This is a really nice rough draft story. However, it is disjointed in chronology. It needed to be edited and re-arranged before posting. Lazy writing but it is free and left me smiling.

The AI has this sequence all mixed up.

That sucked

No small Island, jumped into a "Harrad Experiment" within 8 or 9 minutes to parents in 10. Story telling in light speed, the story, being over before it began, only to repeat it for real it seems. Disjointed sensuality

To treat 😢😢

THE STORY DOES NOT FLOW RIGHT ??

HERE AGAIN 5 YEARS AND ONLY 1 PREGNACY ??

cool story

Cool story line

A race-mixing fantasy, poorly executed.

This story is badly disjointed and mismatched. Early on in the story the speaker talks about the twins and the neighbour, Mrs. Henderson, who has become their grandmother. Later on the speaker talks about Zara's pregnancy. Then further on the speaker then talks about Michael and Zara in the pool for the first time then their first intimate time, followed by the birth of the twins.

Is this a movie as well, please?

Good upload…abrupt ending…story incomplete…

5:25 story begins to repeat itself

Amazing❤

Shaabash Ali