This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters. It sucks that Naruto was betrayed by Shenae and the village, but not surprising because that’s just how it goes with all of the retrieval mission stories But it’s cool that he was taken away before he was executed. It also sucks for what happened to Karama and what the village did to him it’s cool that Naruto was reborn into the sword art online game. I think it was lol but then after everyone being freed from the game, he saved a little girl and was killed again, but then also he was granted being able to be reborn again, and he took the offer, but with some stipulations since he wanted everything that he had had from his previous life from the online game just made real instead of being in a game I guess lol now Naruto‘s there in the elemental nations and ready to especially white the leaf village off the map so far he’s saved. I lost count of how many of the tail beast though though he was able to rescue Karma and then Karma told Nora tell he wanted to be involved in destroying the leaf village in Naruto granted him his wish can’t wait for that to happen really gonna be laughing my arse off over that one really hope that this story continues cause there’s still a lot going on. They’re still in the middle of the games release for the final round is getting ready to start. Definitely we all wanna know who’s Sasuke‘s gonna end up being up against that’ll be hilarious and I pretty much laughed my arse off for each event that the leaf village has lost in very humiliating ways. Totally hilarious. Hope the story comes out soon. 3:25:26
@justincurry14656 күн бұрын
Part 2 please
@jacobballard59786 күн бұрын
I'm waiting for 2
@ChrisHass-f8h6 күн бұрын
More pics FROM CHRISHASS.
@LordDanteBeowolf6 күн бұрын
This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot. It’s cool that Naruto has met Haku, Kimmy, Maru and Goran at a really young age. Really hope that Naruto and Haku become a couple or maybe even Naruto and Gurran that would be a new relationship. Not a Naruto story that I have heard about yet really hope that this story continues cause after all when the story started, it was Naruto and Haku with me to Rumi. I know I’m not the only one that wants to know how they all ended up meeting. May Truman also is the other two still with Naruto and Haku Hopefully they’re fighting in a different battle somewhere fighting enemies. Hope the story comes out soon and also hopefully Naruto and Haku will be able to help Kimmy tomorrow cure hits disease if he even has it cause not sure if it was due to the Kerrs mark from Orochi Mario, or if it has something to do with Kimmy Morris clan and it’s a side effect due to them or at least him using his bones as weapons I’ve never fully understood that 1:34:34
@LordDanteBeowolf7 күн бұрын
This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters Hope Naruto and that girl get together as a couple since she told him how she really feels about him that she loves him and kissed him lol Really hope that this story continues and comes out soon 2:20:35
@szawegaming11947 күн бұрын
Fanfic name?
@DanteDelany7 күн бұрын
Part 2 please
@priyalsingh29868 күн бұрын
Please make a part 2
@glennmorrison59608 күн бұрын
Part 2 please
@joshuakeller61228 күн бұрын
Part two please
@michaelmendenhall1708 күн бұрын
Must make a part 2
@shawnsmith44198 күн бұрын
Part 2 please
@maybelsantana95568 күн бұрын
Fanfiction name Sage of 666 paths something like that
@jeffzamorro39038 күн бұрын
part 2 pls
@snackery_matel12388 күн бұрын
Part 2 please
@noxkraven49858 күн бұрын
Is there a part 2 the story isn’t over
@glissaryz_557210 күн бұрын
Meh kinda stupid and predictable 😂😂
@shwetaupadhyay600310 күн бұрын
Fanfic name
@theklyntar766611 күн бұрын
Part 2 pls ❤❤❤❤ , really awesome series so far really good start and great potential as well. Pls make more parts of this series 🙏.
@CalebBourasa11 күн бұрын
Please make a part 2
@CalebBourasa13 күн бұрын
Please make a part 2
@AWshawWolf-b4f13 күн бұрын
Someone already did this one before and no part 2 to this
@theklyntar766613 күн бұрын
Part 2 pls ❤❤❤❤ , really awesome series so far really good start and great potential as well. Pls make more parts of this series 🙏.
@Joshuascott-su4id13 күн бұрын
More parts more parts
@jackstorm195414 күн бұрын
This is fucking awesome also part
@josh-f2b14 күн бұрын
part 2 pls pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@anthonyhuffman169215 күн бұрын
Made the comment about dragon ball. As long as you don't bring it in the continuous one up and chip. Then I'm fine with it. It's when the guy can't even rest before the next more powerful villain shows up every once in a while. The overpowered protagonist needs to curb. Stop the current level and then later we bring in the next more powerful villain. Just having him constantly train train to fight the next more powerful villain. Because you know it's coming down to pop and he never gets to have much of a life. Just as f****** monotonous after a point, it worked with dragon ball because it was the first one to really do the training arc. Select that, but all these other fan factions always. Other animals that introduced the elongated training Ark and the constant leveled up villains, it doesn't work. It works for dragon ball even in hunter x hunter. I had time to actually enjoy life between battles. In Naruto, they had time to be themselves between battles.In dragon ball, it was a constant grind and yeah, it worked for dragon ball, but you never want to see that in another anime or Manga. Which truthfully is why I like one's like Toriko Which were always hunting for food. I love that it wasn't about the battles. It was about eating and you had to battle the food to get it. It wasn't enjoyable anime and I wish to hell, they had continued the anime. Instead of stopping the anime and then you had to finish reading it in the Manga and I still wish they hadn't ended the Manga. I'm sure one of the things I do wish is they would bring this into the elemental nations. I sleep so many of them. Were they taking Naruto and characters from Naruto out and to other worlds? I want to see more of bringing those worlds to Naruto, even though I don't like it when it really when it gets merged together because it deletes the story of Naruto, but I like to see him get unusual powers and how it. Plays with the actual Naruto storyline. But usually when people bring powers from outside of the elementary nations and give them to Naruto, they stripped him of his ninja abilities like shadow com in one of them. I read he never stole the scroll of ceiling and never got shadow clone but he got the powers of the devil freak from one piece. I don't want to say a swap of powers. I want to see additional powers. Just imagine these shadow cones being able to I don't know. Have the power of Ace and phase into file fire. Or by'd be like that's too overpowered. But then you gotta think down to line. The villains and opponents Naruto has to face. And that's when I say there is no such thing as overpowered. I don't care if you give him the power lock in the one punch ninja. Fan fiction, that's not overpowered.For what Naruto ends up having to face.Yeah, he's still wins but remember he is the child of destiny.Why should he have to struggle around like a slug?On the ground instead of soaring in the clouds like an eagle
@SumanDas-bh2wo13 күн бұрын
How much time did u spent writing this
@evilnappa178015 күн бұрын
really naruto as basically barrigan?
@DanteDelany15 күн бұрын
Part 2 please
@MARKBRODY-t8f16 күн бұрын
Part 2 ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
@douglas409216 күн бұрын
Part 2 please
@crystalbeetham-bs1tl16 күн бұрын
This story is really good part two please Naruto and Garra vs Dracula is going to be good time for Kuroma to get into the fight❤❤❤❤❤