Learning English with College LaSalle

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@doggovibes628 6 күн бұрын

Thank you for this, it really helped :)

@jerrysimpson4603 6 күн бұрын

"I say a comma is NOT needed after the parentheses (nor later after the word 'adding')" he said, adding "because the quotation marks already indicate the dialog is separate from the dialog tag."

@Babylon2060 8 күн бұрын

Song title, please, and thank you. 😊

@Artisticgammers-w1k 18 күн бұрын

Good

@Angelperez-fh5fu 24 күн бұрын

Thank you bro 🙏

@Paddyisbroke 28 күн бұрын

Yohohohooooooo

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 23 күн бұрын

Yoho-de-ho!

@chandravathishashi4312 Ай бұрын

Can say in Hindi

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 23 күн бұрын

You can indeed.

@RizwanKhizar-le1uj 2 ай бұрын

Thank you so much 👌👌👌👌👌😊😊😊i am confused some words thank you to clear my doubts

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 23 күн бұрын

You are most welcome.

@cozmobuzz360 3 ай бұрын

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 23 күн бұрын

Hey there.

@ArtemHahauz-nm7bk 4 ай бұрын

You managed to clarify all the basic information in one short video; thank you so much! I highly appreciate this marvelous video. I wish I had watched it before trying to write incorrectly-punctuated dialogues! Best regards from Ukraine!

@Evie_3vi3 5 ай бұрын

Honestly, I don’t think I’ve ever actually been taught all the rules of punctuation with dialogue. I’m writing a narrative essay rn, this was super helpful. Thanks!

@skybloxybacon 5 ай бұрын

My teacher forced me to watch this even though I already knew it.But u explain better than my teacher 😂

@Nevets_Gnahz 6 ай бұрын

Thx for helping even though i was forced to do this

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 6 ай бұрын

Sorry to hear you were forced into it. I appreciate it :)

@小鱼子-m7r 6 ай бұрын

i know its been 4 years but big thanks!

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 6 ай бұрын

My pleasure.

@nadiahelal80 6 ай бұрын

So many great ideas Nick; my favourite is the creative project. Narrative writing is also great as it's based on one's personal experience.

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 6 ай бұрын

Thanks Nadia! Lots of the information was provided for me by the excellent pedagogy team at LaSalle :)

@yasserwagih 7 ай бұрын

Bad

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 7 ай бұрын

K. Will check myself.

@mazzyfriebel1086 7 ай бұрын

Thanks for helping, this will help me with my short story assignment in school!

@vanellopevonschweetz-y3h 8 ай бұрын

My teacher force me to watch this even thought i know how to do it.

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 8 ай бұрын

I'm sorry to hear that lol!

@vighneshgupta7993 4 ай бұрын

Though❌. Thought✅😂

@KmKm-fj3el 4 ай бұрын

❤

@premkapila-pv5xc 10 ай бұрын

Thanks for helping

@FPChris 10 ай бұрын

Helpful. Thanks. The quotes are missing in your last sentence…dogs!”

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 8 ай бұрын

Thanks for spotting that!

@damarysalgado7565 10 ай бұрын

@MagnoliaEBoothe_ 11 ай бұрын

Thanks🎉

@Me_encanta_la_ligma Жыл бұрын

Helped me better than my English teacher

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 8 ай бұрын

Woah!

@Doomslayer4ever Жыл бұрын

thank you you explain it better than my teachers!!!

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 8 ай бұрын

:O <3

@roopafas2287 Жыл бұрын

Thanks bro, you helped a lot 👍

@maysworlld Жыл бұрын

This really helped me. Thanks for sharing.

@HRRecords-wv9xg Жыл бұрын

really helpfull but you have to add a comma in between the quotation marks

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 8 ай бұрын

Thanks! Where did I miss the comma?

@hugoagudelo4386 Жыл бұрын

It´s been a helpful video: plain and well conducted. Thank you.

@Space_Writer Жыл бұрын

It's so frustrating because the dialogue is so easy to hear in my mind, but when I put it in written form I have trouble keeping the format. This is especially when I have long stretches of dialogue between characters. All the "he said", "she said", "he replied", and "she muttered" starts to feel laborsome.

@robertanderson6929 Жыл бұрын

You don't need all of the "she said", "he replied." Your goal is to convey the conversation clearly. If you can do so with out the "she said", "he replied" then do so. Also, use the speaker's identity to expand the action and to paint a better picture for your audience. Example: Walking into the room with the bell still ringing down the hall, Janey's teacher said, "Attention class! Please settle down and open your books to chapter 4." Janey did as instructed as the teacher continued, "Four-score and seven years ago, our forefathers brought fourth on this continent a new nation. Can anyone tell me, what is meant by _four-score?"_ Janey's hand went up before she remembered that she was supposed to be keeping a low profile this semester. "Yes, Janey?" "Ummm, a 'score' is twenty years. So, 'four-score' would be 80 years." "That's correct." The teacher was looking directly at Janey now. "And can you tell us to what Lincoln was referring as happening eighty-seven years prior to his speech?" Janey's face began to flush as the scrutiny of her entire class began to turn slowly upon her, "Ahh, that would be the signing of the Declaration of Independence in 1776?" "Are you sure?" "Yes. Eighty-seven years prior to 1863 would be 1776." "Very good," the teacher replied while writing the word _score_ and the number _20_ on the board, "Now does anyone know where we get the term 'score' to represent 20 years?" Note: As long as when you read the dialogue back it is clear who is speaking the you don't necessarily need the identifier. And often you can use the identifier to express action like "walking into the room" and "writing the word ... on the board." So, think about your characters and what they are doing while speaking. It is almost NEVER the case that a character sits without motion speaking for long periods of time. They move, they figgit, they take a deep breath before replying. Here is another example just because I'm feeling particularly loquacious. Alice asked, "What time is it?" Steve replied, "Four o'clock. Why?" "I'm late for my meeting," Alice answered. "Well you better get a move on," Steve smirked. Now try this instead: Alice glanced at her watch which gave no sign of movement and then at Steve before asking, "What time is it?" Lifting his head from the spreadsheets he was examining, Steve replied, "Four o'clock. Why?" Already moving toward the door, she said over her shoulder, "I'm late for my meeting." "Well you better get a move on then." The smirk on Steve's face went unnoticed by Alice as she was already heading out the door in a rush.

@robertanderson6929 Жыл бұрын

BTW, writing is not easy but like many things it will improve with practice. And that practice often means rewriting a paragraph or a scene many, many times. For example, I have a terrible habit of using a passive-voice. I did so in my last example. Were I to rewrite that last line I would change it to be, "Alice failed to notice the smirk on Steve's face as she was already heading out the door in a rush." I don't know why I adopted the bad habit of writing in a passive-voice but I still do it all the time and it is one of the things I have to look for as I review and edit my writing.

@aster_infinitum Жыл бұрын

@@robertanderson6929his is really helpful thank you

@skybloxybacon 5 ай бұрын

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@aster_infinitum 5 ай бұрын

@@skybloxybacon lol

@nazmulislamsumon9259 Жыл бұрын

Great vedio to understand easily, Thanks a lot.

@Furqan-p9u Жыл бұрын

اني عندي برزنتيشن عن موضوع جوانب اللغة الانكليزية ومن ضمنها imperative بس مكتوب use in the speech directed at Yonge children learn their native language سؤالي هو أستطيع استخدم عرضك كشرح من ضمن برزنتيشن مالتي

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 7 ай бұрын

Yes of course :)

@Hamza_Joue Жыл бұрын

what if it's unspoken rizz...

@learningenglishwithcollege4765 8 ай бұрын

Possible.

@manuellanza6354 Жыл бұрын

Thank you

@mkgamer2463 Жыл бұрын

Thanks for the help

@egidijusinokaitis8664 Жыл бұрын

Loved the explanation, great vid

@kittenlou3742 Жыл бұрын

Thank you :)

@clashwitpandee6837 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much I really appreciate this video!

@griffin1182 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you, I initially came for the indentation part, but learned a lot from the understanding of why we format it the way we do on the first few parts.

@Evie_3vi3 5 ай бұрын

Yea same!