The changing between tenses sounds frustrating and I'm sorry, but I don't have any advice... I don't use Pro Writing Aid or Grammarly as I don't use either one. I have used Hemingway App a few times. There's a free and paid version, but what I like most about it is that it tells me what reading level my writing is at as well as a few other things including sentence length and cadence, passive words, etc. I don't always change what it hints at, but the free version is helpful to my needs.
@aprilkayauthor18 күн бұрын
The tense thing sounds so frustrating, I’m sorry you have to wrestle with your brain like that. I wish I had a suggestion, but Grammarly is one of the only ones I know. I do like the Hemingway app for the way it measures sentence length/strength but I’m not certain how good it is in general-I’ve only used it a few times. I haven’t even started thinking of goals for this year ugh, but I’m inspired seeing how well-thought out yours are!
@Dolores_Madil16 күн бұрын
Thank you I think I will go back to grammarly I stopped paying for it a bit ago. I heard Hemingway was very basic which is why I haven't used it. I'm sure you will think of great goals just remember if you need to goals can be flexible. Hey for the last couple of years I have had to rearrange my goals mid way through the year. I believe in you and your a great writer.
@esthermarieandujar25 күн бұрын
As someone who switches tenses like it's my job LOL, I find that if you write in past tense Grammarly is decent since it already changes everything to past tense. ProWritingAid tends to pick where there is a lot of tense changes in a page but is not perfect by any means. For tenses I rely on a human copy line editor. Spell and grammar checkers still miss a lot of the nuances needed in Fiction. I still use them to save my editor's eyes and when Im in a super tight deadline.
@Dolores_Madil23 күн бұрын
Thank you for the more detailed recommendations this was really helpful.
@esthermarieandujarАй бұрын
wow, project elf... I remember that one. Are you reading it before deciding what to do with it? How fast you want to put the story out? Like in the next couple of years or in like five years?
@Dolores_MadilАй бұрын
I'm glad someone remembers Project Elf as I don't talk about it too much. I do need to read it before I do anything with it especially because I know it is rough in the middle if I remember correctly. I'm not sure when I want to put it out honestly I just know I want to share it with the world at some point. Right now my main goal is to put out the Project Blasphemy Universe books.
@esthermarieandujarАй бұрын
There is an old articule from the History channel about a possible pagan ritual that could be the origin to Valentine's Day. Here is the link: www.history.com/topics/ancient-rome/lupercalia I would also look into fertility rituals, soulmate rituals, things like that. Love that you are building a massive world!!
@Dolores_MadilАй бұрын
Thank you for the information. Also the suggestions I'll look into them. I also love that a "throw away" project turned into a wonderful experience and happy I could keep building from it.
@esthermarieandujar2 ай бұрын
I love this video!! Im a fan of getting the vibes and the feels while working on it and after.
@Dolores_Madil2 ай бұрын
Thank you. I was worried people would think I was silly with how much I love this project.
@esthermarieandujar2 ай бұрын
@ never!!! We need to see more writers excited and in love with their work.
@aprilkayauthor4 ай бұрын
I’m sad that I won’t have NaNo anymore, but at the same time, it’d started to lose its charm for me in the last few years anyway. But like you, it was the community of it all that I really enjoyed. I’m glad to see so many people pitching new challenge ideas and new ways to participate in something similar. Sending good, productive vibes so you can get ish done! I have faith in you~ 💖
@Dolores_Madil3 ай бұрын
Are you doing anything special for the writing season or just your normal? Also thank you for the vibes I appreciate it.
@aprilkayauthor3 ай бұрын
@@Dolores_Madil Noooo unfortunately not. I’m kind of struggling with inspiration at the moment, I haven’t really been writing at all since my last vlog went up. 🙃 It’s embarrassing lmao.
@Dolores_Madil3 ай бұрын
You don't have to be embarrassed everyone has their own pace. Which is something I too have to remind myself sometimes.
@SDHegyes4 ай бұрын
Just found and subbed to your channel because of the Creators on Main. I just knew about the Fall in Your Creativity event. Didn't know about the spring and summer one. That's cool! I can't wait! I'm doing the fall event, the 100KQ4 from Kate's channel, and the Rough Draft challenge from Sarra Cannon's Heart Breathing's channel. Good luck!
@Dolores_Madil4 ай бұрын
That is a lot of events I hope they all work out for you and thank you for the sub. Good luck with your work. 🖖🏾
@esthermarieandujar4 ай бұрын
Looking forward to see your updates as you finish the two projects under the Blasphemy Universe! Thank you for mentioning Creators on Main challenge! I'll check out my October schedule to see when I can hop in again on a stream with you!
@Dolores_Madil4 ай бұрын
Thank you I hope I am able to finish before the year is up. Always willing to mention friends events. For sure let me know/I'll mention times for any extras for if you are able too. Lets get all the words for the rest of the year.
@AuthorJCCarpenter4 ай бұрын
Hey Dolores! Yay you're doing the 100K challenge that Kate's doing! Did you also hear about Sarra Cannon's challenge on Heart Breathings? You already know I'm doing Kate's challenge. Didn't know anything about the other challenge so that would have been nice but hey, I have one challenge I'm doing for sure. Thinking about Sarra's challenge too. I'm sure you're going to do fantastic in both challenges. Great video! Take care!
@Dolores_Madil4 ай бұрын
I did hear about Sarra Cannon's challenge I just didn't look into it. We can keep each other up to date in the dms or my shorts of how we are doing with Kate's. Good luck to us.
@aprilkayauthor5 ай бұрын
That purple really looks dope on you. I wish I had the patience for getting my hair colored, but I can barely sit still enough for a trim lmao. I’m so sorry to hear about all the issues surrounding your dad’s health, I hope things are better now. Small town romance as a colony in space sounds like everything I’ve been looking for tbh. I’m also sorry to see you were feeling so burnt out and uncertain of things, it’s the worst part of the whole writing thing. But I admire your tenacity and you always inspire me! 💖
@Dolores_Madil5 ай бұрын
Thanks I can't wait for my sisters wedding to be over so I can do more color. Nice to know others like the idea of the small town colony idea and it's not just me. Taking the time to work on all the erotica stuff has been much needed and I have some more solid ideas now for trad pub but I am going to stay in the erotica indie world for now.
@AuthorJCCarpenter5 ай бұрын
🖖🏾🖖🏾
@Dolores_Madil5 ай бұрын
Hope you enjoyed the chaos and spiral I went on.
@aprilkayauthor6 ай бұрын
I legit lol’d when you were scrolling through covers and there was that one particularly busty one and you said, “oh my god.” 😂 Cause I had the same reaction, like damn, in broad daylight?? Ream seems really interesting both in the writing sense and reading sense, and I’m so intrigued by all the stories I saw in passing. And I’m excited for your page! I think I finally have to check it out when I can find the time. Thanks so much for sharing all of this, I really appreciate seeing it from your pov. I also love the names you gave your tiers!
@Dolores_Madil6 ай бұрын
I'm glad that you enjoyed it and that it was helpful. Also I'm glad you liked the names I didn't want supper sexy ones like other peoples and I don't have an established audience where the name are biased off them so this was my next best thought.
@aprilkayauthor6 ай бұрын
My eyes are terrible and also I watch on my phone mostly, but I’m just noticing the purple in your hair?? I love it! Also I never finished reading OR watching American Gods because I’m terrible, but apart from Ian McShane being amazing as Mr. Wednesday, my thirst for Pablo Schreiber’s Mad Sweeney is enough to power the sun so I will always remember the show fondly, even not having finished lmao.
@Dolores_Madil6 ай бұрын
Yea I have been dyeing it since last year but just the underside so it's not always so noticeable. Well it's definitely on my list to see eventually.
@esthermarieandujar6 ай бұрын
Titles are so stressful. I love that your Good Omens obsession gave birth to this story! And yeah the word diaspora is hard to say.
@Dolores_Madil6 ай бұрын
Yes and now this world has just expanded in my mind and I have two more story ideas for this universe. Thanks for the validation on my struggle to say words.
@aprilkayauthor7 ай бұрын
I so agree about titles. I struggle with them so much because they need to be PERFECT. This idea sounds so interesting and unique! Honestly, it already gives me Katee Robert vibes--and I mean that as the highest form of compliment, because despite me being behind on her books, I am a ride-or-die for her!
@Dolores_Madil6 ай бұрын
Omg I can't believe you compared it to the queen herself. Aahhhh! Well I can only hope it can be like a quarter as good because I too love what I have read from her. Also in general I'm glad you think the idea sounds good. 😊
@aprilkayauthor7 ай бұрын
That’s crazy that the first ten chapters on Vella are free wtf?? That’s such a blow to authors and doesn’t make any sense. I am intrigued by Ream, so I’m hoping you have a good experience with it, and I’d be interested to hear about it of course! 💖
@Dolores_Madil7 ай бұрын
I definitely plan to check in and talk about it after I have published a little. Hopefully, I will have a video out in August introducing it and my page too. As I will be republishing Hungers' Desire there.
@readwithdrb11 ай бұрын
What a great gift from your secret Santa! May it inspire you to continue writing! <3
@RKStumblingbear11 ай бұрын
The artwork is stunning!
@cassie_hart11 ай бұрын
What a cool gift!
@HeatherSalterPurvesauthor11 ай бұрын
you are a lovely person who also makes me feel welcome in chats. the journal is such a beautiful gift.
@Dolores_Madil11 ай бұрын
Oh thank you. You are too.
@Running2Write11 ай бұрын
Beautiful virtual journal. Have fun writing and planning in 2024.
@StephanieWhitson11 ай бұрын
That’s an awesome gift! So pretty!
@RitaSlanina11 ай бұрын
Wow! Gorgeous journal! Hey there Mr. February 😅 rowr!!!
@MargaretPinard11 ай бұрын
Not sure if it's just me, but the sound was very wonky here which made it hard to listen :/
@MargaretPinard11 ай бұрын
Santa's Elves!🧝🏼♀🧝🏽♂
@SDHuston11 ай бұрын
Oh I love how much Deidre did to make this gift special for you! ooo, that's gorgeous!!!! I love this journal. I like February's elf.
@Dolores_Madil11 ай бұрын
Yeah it was so wonderful and so detailed.
@hananyaleclercq11 ай бұрын
Haha you are okay Dolores, my name is just not that easy lol I love this eGift, that's really pretty. Have you been using it a lot?
@Dolores_Madil11 ай бұрын
No not yet because I want to save it for when I am working on it. I'm currently writing something new.
@deidrewritesromance11 ай бұрын
😂 Yay, I'm happy you like it and that it's sparking new ideas for you lol. Funny enough, I didn't ask our friends about the theme but more about your interests, what you would enjoy and if the gift is something you'd like. I grabed the idea from your website and fell in love with the story concept as I went through your vlogs. Yes it is totally ok to use in 2024 or 2044 😂. That was Important as it was project specific so you can use it on the months you are working in that world. 😊
@Dolores_Madil11 ай бұрын
Ah well I'm glad I had put that stuff on the website but I definitely need to update it. Also yes again I loved it and how customize it is.
@EmmaBennetAuthor Жыл бұрын
Enjoy the rest of the month!
@aprilkayauthor Жыл бұрын
I’m excited for this!! And I love Cataya’s name, it’s so pretty! But yeah this sounds so interesting!
@Dolores_Madil Жыл бұрын
Thanks I am excited to see what others say about it too.
@aprilkayauthor Жыл бұрын
I’m so sorry about the car problems you were having-with multiple different cars at that! That’s awful. And the low blood sugar after that too ugh. 😣 Congrats on getting the work done even with the universe throwing this crap at you! I’m a little behind so I’m still catching up, but I can’t wait to follow along and see you make all this happen! 💖
@Dolores_Madil Жыл бұрын
Thank you I was so determined and glad I didn't let myself make up excuses to stop and lose the momentum.
@esthermarieandujar Жыл бұрын
I’m so excited for you!!!! Hunger’s Desire sounds awesome and so juicy!
@Dolores_Madil Жыл бұрын
Oh yes I defiantly start with a bang.
@shellycole93 Жыл бұрын
😥 *Promo SM*
@aprilkayauthor Жыл бұрын
It would be so cool to go to a book fest with you one day! New bucket list item. Even better if we end up together on a panel somewhere in the future! I’m so excited for you getting your books signed ahhhh. This just seems so fun, and the panels all seemed so rich and interesting and just not stuff I even think about as a sheltered white girl lol. But yeah! Looks like an awesome time!
@Dolores_Madil Жыл бұрын
Yes for sure I would love to hang out and walk around with you. Also to attend panels so cool. Though yes if we could be on the same panel would be a dream. Do you have a book festival around you? Yeah lately there has been more good conversation about minority authors and experiences and especially Latine groups which I think ate glossed over a lot.
@aprilkayauthor Жыл бұрын
One day!! And I’ve seen a few that pop up in Baltimore and Washington, DC, but somehow I always miss them until I hear about them like a day later lol. But that’s a good reminder, now I’m going to research because I need some book fun in my life. And I totally agree! It’s shameful to admit that I’m very sheltered and sometimes I just don’t even consider things like that. I’m trying to be better, but unfortunately it’s so ingrained in a lot of us when we’re growing up, because my parents are white as hell and their parents were white as hell lol. It makes for a very ignorant upbringing, so I’m excited to see and learn more!
@Dolores_Madil Жыл бұрын
@@aprilkayauthor that's understandable but you being willing to learn makes up for it. I also had a sheltered upbringing so somethings I never experienced because my family has been in America for a few generations now. When it comes to the festivals and stuff my biggest recommend is follow them on Instagram and if they have a newsletter sign up so you can keep track of dates. Last year I almost forgot if it wasn't for Instagram.
@aprilkayauthor Жыл бұрын
Your uncle is so cool, I would love to attend a workshop of his one day. The whole fest looks like it was cool! And omg I legit lol’d when you were talking about A Lot Like Adios, but now I’m intrigued because I’m right there with you about spice!
@Dolores_Madil Жыл бұрын
Yeah he was super excited because it was his first one and he had another one planed the following month. Yes I still have to get the video done for that but I'm super behind on book videos. Though my comments are on the Kofi post for members but in summarize the book was good and spicy 🥵
@aprilkayauthor Жыл бұрын
AHH that’s so cool, I’m so happy for him, I can only imagine how exciting it must feel. I have such a big TBR but I’m definitely gonna add those two to it, because I always need more romance ugh.
@EmmaBennetAuthor Жыл бұрын
Happy to have found your channel. I hope you're having an awesome year. I'm a romance author from Wales and I've been on KZbin for nearly a year now. Subscribed.x
@Dolores_Madil Жыл бұрын
Thank you and so far going good. Hope you year is going ok too. I'll check you out.
@RKStumblingbear2 жыл бұрын
I actually enjoy editing much more than creating. But as a pantser it can take a lot of energy to create sometimes. I have found for videos that I need to have a set day for filming or nothing will be filmed. Also, I am looking forward to talking with you more on the WWW stream!
@Dolores_Madil2 жыл бұрын
I keep wanting to do that for editing so I can get videos edited but I'll always break it after a while or even after just one week. Also looking forward to streaming with you.
@esthermarieandujar2 жыл бұрын
I'm glad this time reaffirmed your love for streaming. I hope you can get picked as a host!
@Dolores_Madil2 жыл бұрын
Thank you me too. I signed up every time but I tend to have more availability during October's and that's when I tend to get picked if I do.
@esthermarieandujar2 жыл бұрын
Will I be able to caught up on my subscription box? Don’t think so but I’ll try. Man, it has been a while since you vlog this. I remembered you saying you were multitasking/multiwatching things. I’ll add more comments while I keep watching so sorry for the little spam your gonna get.
@Dolores_Madil2 жыл бұрын
Hey that's fine watch when you can that's all we all can do. Also I'm fine with the spam. 😊
@esthermarieandujar2 жыл бұрын
This was so much fun to watch!! So cool your uncle publish a book about your family and their ties to the Tucson area. I'm happy slowly but surely festivals and conferences are starting to pop up.
@Dolores_Madil2 жыл бұрын
Yeah it's a nice book that he worked hard on. Yeah festivals have fully come back here
@aprilkayauthor2 жыл бұрын
Ugh it’s hard to find stuff like this near me, but it looks so fun. And I def would’ve liked to attend that Size Matters panel, but OF COURSE someone had to get all preachy about “health.” 🙄 Concern trolls, who don’t bat an eye when a size 2 woman drinks and smokes, but a size 20 woman merely existing? “It’s just a health concern!” Let me not get into that. 😂