It's a nice rendition of the Chaplet, except after the 5 decades should come three repetitions of "Holy God, Holy Mighty One, Holy Immortal One, Have Mercy on us and on the whole world"; and then the closing prayer; "Eternal God, in Whom Mercy is endless and the treasury of Compassion inexhaustible, look kindly upon us and increase Your Mercy in us, that in difficult moments we might not despair nor become despondent, but with great confidence submit ourselves to Your Holy Will, which is Love and Mercy itself, Amen".

I’m happy with the English one.

Loving Jesus please come into our homes and hearts we want to feel close to you Have Mercy On Us All We Love you Amen