Nice English version. I saw a lot of miss interpretation at some part. In my opinion maybe "My child" would be nice. I know that the lyrics is about conversation between God and us, but you know English is sometimes filled with ambiguity, so that's my opinion. I use Free Translation Technique. Instead of directly translating "๋์ ์ฌ๋" literally as "My love" both times, I adapted the phrase to "My child" in the first instance and "Your love" in the second. This ensures the message aligns with the theological and relational context of the text. ์ฒซ๋ฒ์งธ "๋์ ์ฌ๋"์ -> My Child ์ด๋์? ใ ใ ใ ใ
@WinnieWorship4 ะบาฏะฝ ะฑาฑััะฝ
@@ay4nam1 Oh, right! Instead of "my love", "my child" can also be a good interpretation since the word โmy loveโ appears more than once. When I made the English lyrics, I tried to make it as close to the original as possible, so I wrote the lyrics as "my love" without much hesitation. I think the issue of this song is that the subject changes from God at the beginning to us in the middle. Thank you for your comment and the good suggestion๐
@JaeChung-z6h9 ะบาฏะฝ ะฑาฑััะฝ
To English speakers for better understating this song, the beginning part is God's speaking to us, and then the song changes to our prayers.. Simply, this song is a conversation between the God and us.. Some "you"s are just us.. some "You"s are the God in this lyrics.. When we say our God, we use capital letters..
@@WinnieWorship ๋ค.. ํ๊ฐ์ง๋ง ๋์.. Even when you fail me์์ Me๋ ๋๋ฌธ์๋ก ๋ฐ๊ฟ์ฃผ์ธ์.. ํ๋๋์ ์นญํ๋ ๋ชจ๋ ๋จ์ด๋ค์ ๋๋ฌธ์๋ก ๋ฐ๊พธ์๋ฉด ์กฐ๊ธ๋ ์ดํด์ ๋์์ด ๋ ๊ฒ๋๋ค.. ์ธ์นญ ์ธ์๋ ๋ชจ๋ ํ๋๋์ ๋ปํ๋ ๋จ์ด my god -> my God, only one -> only One ๋ฑ๋ฑ..
It's so nice to hear your voice again, Winnie. I missed you. Thank you for this beautiful song. Soon... Then the seventh angel sounded, and there were loud voices in heaven, saying, โThe kingdom of the world has become the kingdom of our Lord and of His Christ, and He will reign forever and ever.โ Revelation 11:15
@WinnieWorship2 ะฐะน ะฑาฑััะฝ
Beautiful and powerful Bible verse! Thanks for sharing. ๐๐
@kenoshaann49943 ะฐะน ะฑาฑััะฝ
You did this beautifully. ๐ซถ๐ฝ
@WinnieWorship3 ะฐะน ะฑาฑััะฝ
@@kenoshaann4994 Thank you so much! May God bless you๐
@guest22773 ะฐะน ะฑาฑััะฝ
Lord, please protect Your people in this world. So many are suffering from upheavals and challenges.
Thank God! God is a God of grace, mercy, and love! God uses your beautiful voice, like a voice from heaven, to help me get close to and talk to God when I am alone. God Bless you.๐ป
@WinnieWorship6 ะฐะน ะฑาฑััะฝ
@@wanivy57 Oh I am so touched by your comment. Thank you very much for your encouragement! I felt Godโs love through your message. May God continue to bless and keep you! ๐