Blah blah blah. First date meet and greet at a coffee shop and sign a lifetime contract? That would be a definite NO!

Ooooo that look...... soul snatcher

Beautiful❤

How about a hot drink, maybe a hot toddy or a cup of soup. Nope, let her shiver. Hopeless..

She now hears from his thoughts hey we did enter a mating contract. Then he feels her thoughts and hears yes dear I will be right there. It like the witnessed verbal contract that people enter into in marriage to have and hold from this day forward. Ps have is the fun part. I like the bond part there is no place she can run and hid from his thoughts of wanting the have part.

Forget that nudity nonsense!

❤ Absolutely Awesome Story ❤

Good Story👍

Very good story about Kalen and Talashi can't wait for part 2 hope it is coming.

On a nudist ship, one would expect that everyone would carry a towel to place on the chair before sitting (for sanitary consideration).

👌

Nice love. To bad their DNA was not compatable. I re-wrote the story in my mind....

Because no one in space ever touches very cold or hot junk and pockets are for thieves.

Funny thing. The idea presented is exactly why men do not like makeup. To us, that is a woman lying about herself. Covering up the imperfections and presenting something not real. No different then clothing.

Interesting story. I enjoyed it...👍🏻👍🏻😁😁😁

Like the story, but can't help wondering if their little community has any real chance of survival. The planet is a war zone. Neither humans nor aliens will like what they represent, that coexistence is an option, not after years of bad blood & suffering loss. They might be naturals for brokering peace, but Valorians need a serious change of heart to consider that appealing, assuming grudges on both sides aren't insurmountable. Like happy endings, but don't see one on the horizon, unless the invasion is defeated outright. Hybrid offspring could make for an interesting angle, though. Good job! Any sequel planned?

Please continue the story.

Whatsa shai hulud...

Great story! Waiting for part 2!!!

Very interesting

Very good one! Thanx for a good ending and not just repetitive noise!

How can this be part 2? It is not the same story!

for the life of me i can't find any reason why a young guy would have any reservations about sharing a bed with that girl, alien or not. it defies male human nature

Enjoyed this story 👍…

Ok

You need to do a part two, and end it in a GOOD way. Please.

Alright, this guy was as dumb as a bag of rocks. She should have just said hey, do me or I die. Too much repetitiveness. Good story if shortened and refined.

Nice story 👍...

Geeze idiots get RID of the damn captions. Are you even using autoincorrect? If you can’t fix these problems you aren’t qualified to have a channel like this.

Now he will never just go to bed and get to sleep. She has been changed and his real trouble begain.

She can still get pregnant ? How to deal w/ the instant of joy & passion that results in conception?

Nice story and good ending, you must fight the struggle to have a good life.. cA

Dude, cut it down to 15 minutes. The whole confusion, repeated explanation, and again confusion is just foolish beyond belief. understanding when something is in heat like a cat is not confusing or hard to understand once an explanation is given. Even 15 minutes would be a stretch without adding some other depth like her avoiding proximity for a time initially without explanation.

Homan will send her back to her home keep this very quiet

Nice story, I liked the bit of tongue in cheek aspect.

Another Tease!

Thanx! I followed their beginning and now I’m curious about their journey! Good one!

Very comforting story. Had me worried for a bit but it was sweet. Thanx!

“Thing” the hand.

I’ve seen quite a few of these videos and they are getting a bit repetitive. Alien turns up to a lone man in the woods with hunters after her. The recurring motif in these.

I think Cyrus is a rake who is going to score. Sad.!

Good story! I believe we all know the meaning of “Bioluminescense” now!

Nice loving story. Reminds me have what some inter-racial marriages can and have become sometimes.....

A little more story,if you don't mind!

Part 2 please

Why does the video stop

It was a great story BUT, you need to put the work into correcting all the words on the screen. For example, Adrian is the masculine spelling and Adrienne is the feminine. There were a couple of times I thought you introduced a new character to the story.

Great story, sad ending ❤

She looks a bit like kaley Couco, from the big bang theory

That was really good. I can’t imagine what courage it took for Lyra to believe in him. He was genuine and guarded her, body and soul. That doesn’t happen often in relationships. Someone usually has an agenda. Sad.