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@wonttell4873
@wonttell4873 19 сағат бұрын
It's deathworld, not deefworld! When are you all going to fix these miss-pronunciations? And the first thing a warship would do if victory was not assured would be to call for reinforcements. Dislike.
@johndgowrie1376
@johndgowrie1376 6 күн бұрын
This is So bad 🙄
@Ron-y1b
@Ron-y1b 13 күн бұрын
How many ways can you say the same thing
@scifiworld-l5j
@scifiworld-l5j 15 күн бұрын
nice😍😍😍
@05462185
@05462185 17 күн бұрын
I have a story suggestion for you. Send me a message if you're interested.
@HFYStories-iy9xe
@HFYStories-iy9xe 13 күн бұрын
yes guide ma please
@05462185
@05462185 10 күн бұрын
@@HFYStories-iy9xe I'm on the final draft of the story. I should forward it to you in a day or so.
@kentchristiansen95
@kentchristiansen95 18 күн бұрын
Enough with the they them crap proper English is not prejudice
@Shadowkey392
@Shadowkey392 22 күн бұрын
Not a bad story. Unfortunately it is completely undermined by the fact that you have the main character cheating to win by using that device. And why did you throw a war machine in there? And more importantly, what the hell happened at the end? The war machine is suddenly no longer a problem for no reason. VERY poor writing. I urge you to stop using AI to write these things for you.
@Scott_Burton
@Scott_Burton 24 күн бұрын
Would be good to at least make sure after punctuation a space is included in you text "dot A S" and "dot I" are the result of poor formatting. "Something happened.as" comes out as "something happened dot A S" alternatively, just read into a microphone.
@davidbarr1579
@davidbarr1579 28 күн бұрын
Did not care for this one
@grogvaughan5649
@grogvaughan5649 28 күн бұрын
Good story
@nanettecormier8513
@nanettecormier8513 Ай бұрын
Confusing story telling.
@michaeltrent2726
@michaeltrent2726 Ай бұрын
I'm so jealous...I want an otter guard
@chrisboggs5105
@chrisboggs5105 Ай бұрын
It's like a Korean drama
@uwe2749
@uwe2749 Ай бұрын
WTF why can none of you so called "Content Creators" lern to write ( or use of any Spelling Programm )? Maybe you should go back to School. Setzten sechs
@bluestar4579
@bluestar4579 Ай бұрын
I hope the person who wrote this doesn't plan on becoming a novelist anytime soon. The lack of descriptive details and overuse of exposition in the first 20 seconds is terrible. Focus on characters, not on wider concepts that have no immediate bearing on the story such as governments, cultures, wars, history, etc. Those wider concepts tend to be rather boring anyway. Two KZbinrs I recommend for advice are Terrible Writing Advice (who's really funny) and Brandon McNulty.
@markc1548
@markc1548 Ай бұрын
More repetitive AI garbage.
@jamesvandemark2086
@jamesvandemark2086 Ай бұрын
Not bad. Get yourselves a human narrator.
@MASTINOMAN
@MASTINOMAN 2 ай бұрын
Hail Humanity.
@rickh.959
@rickh.959 2 ай бұрын
Good story, but mispronounced words and bad captioning, made it poor quality. Please try better.
@raymondbarkoski300
@raymondbarkoski300 2 ай бұрын
Sorry guys I tried but the pronunciation of the word Admiral needs to be fixed
@raymondbarkoski300
@raymondbarkoski300 2 ай бұрын
I am not sure if it is on my end but the volume is very low on this one.
@ronellis9710
@ronellis9710 2 ай бұрын
If you want to expand your viewership get a better A.I.
@michaelpettersson4919
@michaelpettersson4919 2 ай бұрын
Solar storms are a local problem, not an interstellar one. It would however be possible that someone out there posess a Nicoll'Dyson beam weapon. THAT could shoot over interstellar distances but it would take years for a shot to reach it's target. A Nicholl'Dyson beam is what you get if you sourround a star with a Dyson swarm and then lead a beam of solar power out through an opening. A hit by that could indeed hurt a fleet or burn the surface of a planet.
@pedrogudino1133
@pedrogudino1133 2 ай бұрын
Is this shit ai generated?
@vfer187
@vfer187 2 ай бұрын
Decent story
@arpitkumar5116
@arpitkumar5116 2 ай бұрын
its quite good , which ai did you use ??
@derais6162
@derais6162 2 ай бұрын
This was actually well worth the click. This should be how our universe connects. The lessons here are pretty good.
@KitCatTurner
@KitCatTurner 2 ай бұрын
This one is sad and sweet and very much like a Dr. Who episode.
@Mike-nc4kl
@Mike-nc4kl 2 ай бұрын
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@dropshot1967
@dropshot1967 2 ай бұрын
And another channel with AI narration. I know it is possible to run a channel by using human narrators that make far fewer errors in pronunciation, just look at "netnarrator", "starbound HFY" and more recently "HFY girl". This is another hard pass for me. The story did not fall into the trap of the typical use of words like indomitable. It does however do the usual repetitions of making the same point several times albeit in different words.
@colleanwilson4394
@colleanwilson4394 2 ай бұрын
Our world would fail. America just proved this. Nov 5, 2024.
@marinesgt8048
@marinesgt8048 2 ай бұрын
Not a bad story 👍👍
@normanddesmarais4375
@normanddesmarais4375 2 ай бұрын
I feel a bit of truth in this story!
@pax1sw
@pax1sw 2 ай бұрын
Excellent! 👍😁
@marinesgt8048
@marinesgt8048 2 ай бұрын
Well read story 👍👍
@patmcbride9853
@patmcbride9853 2 ай бұрын
*Xenobiologists
@marinesgt8048
@marinesgt8048 2 ай бұрын
Not a bad story. Well read. 👍👍
@LorenStClair-w5t
@LorenStClair-w5t 2 ай бұрын
LUV
@Burnsiealex
@Burnsiealex 2 ай бұрын
I do believe this is all AI generated. There’s many channels with the same voice, script, and repetition.
@brianmeadows1137
@brianmeadows1137 2 ай бұрын
Still not a bad story.
@noppornwongrassamee8941
@noppornwongrassamee8941 2 ай бұрын
Argh. Too much repetition of already established info makes this story drag on far too long.
@brianmeadows1137
@brianmeadows1137 2 ай бұрын
A.I.s tend to do that. Wouldn't be a bad story if it was shorter.
@mjjuntunen
@mjjuntunen 2 ай бұрын
turn up the volume
@McKavian
@McKavian 2 ай бұрын
Good story, good message. It was nice to see the bullies change into something more useful. Too much repetition and too much filler. It was enough to distract me from the story, but not so bad as I wanted to quit listening I'd say that this was a 5.5 - 6 out of 10.
@tomdowling638
@tomdowling638 2 ай бұрын
A mother earth religious story, not worth listening to.
@NP-fz8co
@NP-fz8co 2 ай бұрын
This is good!
@geoff2504
@geoff2504 3 ай бұрын
A story about human spirit. Boring AF. I’m out.
@tauIrrydah
@tauIrrydah 3 ай бұрын
God I hate these AI generated self-sucking inferiority complex humano-supremacist trash stories that I have to play whack-a-mole to keep out of my feed.
@Mike-nc4kl
@Mike-nc4kl 3 ай бұрын
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@addertooth1
@addertooth1 3 ай бұрын
The story line could have been enhanced by going through the wreckage of the enemy fleet, borrowing the technology. Also, recovering the enemy databases, and getting hints of what had happened to the Human race so long ago. Those hints could set the tone for the next segment of the story. Possible shift in the story line: (make better use of the fact the Nexus ships were AI, and looking for a "trigger event" to be activated. The humans were being hunted and dove into an asteroid field for cover, they were being relentlessly pursued (they did not previously detect the faint energy signal, they are simply trying to hide). They were taking fire, shields are failing.... The instruments sensed a powerful scan aboard the fleeing craft. Humans are perplexed if another group is hunting them. The Nexus ships are seen blasting their way out of the asteroid field, racing towards the one beleaguered human ship. The dark sleek Nexus ships are targeting and destroying the pursuers as they enter range with the Human ship. One Nexus ship places itself between the attackers and the last human ship. The rest of the nexus fleet starts stalking down each of the enemy ships, and showing no quarter.
@RusselLee
@RusselLee 3 ай бұрын
Goofiest story I have heard in a long time.