Practiced deficiency? That's great. Made my day. Going to try to use that

1st

Punctuation???

AI can't write a decent stroy.

you do not need to screw up the story told twice in some cases ( Just runs the story ) Get your shit together !

Earth Children Abducted ! ! ! REACTION ..... Earth Adults...... " We're Going .... Darth Vader On Their ASS'S ! ! ! " THEN....... " KLINGON " On What's Left ! ! !

I thought that this was going to be some kind of wrestling match between aliens and human.

Really a shame the sequence of events was out of order...it disrupts an otherwise decent narrative.

This was never a challenge she has a light saber for God sake they is know way that she could lose

Once again too much repeating.

It's always some attack, then they start to go on about how this will build alliances and how the image of humanity has grown. Horrible stuff!

What a crock. Maybe in 50-100 years from now, but not when we're in the galactic community.

Makes senxe.

When we meet aliens it will bring so much joy to share with each other.

in the future, heart transplants will be business as usual out-patient minor procedures

If the President has no immunity for official acts, then neither does the Supreme Court, nor Congress, or any other elected or appointed official.

Every account of aliens seems to imply the use of very narrow, high energy lasers or something. Lots of precision coring samples of flesh, invisible sutures, the ability to cauterize wounds closed without scarring. Maybe they just weld in a narrow spraw of stem cells and glue? I think that using knives might be beneath them. Maybe vibro blades? I think we should be impressed with the tenacity of the physicians who got us this far and those who practice these incredibly long and difficult surgeries.

I instantly closed this story the instantly upon your AI repeat a line. Will never open this site again.

Repeating

It is obvious that the author of this story is a vegan who wants to convert carnivores into herbivores and omnivores. Unfortunately, a herbivore and omnivore require a more complex digestive system that carnivores are not adapted for. A cat's digestive tract cannot digest plants that have cellulose in their cell walls. To illustrate this, dogs are different from wolves because dogs have a mutation that allows them to digest starch. If wolves eat starchy foods, they won't gain the same nutritional benefits that dogs do and would weaken. Also, chocolate is toxic to dogs so it shows that feeding dogs too much plant food would be bad for them.

Good story 👍 Thank you for this 😊

We need a part 2 of this

Don't know if I should laugh or cry?

Nope I'm gone

Only clicked on this to point out in the thumbnail , there is a man wearing a sports bra. That IS WRONG, I won't watch it.

Does anyone proof read any of these stories? Think not.

Nice little piece of word salad, very pretty but no depth to the story at all like there is an actual reality behind everything. just another story in watercolors that is very pretty but lacks underpinning to have solidity. Who owns the cloaking tech, the story line stutters at the nuclear reactor, very descriptive with no substance to really back up the words.

I like listening to these stories but I'm getting a little bored with portions of the stories being repeated multiple times. Also I'm developing a huge dislike to the monotone AI narration. There's no feeling or suspense. It's like having Marvin the paranoid Android telling the story lol. Other than that I liked it.

My favorite: "the air smelled like sweat and determination" um, what does determination smell like? Chicken?

I swear every man in these stories is Jack, John, or Jake. What's wrong with Walter or Thomas?

Quit saying palpable

Too repetitive I keep saying the same thing over and over again😢

This story is nowhere near finished, so obviously a part two is still to come

another repeating story. Nobody is paying attention

USA culture...

LOL, we drink because we CAN. Their research will be invalid if they go on just a couple of humans.

They lost me when all the aliens had the same strength.

This story is ridiculous. Whoever wrote this story doesn't know anything about plumbing. These are waterpipes, not nuclear reactors!

What happened to Jack and Lyra?

As long as AI doesn't know what a homophone is, I will remain unimpressed.

Bad editing, or no proofreading?

Yes need part 2 please

They don't know what hold the line means. Did the "fighters" understand that they were supposed to kill the enemy? And why were they using melee weapons? What made the fighters soldiers? Was that a condition of fighting?

"Worthy adversary"... and the Aliens needed to land in the same place twice, when confronted with a small resistance, after the first try. Unlogic, unimaginative, moste likely AI generated.

why is one of the guys on the right wearing a bra?

They lost me when they had a female weightlifter on the team…

AI generated stories, please don’t use buzz words like determination so much. And please remove the word palpable entirely.

Really? You should have stuck with rides scaring the crap out of aliens and having fun! I mean seriously, a bulging pipe? A pressure spike on an open pipe? An alien who knows nothing about the waterpark is running around helping save the day?🤔🤨😮‍💨 If you're going to write a serious story then you're going to have to do some serious research to at least make the story sound plausible.😮😊

I’d rather confused and foolish premise. They never explained why the imperial wants to destroy this planets environment and how these echo fighters by stabilizing the environment what that would make. If imperium really wants to destroy the planet that they’re going to destroy even even if you do manage to fix things. Partway through this notice is getting too dumb so I moved on.

#1) how are genetically enhanced aliens allowed to compete? #2) nice trick with the repeating...."how to extend a story 101"