hahahaha, 1st in 1st thumbs up !!!!!!!!

idont agree with some of the translation when i read it, but good story nonetheless. i think i can do better with translation. ;-),

Good one.

too many fist slamming...

You enjoy stealing others content?

Vampires and space,definitely a yes from me 😊

Erebus...the primordial god of Darkness. You got the name correct ONCE... at 35:00! You do a hatchet job on almost every single name in this video!

❤😊 A fantastic story thankyou. Watching from Toowoomba Queensland Australia 🦘🌏😊.

How the hell can a computer generated voice pronounce the same words in two or three different ways?

And unfortunately, the human ship was put on autopilot and hit the moon.

Well that was a bit shit wasn't it people!

Lightyears ahead, as in another galaxy...? Lightyear is a measure of distance, not time.

Whoever wrote this needs to stop writing. What was the objective of the character’Elias’? He seems to be a complete Idiot and clueless on what to do. This was simple start and move away from current location. Instead he managed to screw EVERY SINGLE THING that could be screwed up. What kind of idiot writes up such an idiot character?

Good god AI sux.

this needs a chapter 2

a.i. narrator sucks ! Hire a human !

Why didn't they just leave to begin with? It was fully functional just dormant.

Spelling and pronunciation is terrible, someone needs to go back to school

Oh, crap! If none of the scavengers' tools could cut into the hull, how did the boarding parties get it so easily? This story sucks.

Geeee.... a Super Duper Carrier.. How Space age..Maybe in Korea .

Touching story, good job

Your AI voice needs re-programming when it comes to the pronunciation of names. E-lias. Not El-ias.

Crap

If any story should be expanded,, THIS IS THE ONE.!!! 😁😎🤓👍👍🤗 The characters are all established, the " good vs. evil " lines are drawn.!!! The only thing left is to add chapters 2-55+.!!! We are anxiously awaiting the expansion of this potentially EPIC TALE. Please don't keep us waiting writers or A.I.'S whatever controls the narrative, keep on writing and make the Sci-Fi folks 🤓😁😅😆😂🤗🤔😎🤓 happy and proud as the tale grows.!!!👍👍👽🖖👽🖖👽🖖😯😧😮😬🤗 ( I and the mostly yellow guys concur.!!🤓)

Why did the ship just leave. Dumb

❤ A fantastic story, loved it . Thankyou.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

14% operational capacity after the battle and fully operational before battle. Even if not engaging in combat with the alien fleet, or just firing single shot to breaching machines that were effective, there would have not been any problem just firing the engines and leaving. Even after the fleet arrived, there was no actual treat to the ship, if Carter had not fucked around and simply zipped around and disabled the alien fleets engines and weapon systems, instead of sitting still and tanking it with out any actual reason to do so, specially when the end result was still essentially full blown war. The aliens getting beaten, seems like they would definitely not broadcast their defeat since warrior type culture, unless warriors honor was strong in their culture or information network essentially spy everyone. Also the ship even after disabling the fleet, could have used its drones, just collect spare parts or least materials from the literal scrapyard it was sitting, or destroyed ships floating from the battle to do emergency repairs, if its condition was supposedly so grave. Story concept is decent, but ffs let people proof read your stories before posting them. Also fuck off with the AI crap... or very least if creating visuals keep it consistent. Dont become yet another pumping AI garbage channel if this is not part of corporation or production group...

can`t listen to the useless robot sprouting the incomprehensible bull .

If they had security drones, why didn't they use them earlier? I don't understand why Elias is trying to hold the spaceship back. It sounds dumb. Just let the Vanguard AI handle business.

An interesting story of combat of AI controled warship in conjunction with an old human soldier vs. the new alien order, and the complexities of human/machine existence in a hostile universe. Well done and the graphics were interesting.

It just keeps saying the same thing but in different words

Really frustration story. What was Elias doing on the ship, nothing at all but restricting the ship.

lost me at woman president

Nope!!! WHAT THE HELL is a "missile BEARidge!!!???

DAMN.....on second 2 of the story to realize it's the same crappy AI from the story I just stopped listening to from you. I will give it a try.

Your AI SUX!! What is a: "BEAR-idge", "e-KO-ing", "RED-outs"....PLEASE Stope using crappy AI when they can't freaking speaks Eng-LASH-es proPEARly!!! Narrate your own stories youselfs like some others do. So, pless RED your own sto-REES.

Piss

This story does not make sense

Dumb.

We kan't spel ether. Bi uh dik sun arie.

Urine 6 lmao.

I want more of it maby full Series

Humans are monsters.

You would think the creators would at least create a wider list of different names instead of the same 20 or so they use now. And maybe, just maybe toss in some female voices.