Dayton Poetry Slam

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@pgjpoems Ай бұрын

👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿

@dancollins6171 Ай бұрын

Cringe. 😬

@doglog5748 Ай бұрын

The production is top notch.

@johnlucaiii9495 Ай бұрын

Where is she ?????

@badal38257 Ай бұрын

Awful from the camera to the delivery

@PeterPups0815 Ай бұрын

Great camwork!

@fionag5159 Ай бұрын

🙌🏻

@barbanel300 Ай бұрын

She is "famous", let her change everything she wants 😂😂😂 You are shameless

@crashmancory Ай бұрын

Ok the cream sauce got me

@benjamingardner3314 Ай бұрын

Hey there! Well done, sounds like you really meant what you read and the theme of blue throughout the poem was lovely. For reading out loud, I'd like to make a few suggestions: first, slow down. I know there's a rhythm to it, but the rhythm can be expressed in a slower tempo. I'd recommend finding a metronome or music that you can time yourself against. I'm asking you to slow down bc it is hard for me to make out some of your schemes when you run words together, and I think they're worth hearing. Second, talk your poem out conversationally and record it. What ideas would be important if it didn't have to rhyme? How much can you convince your audience that you do have this hope? There is an element of stage performance with slam poetry. Watch videos of actors reading letters or books excerpts. Finally, if you want to really evolve your delivery, memorize the poem. It will get your eyes up and mouth on the mic. You can play with it more when you know what's coming. Set ups can have punchlines in a sense, funny/dramatic/sad/ironic. You've written your words, but finding your true voice will take time. Good luck to you, I hope you continue doing this.

@scrumptious_human Ай бұрын

I talk too much 🤯

@DaytonSlam Ай бұрын

No you don't! Not at all! I do miss hearing your voice, though!

@scrumptious_human Ай бұрын

@@DaytonSlam I’ll try to return soon!

@Crimebytes 2 ай бұрын

Great job!! I like your vest too:)

@marumicore 3 ай бұрын

still one of my favorite poems and i cant wait for the day the world know it. Sanaa, if you see this, I hope you still writing bangers off wherever you went!! stivers still loves you !!💝

@scrumptious_human 3 ай бұрын

GRAAH STOP RAMBLING AND READ THE POEM (this is me)

@gentryheflin 3 ай бұрын

Gentry Heflin for Poet Lauret 2024

@brynsmith4426 3 ай бұрын

it was iight

@eddthewordsmith 3 ай бұрын

I adore this piece and the presentation. Excellent!

@Jay-n2x 4 ай бұрын

I can't believe this doesn't have any comments, Edd, you are true wordsmith. I am doing spoken word with my grade 9s and I showed them this video. Their faces when you said the line about Oscar the Grouch... Your poem is impactful.

@eddthewordsmith 3 ай бұрын

Oh my! Thanks so much! Wow

@OSHINISSPICY 4 ай бұрын

Ohiooo

@educocult 4 ай бұрын

A really good poem that captivated the room and those who watch this youtube! Bravo Ayesha!

@brandonwinston 4 ай бұрын

WOW!

@scrumptious_human 5 ай бұрын

Das my frend!!!

@markmiller2859 5 ай бұрын

'Promo SM' 😇

@Grow_YouTube_Views_93 5 ай бұрын

Timestamps for the best moments, please!

@shirleyK6175 7 ай бұрын

👍🏻❤️

@SeanHolzberger 7 ай бұрын

I will stand for you, comment for you, Like for you-even as the first, more is yet to come. Blessed be L,d

@Apatheia 8 ай бұрын

Love it, Byron! Spoke to me on a spiritual level. The rhymes, the phrasing, the analogies and habits. Thank you for sharing this! It made me able to look forward today.

@salt7965 8 ай бұрын

Amazing! She did really well and spoke so passionately. She's very gorgeous aswell! Bravo!

@SongwriterHeartOfThePen 8 ай бұрын

Good poem

@epplonia 8 ай бұрын

Are yall still doing shows through the winter? I can never find any info on the website, wanted to come out again :)

@DaytonSlam 8 ай бұрын

Yes, we are! The first and third Sunday of every month. Next show is 1 7 24. Keep an eye on the Facebook page, it tends to be updated more than the website