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@CAV1956 3 сағат бұрын
story had to many holes nothing tied anything together
@NianzeuvomNde 13 сағат бұрын
I am #TeamHarem. Why choose when you can have it all? 😂🤣
@antoniolourenco8206 15 сағат бұрын
Bla Bla Bla Bla bla
@raya7624 21 сағат бұрын
No ending again to a story. This is happening far to often.
@sorryNOTsorry11 Күн бұрын
O great another half story ugh !
@Last_n_Line99 Күн бұрын
What? The emperor father didn’t give his three daughters to Samuel as his wives? What kind of a human/alien story is this?
@NianzeuvomNde Күн бұрын
🤣😂
@MK-tc1on Күн бұрын
Yo people, we are dying. But fear not, we have one artifact crystal that can save us!!. Let's load it up in one ship crewed by one person and let her wander around to find this human we need. What could go wrong?
@edmanning8545 Күн бұрын
story is disjointed...first the council tells him he is the "leader" and the wives must obey him.....and seeing that this is a "warrior" empire it makes sense that the strict hierarchy is observed. Then our hero turns into some Beta-Bob when dealing with his conquests and asking for respect. I am only in 12 minutes and I am waiting for the "we are in this together" and "mutual respect" nonsense.How about going full alpha to establish control, put the wives and the empire in its place...then you get to use the velvet glove to soften the whole situation.....These gals have no reason to respect this guy and they are going to see his victory over the warlord as a fluke and conspire to undue him at every turn.....sorry this is grade school writing.
@blackenedmerlin2076 Күн бұрын
from an interstellar spacefaring civilization to the life of a medieval peasant
@chrishenny158 Күн бұрын
The story could be improved by adding in missing links between when she arrives and when Lyra opens the box . etc. several places are missing a link between sections.. The section on repairing the crystal should come after the introduction of each other. There seems to be duplication and poor editing.
@Confessionofcheating Күн бұрын
The mechanic's daughter helps a guy with a flat tire, not knowing he's a millionaire, and falls in love with her. The sun hung
@secretus.1234 2 күн бұрын
Where does the "marry the 3 daughters" come in play 😅 , atleast change the title so it fits the story
@jasonprince3093 2 күн бұрын
Beautiful story
@candrerc25 2 күн бұрын
Kinda weird and boring.
@unclej7842 Күн бұрын
Redundant and vague.
@jeffreyschuler7271 2 күн бұрын
The aliens look like children, kinda sick
@BubbleOnPlumb 2 күн бұрын
OK he thinks of these girls as his daughters? That's all well and good but then we get to time stamp 23:05 and he starts thinking about how he will be having having children with them in the future? I know this is all AI written and AI read but this is the kinds of thing that can get these video's banned on KZbin if this kind of think keeps popping up.
@Last_n_Line99 2 күн бұрын
So what is it John? Are they your daughter 10:57 or do you what to have children with them 23:17? Or maybe both? You already live in a commune separated from all other life.
@ScottRoberts-s3s 2 күн бұрын
So hat did this story have to do with a star ship / nudist colony? They didn't explore the planet nude
@jacobblacketer5712 2 күн бұрын
A wonderful story, but I need more of this story.... Do they go to space, does John confess his love form the twins..do es he start a family with them.... There's a lot of opportunities with the story I would love to hear more about it
@LUCKYPUCK-007 2 күн бұрын
Sorry these young girls, having children with them. Sounds a little Pedo to me guys think twice. And a bit boring.
@brianrichmond3023 2 күн бұрын
Why didn’t John go back and check out the spaceship? There may have been a brand new John Deere tractor in there to help with the farm. Or did he just use the twins to pull his plow to save on fuel? Just askin.
@ArtemMelanich 2 күн бұрын
Because AIs are dumb like that, they often miss stuff because they need to follow a prompt.
@unclej7842 2 күн бұрын
He could use John's Dears. Good idea.
@davea6314 2 күн бұрын
Why do you keep using the last name "Carter" in your stories for the male hero, and the name "Ilara" for the female alien he will impregnate?
@duanekamstra8890 2 күн бұрын
You've probably found a little insight into the author's psychology 😅
@andrewhill1965 2 күн бұрын
I just wish these stories had endings. They all leave you hanging
@DavidDavidunderthebridgeChampi 2 күн бұрын
Few of these stories take into account Alien Immigration Services showing up. Their damaged ship would be a real financial and scientific asset in most cases. The emotional stories are okay.
@brianrichmond3023 2 күн бұрын
Yeah! Where’s border patrol when you need them? Have these girls been properly vetted and did they get all their shots?
@unclej7842 2 күн бұрын
Biden gave them a phone, stamps, and housing in addition to a stipend.
@jameshanlon5689 Сағат бұрын
Alien Immigration Services as in The Men in Black. LOL 😝
@rayairey5770 2 күн бұрын
Hey Sci-Fi Reddit....... You are nothing but WANKERS...... Ask me Y I said that.........
@frankydaulman2291 2 күн бұрын
1 minute of plot and I of dialogue, repeatedly paraphrased ad nausea 😕
@tcraig1963 3 күн бұрын
Another click bait story It would have done well on its own no need to deceive
@rayairey5770 3 күн бұрын
This is so BORING I just turned it off....
@jimcramer2559 3 күн бұрын
Story no endi🥴
@darkshadow9291 3 күн бұрын
I'm surprised the humans didn't start throwing rotten veggies and fruit at them
@paulward4268 3 күн бұрын
Well.....interesting, but.... Who was Cain ? What was it that Zira sensed in him? And qhat about the strange creature that hunted them? What was it after? Why did Zira sense anger in it's chaotic mind? And where were they going to go, now that they had got away? Where did Cain come from? Would Jack help take Zira home?? Or was she going to be content to stay with Jack and wander space forever?? Good....but unfinished. Too many loose ends I'm afraid.
@michaelmanculich4004 3 күн бұрын
Thank you for a good story 😊
@LeslieWatson-t5f 3 күн бұрын
I enjoyed listening to this one 👍…
@Urathear1434 3 күн бұрын
I am getting tired of the misrepresentation of content material through misleading labels.
@rayairey5770 3 күн бұрын
PLEEASE........GET A NEW Ai NARRATOR. ONE THAT UNDERSTANDS ENGLISH LANGUAGE.... This video might be worth a rating above 2/10 only IF the on screen transcript actually didn't piss people like me off.....
@ToPlease 3 күн бұрын
Welcome to Babylon 5. 😅😉
@rayairey5770 4 күн бұрын
Your Ai narrator can't spell for nuts, as in it's bloody brain dead! The word "daze" is far different than 'days'........ Get rid of the Ai, get a new one.......or a human narrator, fluent in English language.
@CO84trucker 4 күн бұрын
If I hosted these alien processes, I'd entertain them with alien invasion movies!
@seanskelton2007 3 күн бұрын
you can take the alien processes ill take the princesses :)
@davemi00 4 күн бұрын
Jason the ultimate hero
@donaldboyd7496 4 күн бұрын
No good deed goes unpunished
@HamiltonRowan-r6z 4 күн бұрын
Didn't Marcus and Salira have a previous relationship? I would enjoy having a relationship with one of these alien women.
@Confessionofcheating 4 күн бұрын
"You tell the story so skillfully, it feels like I'm in it! The part at 3:15 was so impressive! 👏"
@Confessionofcheating 4 күн бұрын
Every time you release a new video, I can't wait! The story at 4:00 was really impressive! 😲"
@JovieBulawan 4 күн бұрын
So true. Love the ears.
@paulkarch3318 5 күн бұрын
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@sillyone52062 5 күн бұрын
Why does she look like Daenerys Targaryen?
@leswatson8563 5 күн бұрын
I enjoyed listening to this story 👍...
@fjdarling 6 күн бұрын
Beautiful thumbnail Picture. Unfortunately, we humans are probably worse than those Aliens that sold that girl in the picture. We have about 300,000 Human children, sold into Slavery, Prostitution and other illegal activities in the United States. So much for the human compassion of your audience, I guess.
@tiptondavid 6 күн бұрын
Getting pregnant by a ceremonial toast is a novel device for literary license but a normal conception is more fun!
@michaelcauser474 6 күн бұрын
Story great. Voice over very good. Subtitles on the screen - quite honestly not up to standard. Please get them proof read before you publish on the internet.