The start of the story is awesome, middle mediocre, the end well i need something on you tube. The underlying plot could have been an epic book if you actually cared.

How... schitzo.

Good story, bit the narrators C.O.P.D. Reins it.

Tell me more.......m

I like the story , very good read

They always slam fist on the console lol

Liked the story. I just wish it did not rushed. Am looking forward for more.

I liked the story

Just crap after 20 mins

Grog Aliens won't Enjoy the Hoomin response as previous enemy cry for help against Invasion by the common Enemy New bent on conquests of non-Grog words.

I have had to bail on several attempts to enjoy this channel. Some stories have incoherent structure that jump around or skips key transitions along with excessive repetition.

Granted the pronunciation needs some work on certain words. However, the overall cadence is well done. Enjoyed the story.

I liked this story

Old Hoomin Space Mechanic Adopts the alien boy Hunted by the Current corrupt Regime for Dissenting against corruption and not accepting losing Fwreedons by those in Political Power

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I like the stores . They really are good

Drako, with a massive chest wound, was caught in the self-destruct explosion of the base. There is no way he survived that. Please check your continuity before publishing.

I liked the story.

To mean people died and come back alive

hello there storytelling I have listened to your story it is a very good I liked it man thank you very much...

Why is every species making a planet/star system destroying weapon?!?

Never tell aliens what our resources are. Stupid is as stupid does, I guess.

40k vibes

The repetitive use of certain dialogue became a distraction to the story. I found a lot of similarities oin the plot line to 'Halo'! Unfortunately didn't wait to hear the conclusion. 👎👎👎

Nice 👍

Great story with all truths. Thank you.

Not well structured. Keep getting repeats of the same event. Almost a chaotic introduction of new characters. The story needs better continuity.

I liked the story! but seriously I did enjoy it!

I like the story

Yep AI made, a carrier going into a battle?? Carrier's stay back keeping distance so fghters/bombers can land/re arm not giving up offensive or defensive strengths.

It's an AI formulated story, what do you expect.

Yeh and I'm santa clause

Just AI generated fluff, cheap way to try and make money via KZbin. Really?? Activate our ancient fleet?? In what reality would us humans stop using a military fleet?? We ain't peaceful, nice or passive. We have been fighting, invading conquering all our existence. Doubt that will change going to the stars.

This story jumped all over the place, couldn't follow it.

Problem with story is Alex was killed and suddenly he was alive and trying to infiltrate the command post? This is not consistent, maybe the initial death of Alex should be replaced with a different character.

Stop repeating yourself through the whole story Rinse and repeat Good story just stop repeating everything 3-4 times or more throughout the story

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Brooks running shoes ad...any relation to the secret Space city and urgent transmissions?

To much repeating And also like 3-4 different ways a story could be told The story itself was great but the way you did it Wrong Take one of the ways your telling the story and stick with it please

I do like the story

I like this story. Let's have a part 2..

I liked the story very much. Thank you. Awesome

Fantastic!

Its always energy blasts tore thriugh there sheilds were torn like tissue paper.

I like these stories but they are one note and predictable but fun and the age old advice of show not tell has been tossed out the door.

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What is a face etched with determination??

Thanks for story!

Neptunian, possessed and so on if this is the conversation of 2 aliens then its very flawed.. these words are Terran in nature.. cant imagine naming themselves after a human mythical god or would care for the concept of spiritual possession

We will put their names too the test...