I love that Telemachus is taller than Odysseus. Makes it funny to think that he's just shorter than everyone else
@that.one.weird.trashrat8 күн бұрын
help i was watching a 'ICHBW' animatic, then clicked on this and the audio timing matched up perfectly
@C.DWoods12 күн бұрын
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@38.thachthaolehuynh2015 күн бұрын
I pove how you make Athena static and has all that thumbnail(?), really show she is injured and weak right now
@lariyahankel54316 күн бұрын
I like how Odysseus is shorter then his son
@A_cool_username_1dk16 күн бұрын
WOAH THIS IS SO GOOD
@MarcelineCruze16 күн бұрын
I love how you showed the conversation go from slightly aggressive to gentle when talking to Athena. I imagine Odysseus might have really wanted to lay into her for all the suffering he has endured and for the way she left him, but hearing Athena spouting the same dream Odysseus lost along the way... made him realize that while he has become far too jaded to make that world happen himself that he could take one step towards it by forgiving Athena and wishing her the best of luck in bringing it about.
@teddywojtek16 күн бұрын
Yesss! That’s exactly how I meant it! I can’t imagine him being mad at Athena, especially after he pleaded with Poseidon “It’s been 12 years - we’re both hurting from losses - maybe you can learn to forgive”. You could make the argument that his transformation in 600 strike is all-encompassing, but I choose to not believe that looking how gentle he still is with Telemachus and Penelope. There’s still some gentleness in him. At the very least Athena bailed Telemachus out several times so he must respect that.
@MarcelineCruze16 күн бұрын
@@teddywojtek I feel the same. Though when it comes to him pleading with Poseidon to learn to forgive I do also feel as though it is at least half Odysseus attempting to trick Poseidon. Odysseus by that point has begun to believe that Poseidon and Athena were right, that mercy is ruthlessness on oneself. Some part of him still clearly hopes it could all end peacefully, but I wonder if things had gone differently and Poseidon had accepted mercy in the final hour whether Odysseus would have it in him to accept it by that point. That maybe he would have taken advantage of that mercy and enacted ruthlessness if only to prove to himself that what happened to him wasn't his own fault, but rather just the way of the world. That mercy would always be met with misery.
@teddywojtek16 күн бұрын
Ooooh, I love that theory! I always felt he is so desperate to go home that even though he has mostly stopped believing in mercy he still tries it, because what is he gonna do against a god who drowned most of his fleet? At that point he did not stand a chance, so it was more desperation speaking and Poseidon still refusing as Odysseus was at his lowest most humble point is part of what drove him over the final edge
@MarcelineCruze15 күн бұрын
@ Gods, I love this story so much for reasons like this. Epic's telling of it is so filled with emotion, poetry, and symbolism that despite talking about the same minutes long song it is so easy to draw this breadth of understanding and empathy for the characters involved. For as much as you can draw about where Odysseus was in that song emotionally, you can draw almost as much from Poseidon or Athena as well. Truly a masterpiece. 🥰
@addysonphelps550716 күн бұрын
Overall, the animation and design looks phenomenal, but I have one problem with this. It is supposed to be Athena and Odysseus and you made Athena way too tall in the actual thing the goddess Athena and all of the God and goddesses are supposed to be the exact same size as humansthey just have powers nothing special not bigger or not smaller. That’s my only problem with this other than that, it’s just fine so a little tip for you watch the actual life before you make it.
@teddywojtek16 күн бұрын
Thanks for the comment! <3 I’m not really going off the EPIC canon interpretation with my designs. Have you ever seen the series Blood of Zeus? I’m more inspired by that. Gods can also shape-shift in my canon so be prepared :D
@Tessa-q1z15 күн бұрын
@@teddywojtek yeah, because in Percy Jackson the gods appear 20 ft tall in their thrones, but appear as normal humans when speaking one on one, but I feel like the gods would be excessively taller then the mortals, so good detail!
@jadehill449117 күн бұрын
Her jaw needs to move on a point right under where her ear is. Otherwise, the moving mouth has a little of a South Park vibe.
@teddywojtek17 күн бұрын
Hahaha thanks! That’s some valid feedback but I’m not sure I have the patience to implement it 😆 I have tried in the past and it ends up looking messy, so south park it is
@just_foxy3517 күн бұрын
bro why telemarketing kinda look like daisuke here I can't unsee it xD
@teddywojtek17 күн бұрын
I have genuinely no idea who that is, but I will take it as a compliment :D
@fnaf1fan80416 күн бұрын
Hes from mouthwashing
@teddywojtek16 күн бұрын
Hahahaha omgg that’s so true, I can’t unsee it either now 😆
@CarsonSager-xj6rj17 күн бұрын
Guys if your wondering which wa sis which the top is rough draft and bottom is final animatic because they accidentally deleted the file of the top one before posting but in a panicked rush they made the bottom one because they have a video date so yeah
@teddywojtek17 күн бұрын
Very good summary! That’s exactly what happened and it has nothing to do with the fact that people look at the top of the screen first 😅
@stroodledoodles17 күн бұрын
You did such a good job at the lip syncing! Also Odysseus wiping Telemachus' tears at 2:32 was so sweet 🥺
@izzybella343317 күн бұрын
Telemechus being hesitant oh my heart 😢
@Madhav-xh4cj17 күн бұрын
3:14 Okay.. what's with short Ody? Like.. every animator has a trend to make him short. I can see him shorter than Posiedon, or other Olympians because.. God>Human.. okay.. Circe also makes sense, and maybe Eurylochus too. And it's actually cute seeing him shorter than Penelope, but... You made him shorter that his own son? That's criminal. 😂 And I don't hate it even a little 👍
@teddywojtek17 күн бұрын
Hahahaha such a fair point! 😆 I have several explanations here: - I am of the mindset that children usually grow to be taller than their parents (plus I am also in the tall Penelope gang, plus divine lineage) - Odysseus is known for his wit for a reason ;) - I wanted Telemachus to be almost like a lanky late-teenager - aggressively an adult, but still kinda babyfaced. But let’s be real, he might be Odysseus’ boy and sweetest joy he’s known, but that is a full adult man at 20 years old
@Garanseho16 күн бұрын
There's a joke among the cast that Jorge, who voices Odysseus, is the shortest male member of the cast, so the animators make him short as a reference to that joke. That's why he's shorter than Polites, Eurylochus, Tiresias, etc.
@foolslayer941615 күн бұрын
In the actual Odyssey, Odysseus is quite short.
@shadowstar861915 күн бұрын
@@foolslayer9416 Wow, we got the artist's whole list of reasons, a joke aimed at Jorge, and to cap it all off, lore accuracy!
@mysteroads559813 күн бұрын
Yeah, if I remember right, OG Odysseus was described as being slightly shorter than average, but with broad, strong shoulders (which makes sense for an archer! 🏹)
@alyarafaie279417 күн бұрын
This is so sweet 🥲🥲🥲 I like how you made Tele back up and is hesitant to let Ody closer, until Ody patches his injuries up dawhhh
@teddywojtek17 күн бұрын
Awwwh thank youuu! I mean Tele has just witnessed this man go on a murderous rampage, I’d be at least a little wary of his intentions at first.
@Laralovelyorsa17 күн бұрын
This make me cry i love it 10/10!
@FairFeline18 күн бұрын
Absolutely adore the detail of her crouching inside the room
@teddywojtek18 күн бұрын
Thank youuu!! Finally my fellow tall girls get representation!
@SimsAllAround5 ай бұрын
Love it
@callmethecommentcountess93299 ай бұрын
That never happened well and history
@ilovecupcakes6549 ай бұрын
I love the detail in this animatic, it's so good, you should get more views
@callmethecommentcountess93299 ай бұрын
My mother knows exactly how you feel
@malaysiaawung3806 Жыл бұрын
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@sno3b4ll2 жыл бұрын
1:13 this memory of Hamilton touches me so much, especially that moment he smiles out of gratitude
@Mimikyu0072 жыл бұрын
I LOVE YOUR style!! And your interpretation of the song! So goood
@elizabethschuyler70622 жыл бұрын
Fun fact: But Eliza was 3 months pregnant with her 8th child at the time of Philip’s death. In June of 1802, she has the baby and she named him Philip Hamilton ll, after his brother he will never meet😭💔
@DNiiii002 жыл бұрын
I just saw all your animations right now I love all of them 😭💖 You're very talented 👏🏻🌟
@teddywojtek2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! I know it's been years but I do have a Hurricane animatic in the works. Now I feel like actually finishing it :D
@DNiiii002 жыл бұрын
@@teddywojtek I'll be waiting for it 💖
@ciaral23532 жыл бұрын
This animatic is beautiful! I love how you showed the mixture of anger, sadness and heartbreak Eliza was feeling. It feels very realistic. Eliza is also very beautiful in your art style. ❤️💖💝💗💘💞💓💕
@Natalia-qt1uv2 жыл бұрын
I Love it
@sno3b4ll2 жыл бұрын
Really good work! Loved it :)
@daphneartist11862 жыл бұрын
Wow🤧
@sno3b4ll2 жыл бұрын
Very beautiful :)
@Gh0st.5553 жыл бұрын
proof my humors broken
@teddywojtek3 жыл бұрын
I hope you mean that in a good way :D
@Gh0st.5552 жыл бұрын
@@teddywojtek I do
@Gh0st.5552 жыл бұрын
@@teddywojtek I usualy laugh at the worst jokes now all i laugh at is excelent animatics like this
@Gh0st.5552 жыл бұрын
@@teddywojtek Mainly because the funny scenes and the ones that dont realy mean to be funny but are
@madelinegauthierseneca42513 жыл бұрын
I was trying to sing along but then I realized I don't know the workshop version 🥲
@elijahcrawford77943 жыл бұрын
Probably the best animatic Burr I’ve seen so far
@ar-twinklereynolds98903 жыл бұрын
can i ask what (workshop edition) means?
@teddywojtek3 жыл бұрын
Of course! The workshop version is the show before it went on Broadway. It has some differences such as songs that were cut from the Broadway version and some different lyrics. This song is mostly the same though, I only used it so it wouldn't get taken down back when yourube was really strict about copyright.
@ar-twinklereynolds98903 жыл бұрын
@@teddywojtek Oh, Thank you! i really appreciate it! <3
@stephichu3 жыл бұрын
This is so underrated! Omg! Great job!
@wutyouwant65493 жыл бұрын
Dude thoses hands are legendary
@wutyouwant65493 жыл бұрын
It doesn’t matter if u don’t like the art but give this artist the credit the idea and the editing
@amehil83773 жыл бұрын
I love how you interpreted they gasp in such a different unique way! It’s one of shock on the actress part! I love it!
@teddywojtek3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I actually brainstormed different ideas for it. I wanted to do something a little different than everyone else, but for it to still have an emotional impact.
@queenliyah51623 жыл бұрын
😍😍😍❤❤❤❤😇
@imaniislander7553 жыл бұрын
this looks great
@sch32433 жыл бұрын
God, this is amazing! I love how Burr was basically spying Hamilton through the window, then He just proceeds to jump out of it and they just start talking like nothing happened, also, when you made the transition of Hamilton talking to Burr to him talking to Angelica and then Eliza, it was great, good job💟✨
@teddywojtek3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I imagined that Burr is kind of obsessed with what Hamilton is doing and secretly follows him around. And Hamilton is so excited to talk about his ideas that he is amused by this realization, but doesn't really care.
@basicallystupid70803 жыл бұрын
Regular. *HIGHLIGGGGGGHHHHHTTTTTS!* This one: *highlights?* (And everything sounds a bit weirder but cooler)
@taylorloudermanfan56473 жыл бұрын
😍😍😍😍
@jaidenillness3 жыл бұрын
that first ‘damn’ tho
@taylorloudermanfan56474 жыл бұрын
I FEEL SO BAD CAUSE I AM TRYİNG TO MAKE AN ANİMATİC BUT NOW I SAW YOUR PERFECT STUFF... FINDING THAT I SUCK (Btw ur vids are so good)
@teddywojtek4 жыл бұрын
Thank you, but don't think like that. I understand that other people's art can be intimidating (I get depressed whenever I visit instagram :D), but comparing yourself to others leads nowhere. If you just start somewhere, you'll soon get to a level where other people look at your art the same way as well (they probably already do, we are our own worst critics). I'd love to see your animatics and honestly, it's one of the best ways to practice. If it makes you feel better, I go to an art college and have had a lot of drawing and anatomy lessons. But looking at my old animatics, even this one, I feel like there are so many things I'd fix. Shading, anatomy, symmetry... Sorry for the rant. Please don't ever let others discourage you :)
@taylorloudermanfan56474 жыл бұрын
Tysm I am nearly crying here🥺🥺 you are talented and so kind
@raahimarizwan67264 жыл бұрын
The drawing, the art style, the simplicity and YET, the detail! Everything about this animatic is amazing and conveys all emotions in the song perfectly! ✨~ UNDERRATED ~✨