The setting had a charming urban familiarity to it, which was nice. The atmosphere was eerie without being overwhelminly so. Music and sound were phenomenal, and did a great job of building up tension and dread. Finally, the actor did a great job of expressing a growing sense of unease without any dialogue! My only two critiques here would be the following: The climax leaves much to be desired. Leaving some things unanswered is fine, but I think the viewer is left too much in the dark here. What, if anything, was going on? Finally, I found myself with a touch of motion sickness throughout due to the camerawork. Might not be an issue for everyone though!

I thought this was well done! However, the constant camera wobbling/ swinging triggered my motion sickness, so took away from things a bit. So that would be my only critique.

the fucking camera work made me nauseous... what a wast of time

how come he doesnt have any lights on thats what i dont get in these short horror flms no one hardly ever turn on any bright lights

No clue. What a failure.

This was so boring I couldn't even finish the full 7 minutes.

Too much noise and nothing happens, can't see what's on his phone because he moves so quickly, not impressed.

How dare you use LIGHT MODE? This is a real horror!! 😂😂😂😂

Terrific sound and music,easily adding to the tension.more please.🎃🎄♥️🎭

Watch these horror films on my mobile phone 👻🤔🙄📱®️😜👍❤️

Very scary now

Can’t a man work in peace?! But on a serious note… What did I just watch? A big climax of sounds? Just to end with a black screen? I legit thought my phone had shit itself for a brief moment🧐🤨

Light flickering and dark all the time weather day and night or ominous music isn't this represent horror movies

These Disturbances will make you an even Stud for the Scary Night shifts .. Fire Fighting Drills

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Smoking is not cool !

What was the bouncing sound at the end?

From the comments I’m gathering this was more about the soundtrack than the overall plot or story. If it wasn’t about the sound and music could someone explain to me what this was really about?

Is there going to be a Part 2? Without it, I just watched a skillful buildup to....nothing. Sound and camera work are excellent though.

That guy just isn't afraid of anything lol.

Really good scary sound! Good work! Bravo 👏🏼

For a sec I thought Robert Pattinson 😅

really sorry to say but for me it has been very disappointing. 1) it doesn't really happen anything 2) it's impossibile to understand what is going on. A man smokes a cigarette, comes back home and start acting like he is in fear...but for what? 3) It's too long for what it is. I understand sometime we don't have millions of dollars for location, special effects and make up artist but, if I may give some suggestion... 1) In a short movie be short, be quick. Make people understand with a single shot or 20 seconds. Sometime just the look of the eyes or a gesture can make the difference. 2) The whole short movie in a single room/house is challenging ok but you have to play with fear. Ask yourself what people may be afraid of when left alone in the middle of the night? 3) The use of sounds, shades and frame is very important but have to be clear about what they are. A noise without any clue on what it is, means nothing. Showing a door that suddenly opens could be ok but what if in the shadow behind the door you can spot for a second the shade of someone standing in the dark? 4) Using the computer and self phone could bring the story into everybody's life but instead of using random latin, which is ok for the exorcist but a little far away in this kind of story, maybe could be nicer to use the monitor/screen of the computer (for example) has a reflective surface. For example, the guy is working at the computer and suddenly sees a dark shadow moving in a room far behind him. If I am not bothering you a lot, I want to try to give you an example on what a short story could be, based on your idea. 1) A guy comes back home late after work. It's tired. 2) Switches on the computer, a little chat with some friends. Suddenly on the screen sees the reflexion of something/someone moving behind him. 3) He turns over, sees nothing. Continues to chat. 4) Soon after he notices as a reflexion on the screen that the door in the room behind him slowly opens. 5) This time he turns over quickly and sees a dark hand disappearing behind the door 6) Tries to call a friend, no line. Tries to get out of the house, door locked. Screams, nobody answers. 7) In the last frame you can see him slowly approaching the door holding the phone in one hand (still trying to call someone) and a big knife in the other. 8) The moment he reaches the door, the lights go off, you here him screaming and when the light turn on again he is gone. 9) After a few second of names (director, story etc), you put the last image. His phone is on the carpet still calling and on the screen you can still see as a reflection the dark shadow disappearing somewhere in the dark. Keep trying and good luck!

Throwing cigarette butts on the street sets a rather poor example for the youth of today.

Nice work..that music😲😲

Great job!

It was a good one.. just that it could be little shorter .

Waith is Finn wolfhard a director and writer?

This is pretty darn good specially since this is a 24 hour challenge

It needs to be continued...

I'm hot for the actor😍😍😍

Awesome work. Lets be KZbin Friends.

NICE. ❤👍

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can you upload the part 2 pls

Ending a bit vague, and left me wanting. Just like "Nightcrawler". Other than that, pretty nice work for a 24h time limit 👍

Am I the only one who didn’t understand or catch the ending? Did something happen cuz I didn’t see shit.

Great sound design 🙌

Well, the music gave me goose pimples!

Did anyone else see Robert Pattinson in this actor, or is it just me lolzs..! Great sound design.

Nice short horror film, but what did he see or what happened next?? Anybody knows??

I think the music and sound effects were excellent. So much terror in their tones forces you to imagine what's about to confront him.

You had a hell of a challenge! Why did you only have 24 hours? That seems unrealistically arbitrary. Well, you did better than I could do.

Not that scary, but it was good

You know people dont have to be rude. If you didn't like it fine scroll on or leave constructive criticism. Not it sucked. This is someone's hard work. Be an adult.

Have any of you noticed that when these people hear something in horror films they always have to go investigate??? It wouldn't be me! I'm getting the fuck out!

I love the red glow in the dark keyboard ❤🙌

Excellent film