Now it’s slower bruh I’ve been going for 3 minutes and it’s still at frame 1

It would be better if he was first appeared in Sendaris colours(Osivian could ask Sendaris Master initiate Senn in their clan)

As someone who loved s1 and could not watch s2 (because of the acting) this is pretty good

I have been a big fan of the series back then. Still is, but it's sad to see that places like Hollywood now no longer produce stories with passion regularly. With the Minecraft Movie on the horizon, my sentiment towards it couldn't even hold a candle against my preference for SOW. Watching your video made me feel that the age which good stories are told can now be harnessed in the hands of people who are not even professionals, who simply tell good stories for the sake of it.

15:42 the SoW community in a nutshell when anyone mentions David

As someone who somehow has Senn as their favourite character this was very interesting. Honestly I think I liked the idea of the premise of his arc in canon but I genuinely also had problems with it's execution in the script. Honestly his canon arc literally is him becoming less rebellious in S1, being essentially a background character for all of S2 up until S3E5 and then he becomes relevant again, and even then he dealt with the whole "Being half Voltaris thing _way_ too quickly, there was like no payoff. I honestly love this rewrite because it makes Senn's internal struggles very clear and makes him more of a character instead of just a stand-in for the audience in most of his interactions.

We cant forget the owner of Plasma Studios is a Pedo

Yeah, I think I Agree, he definitely Does need an arc

People still remember Songs of War??

To be honest I don't think Senn is such a problematic character though I do think the changes you suggest could improve the story. My bigger issue is with how in the story is how the Voltaris as a clan are never redeemed. Sure at the end there's a new Voltaris clan but we never see the other clans admitting that they were wrong all those years.

Honestly Ingressus' info dump could've been reserved for the Voltar memory sequence.

I feel like mysticat was probably running away from something or someone, if it was that fast a struggle might’ve happened before she got the stairs and maybe got pushed or stabbed

songs of war is one of those things I come back to every few months to rewatch it really wish they contiunued with the second season

Nice video!

I came back to this series after some years of leaving it. I loved the “believer” remix on the trailer, it’s great seeing it alive!

I see what you mean, Senn. Since getting all this hate needs a rewrite, a 16-minute video won't do it, though. But it's a start! This is a real scratch of the surface because a bunch of dialog changes are needed. Still great start!

I watched white pine in vr and it really immerses you into the story

Personally I agree that @plantlover3741 when saying it could be a vampire and that ivory could be a dampyr.

i agree with your first point that the stream and its bite marks but what else leaves bite marks a zombie and guess what happened the day before "there is a hunt tmr" and lastly the zombie had no remorse for the dead and lastly zam said your only the new maid because- it was because mys dies because zombie didnt like mys and lastly when they find the body ash says "why dose it matter lalala" i dont remember but that dose implie that mys had drama in the past with family + workers

I think mysticat just fell down the stairs

10:00 that caught my attention. That forest "followed her around". What if that forest IS the monster? She's traveled so far to escape it, never once setting foot in it, and yet, it followed her somehow. It might explain why she stares at it so often, it looks oddly familiar. In episode 2, she was warned to stay away from it, but she escaped to see for herself if it was the same forest she was running from. How it killed the servant and the mother is the question. But if the forest is the monster, I'm sure it has its ways. No wall nor gate would be enough to keep it out. Which is probably what's bothering the family members so much. The illusion of their mansion being a safe zone was shattered. If it was a monster or a killer, I'm sure they'd evacuate or at least station someone to keep watch. But they didn't. They realized that there was no monster. It was the forest itself, and there's no escaping it. That would explain the family rummaging through books searching for some kind of information that could explain their experiences. As for the wounds, it could be anything.

Low-key I feel like mistycat was murdered by a chandelier. It would explain the wounds and her body looks like she fell.

5:43 bro you forgot the other thing that the Piano used to be in a different room that seraptor was cleaning and mentioned this. Nobody really plays a piano in the basement, especially if they're rich.

I also came job 😊

I love the fact there is a Minecraft series, that we can look at the body to see if its stab wounds or bite marks and that be (likley) an intentional detail

6:06 why do you assume it was a murder? could have been a natural death

Nice work 😊 I actually watched the race he was in with SuperGT (well I watched SuperGT's video of it) - Simon is **rapid**

In the forest when Ivory is strolling in the forest she sees a man and walks as fast as she can from that person. This happened in whitepine 2.

This was outstanding.

This is a good theory,but one problem if it's true, the monster gonna look goofy as hell in Minecraft

just play 18w31a lmao

-3111440461282444761 on 1.18.1

I can see improvement to be made

nice, do you have the seed?

Wow that was fast.

@moneyboimc

Interesting take, most people(including me) are thinking it’s a murder mystery story. But this could be nice. Also the H E L P is interesting, I kinda wanna go back and see if there’s any other hidden words, even if they have no meaning.

Also they saidthat a lot of people went missing on the forest, like why does no one talk about that!?

quirky

with ep 2 the scene with ivory in the forest confirms my therory that shes the murderer and that shes just trying to hide her murderous pultions dont hate pls its just a theory

I think it’s just Mugm or the green version of ivory.

Some problems that I have with this theory (very long winded responses below): 1. There has been literally no evidence of there being a monster in the story so far. We know that there is definitely something wrong with the woods since people have been going missing in it, but that doesn’t necessarily mean that there’s a beast going and killing people. In regards to Ivory’s fixation with the woods, literally anything could have happened to her during her time out there that could have led her to sustain some kind of trauma explaining this fixation of hers. Though, if there is a monster killing people and ivory did have an encounter with it, then I don’t see why ivory would be so fixated on going back out there. One more thing: if a monster did take a massive bite out of the back of mysticat’s neck like you say, then the detective wouldn’t be questioning human suspects as her potential killers. Not necessarily evidence that there isn’t a monster, more so just the fact that that mark on her neck isn’t a bite mark. In regards to the rest of her wounds, again I’d like to think that the detective and everyone else would be able to distinguish claw marks from stab wounds, so if this was a monster then suspecting humans doesn’t really make sense. 2. It seems unlikely that Mrs hemlock was killed recently. We can intuit this much from the fact that seraptor doesn’t clearly remember that Mrs hemlock used to play the piano in that one brightly colored room from episode 1. If she’d died recently, then not only would the existence of the piano not have been something that he’d have to question since it’s been moved to the basement presumably after her death (moving the piano would have likely been a job for him or the other workers) he’d also likely remember hearing it or at least seeing it as he worked around the house. This seems to imply that the piano has resided in the basement for a while now, meaning that Mrs hemlock has likely been dead for some time. Furthermore, if she had died recently, then given the fact that the butlers/maids’ jobs are to attend to the hemlock family’s needs, you’d think Ivory would be told of her death so that she could better support them emotionally as they’re grieving. Of course, if the butlers/maids haven’t been told of her death like you say, then this wouldn’t be an issue, however given what we know about the piano, it seems more likely that she died a long time ago and it’s old news as opposed to her having died recently and no one knows about it since why would they have moved the piano to the basement if Mrs hemlock is still believed to be alive and enjoys playing it? 3. The hemlock family is clearly hiding something. We can infer this from the HELP letter, since the “help” message itself is clearly only meant to be understood by the hemlock family and whoever it was that wrote it. From a narrative perspective, it would really only makes sense that this is somehow related to the death of mysticat and potentially Mrs hemlock, otherwise there’d be no point in including it in the story from a writing perspective. Going off of that logic, if the secret is that there is a monster killing people and that they’re trying to hide it’s existence from the world, then the help letter arriving right as the monster makes it first kill could make a lot of sense (maybe it escaped from this other party’s control and is targeting the hemlock estate now), but then why would the hemlock family have any interest in staying where they are now after receiving the help letter? Even if they were going to leave the workers to die they’d at least want to protect themselves in some way, however, as far as we know, they haven’t done anything. Also, people have been going missing in the woods for presumably some time now, so unless that letter just happened to take forever getting delivered then the timeframe for this being linked to a monster doesn’t really seem plausible. I think It’s hard to say what’s really been going on at this point. we haven’t really received any cohesive/conclusive evidence within these first two episodes, instead we’ve had a lot of setup for what’s to come. Given a little more time, I’m sure whitepine will deliver an amazing narrative, but for now we wait…

Another theory: There’s a monster, it’s in the forest for some reason kills Misty, Ivory and Pyro know the monster (Ivory just stared at the body after it was discovered) it comes out for some reason, maybe because they left the forest and it’s taking revenge by unaliving their closest friends!

I’d like to point out how they shoot some scenes as well, almost as if we are looking from another persons perspective, hiding, unseen or like a cctv cams view. Shots that feel like we are stalking as we watch characters interact with each other and then being left alone to sit in a dull silence. Maybe it’s just how they shot the scenes, but some really do feel like we are someone watching, staring, intruding almost.

another theory in episode 2 of whitepine since the forest is linked with the murder and the only person we see in the forest was divy. so maybe hes a part of this?

in whitepine 2 you can see that the area seraptor and ivory were in during the forest scene doesn't have a visible fence. the fence probably ended near the front which is why I think that *was* the easiest entry into the manor

I got this on my recommended and never seen anything about nvnay of this, the video's barely started and I feel like I fell into the deep end of the pool as a kid

wait but could the killer have not just moved her body after killing her?

I feel like it's probable there was no scream from the murder itself. Fast murder, as you said, could catch someone off guard enough to just kill. As for who did it, probably not a person. Monster? Evil spirit? Who knows.

If the monster killed the mom, why would they go hunting?