i tried to write backwards. i failed

not happy with the thumbnail. ill find a better one. the name of the chapter is coming home? but you are not allowed to use question marks in the title for some reason.

what i wanted to say but couldmt articulate about why many gnostics are so left leaning is this; that they are so caught up in the spiritual, experiencing a spiritual idealism on a regular basis that they project that idealism on the physical world expecting the oneness they experience to be tranfered onto the physical world. which obviously can never work out.

the thumbnail picture is supposed to represent the village father Ushemé... pronounced "youshemay". i had envisioned him to look like a tall jesus.

still a couple mistakes... corrected in the main text. also forgot to change how she pronounes ödes brytare.... pronounced "oodis britary"

ya ya... i know jesus practiced something resembling communism as leftists are quick to point out but you cant run a government on that. same leftists would want nothing to do with a theocracy i am guessing(except maybe the ones who endlessly profess their love for palestine.

Burdoc tells a parable... would it be considered a parable?

mistake corrected in original text. mylo looses his wallet yet still has some money in his "wallet".. changed to "pocket"

not one... but two.

i saw another error. originally captain Akir"s name was captain joe. i saw one instance where it did not get changed.

i am having trouble getting her to pronounce the name "Rébor" to my liking so you will see 2 different variations. sorry for any confusion

less glitches one or two mistakes. getting better.

still not perfect. getting better. she tends to say the word "dash" when ever there is a dash. i missed one or two and missed changing ushemes name twice so she pronounces it incorrectly there

not perfect but what can one expect for free?

when msword read outloud lags,sometimes it will duplicate the last sentence. soon all these will be redone with a good TTS program.

There is an slight error during Mylos conversation with the inkeeper which may contrast with an earlier reference to where mylo is from. i have corrected it on the text version.

Karra and Donna Douglas would say....no they aren't imagination.

hahahahahaha...well said....