the Dark: Magic, Sex, and Politics helped to make me a pagan. Wish I recalled the name of the young videographer who put this video together years ago--he did a nice job!
@KeziahGibbonsGuided10 жыл бұрын
Thank you! Succint and powerful words, strong images :)
@PoetryETrain12 жыл бұрын
Beyond beautiful, well done, thank you, this has been added to a playlist...
@AnnieFinchPoet4 жыл бұрын
Yay! Thanks for letting me know; that is wonderful to hear.
@PoetryETrain12 жыл бұрын
Very well done, beautiful, thank you, added to a playlist...
@AnnieFinchPoet4 жыл бұрын
Great to know--please feel free to share the playlist here if it is public and would be interesting to subscribers of this channel :)